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October 21, 2023 at 4:15 pm #159819
Oh, yeah, since I posted a drawing, I forgot to say how tall Ellis is. I’m gonna say a little over six feet. Maybe 6’ 2”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 21, 2023 at 4:16 pm #159820October 21, 2023 at 4:17 pm #159821Oh yeah. I missed that to. Yes young adult. I have an exact age, but I can’t remember what it is. I think 20 maybe.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 21, 2023 at 4:17 pm #159822October 21, 2023 at 4:18 pm #159823Lol whenever a character is over 20 I’m like ‘oh they’re so old they practically have one foot in the grave!’ Lol 😂😂
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October 21, 2023 at 4:19 pm #159824I was imagining a forest, probably only because that’s where the house was before. I didn’t specifically mention the surroundings in Ellis’s POV, so other people could change that if they want to. I did mention dirt though, so wherever Ellis landed has grass and soil.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 21, 2023 at 4:20 pm #159826October 21, 2023 at 4:23 pm #159827How old is Zahlin though? Given his description it sounds like he’s way older than any of the other characters, which might result in some funny interactions.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 21, 2023 at 4:26 pm #159828He can use his planet’s magic system, but I haven’t figured it out yet, so we’ll just say it’s not working in this dimension lol.
I assume he’s in Celestiar? Conviction’s magic is working, but I guess that can be due to the fact that he is a Arcweaving construct, as opposed to a caster, so he isn’t actively using Arcweaving. Good thing I didn’t put Kate or someone else with direct access to magic in.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 21, 2023 at 4:39 pm #159830And…I also didn’t mention Ellis’s eye color (although it can’t be too important.) His eyes are normally blue, except when he’s powered up by Conviction, in which case they glow green.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 21, 2023 at 4:53 pm #159831Yes, he’s in Celestiar.
Erm, we’ll say he’s around 32, take or leave a year, but his age is highly subject to change.
But yeah, he looks older than he is, and since all the other characters seem to be children or young adults, they could mistake him for being ‘old’ lol.
I’m not sure how he’d react to this.
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October 21, 2023 at 7:37 pm #159842@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
Who’s going next? I can’t, because my character basically has to wait until the rest of the group leaves the house. Unless he just goes on ahead and doesn’t meet up with the rest of them until they get to…wherever they’re going? That doesn’t sound like as much fun though.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksOctober 21, 2023 at 10:36 pm #159851@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
Lillen.
I’ve heard this question asked, and I feel I must answer it, lest the grace of the flower be shamed.
Milk-skinned are her people, with pastel eyes that can tell no lies. Sweet are her flowers, that adorn the land all the year round. Tis a tropical place, with winter rainy but ever blooming. Tis a peaceful place, with never the sound of war a-booming. Hearken people! Do you not here the sound of the birds with sweet songs that ripple through their throats like the waters of laughing brooks? Hearken people! Do you not hear the cry of the fawn? New life is born in the forest.
Lillen’s cities are made of magic. Her great Queen sees to the land. Her great King sees to the people. Her people gather fruits from the forest, they carve their necessities out of wood. They draw water from streams. They take from nature, but never more than their do share.
But under the sky of fantasy light pink, white blood has now been spilled. Under watch of bright white sun, of pale blue moon, and twinkling star, the forest is torn and scarred. Fire burns. Water dries. Plants die. Creatures flee. Lillennings are murdered. But those pastel eyes, though filled with the opaque blue liquid that flows down their pinked cheeks, can do nothing. How many of the bravest have already parished? They are not trained in war. How long will the dragons rampage their land unhindered?
Will pastel colors turn black? Will opaque liquid turn dark? Will fruits of bright color, shaded by those sweet green leaves, strival and die? Will those white tan-spotted deer leave forever? Will the birds never again open their beaks?
The people the Queen calls are their only hope.
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October 21, 2023 at 11:14 pm #159854October 22, 2023 at 8:37 am #159857Yeah, nice job!
They are not trained in war. How long will the dragons rampage their land unhindered?
If these people think that all the people they pulled in are trained in combat, they’re in for a rude awakening lol!
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