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November 24, 2023 at 3:50 pm #166719
Tren
“Fine, though if you start coughing real bad, your coming out.” Tren turned and walked into the the burning palace, Callie in tow. “Fire Face! Fire Face!” He called. “Is there anything this cat likes besides fire? Anything we can use?”
"You need French Toast."
November 24, 2023 at 3:52 pm #166720Sorry if my posts sound weird, I’m a bit distracted.
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November 24, 2023 at 3:53 pm #166721That’s fine! I’ve made plenty of those posts during the attack of headaches.
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November 24, 2023 at 4:01 pm #166722Ellis
“Yeah. Kate, Nahim, and Nora are fine. The Queen is injured. There’s also an imposter Lillening on the loose being chased by two sixteen year-olds.”
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“Thats fine, I guess.” I said.
I had to think for a moment.
“He likes to hide in boxes and cabinets.” I said, trying to think of where he could be. “He’ll also come to me if I yell ‘danger’, but then he usually spits more fire.”
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November 24, 2023 at 4:08 pm #166724Tren
Boxes. Cabinets. The kitchen to the dining hall had plenty of those, plus food.
“Follow me.” Tren navigated through the smoke and flames. “Tel me when you see anything from the dining hall, I need to get to the kitchen, he could be there.”
"You need French Toast."
November 24, 2023 at 4:11 pm #166726November 24, 2023 at 4:22 pm #166727Carrie
I tried to see through the smoke, looking in all directions for the kitten.
“Fire Face!” I called out a bit harshly, as I then remembered, “He eats carrots. I swear he’ll go after one, even if it’s a million miles away.”
Though I was a bit embarrassed about the possibility my cat abandoned me for a carrot.
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November 24, 2023 at 4:28 pm #166729Tren
Carrots! Carrots of all things!
“Well, then he’ll definitely be in the kitchen.” Tren tripped over something and slammed into the floor. Lifting himself half up he groped for what he tripped over, it was a table leg. “This way, I think the kitchen is this way, but if it’s not, we’ll have to follow the walls. Call him again!”
"You need French Toast."
November 24, 2023 at 4:32 pm #166730I have to go, I’m sorry. I’ll be back in a bit to reply.
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November 24, 2023 at 5:13 pm #166731November 24, 2023 at 5:18 pm #166732Carrie
“Fire Face!” I called, then after stifling a cough, I shouted, “I have carrots!” I then felt a sense of guilt after lying. As we made out way through what we thought to be the path to the kitchen, I was sure I heard a small, faint squeak.
“I think I heard something.” I said.
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November 24, 2023 at 5:19 pm #166733Kari
It was a relief to be outside, away from the fire and fighting. Kari spotted Hugo and Ottoline off to one side, next to a horse (I think Marcurious was in the form of a horse most recently, am I correct? If not, @jonas can change it in the doc).
“Hugo! Ottoline! I’m glad you two are okay!” Kari called as she hurried to join them. “Have you seen anyone else? Or are they all still inside?”
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November 24, 2023 at 5:32 pm #166735Tren
Tren stared intently into the smoke.
“All I see is smoke and a purple blob.”
“That’s him! Fire Face!” The cat bounded up, squeaking.
“A purple cat, what next? Okay, grab him and let’s get out of here.”
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November 24, 2023 at 5:41 pm #166736@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer
Hugo
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Ottoline wasn’t to mad, thats good. As a matter of fact she seemed relived. Hugo gingerly touched his hair and was relived to find that it was still on his head, his arm hair though, was singed badly.
He sat up and took a few more deep breaths, and coughed up a bit of smoke. He was lucky to be alive. Hugo looked at his clothes and realized that he was still wearing the suit from the masquerade ball, it wasn’t burned, but his arms had burn marks.
He looked up at Ottoline, “I…I’m sorry, that was sort of dumb. But hey! I saved someone so you cant stay that mad at me….”
Ottoline glared at him.
He cleared the smoke out of his throat and tried to make eye contact.
“Ottoline I’m sorry I scared you, I really am.”
She wiped her eyes and began to cry. Hugo sat down next to her and pulled her into a hug.
“Its OK. Everyone will be OK…”
“BOOM!” The roof of the castle had fell in!
He turned her away from the flaming ruins and let her rest her head on his shoulder as she cried.
Footsteps sounded behind them and they turned to see Kari, who was covered in ash and soot, rushed over to them.
“Hugo! Ottoline! I’m glad you two are okay! Have you seen anyone else? Or are they all still inside?”
“I think most of them got out,” he said, trying to cover up his burned hands, “I got one person out…. Do you know how it started?”
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