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November 23, 2023 at 12:25 pm #166344
They can fight Jeptune! She’s a shapeshifter slyiad (don’t google it, you’ll get nothing) her original form is a purple, orange and black dryad. (you can google that)
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November 23, 2023 at 2:48 pm #166349@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone I missed:
Since I didn’t have a description of Snake when I introduced him and I know some new people would probably appreciate it, here it is:
He is twenty feet tall standing on two feet, seven and a half standing on four, and head to tail he’s about twenty-three feet (with the extra length added by his tail). He wears camouflage-colored, military-style clothing with several utility belts. He has dark brown hair that’s a bit long and extends down to the end of his neck, I think, and wears a gray bandana that covers his eyebrows and most of his forehead. His eyes are blue. Oh, and he has facial hair, although it’s short.
You know what? If any of you have ever played Super Smash Bros (Specifically the titles Brawl or Ultimate), my Snake is directly pulled from the character by the same name there. He just has a tail, wings, magic, and the ability to breathe ice.
I might RP as him in a sec.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
November 23, 2023 at 3:25 pm #166352@everyone
Snake
Great, a fire.
And an attack.
He went hunting for ten minutes and all the fun stuff went on without him?
Talk about rude…….
Snake roared into the sky as he landed, his tail dispatching one of the enemies. (one of you can choose who it is. He didn’t kill him/her, just knocked them to the side.)
Then a song rose from the chaos. He couldn’t tell where it was from, but several voices joined in, and these villains reacted strongly to it.
He couldn’t sing–at least, his growly voice would probably make this song worse, not better–but he could put out some of the fire.
He blasted ice in the directions it seemed the worst. Extinguished, just like that.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
November 23, 2023 at 4:30 pm #166354YOU DIDN’T KILL THE QUEEN!!!!!!!!!! <3333333 I AM SO HAPPY!!!!!!! :)))
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I missed EVERYTHING again 🙁 but lucky for you, I’ll show mercy XD because pics aren’t working lol
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 23, 2023 at 4:40 pm #166356Ottoline
Her world was in flames. Literally.
Smoke strangled her lungs, the screams of agony filled her ears, and faint tremors shook her hands.
“Marcurious!” she screamed his name as he disappeared into the flames. “Hugo!” she coughed. And then she heard a returning cry.
“Ottoline!” she knew that voice. She dropped to her hands and knees and crawled towards it. “Ottoline!” And then she saw him, silhouetted against the haze.
“Hugo!” she choked against the smoke, and then she felt hands on her back, pulling her to her feet.
“It’s okay, I’ve got you…”
“We-” she coughed again, “We have to get out of here!” Hugo nodded, dropping to his knees. Together they crawled away. “Wait!” she screamed, “We have to get Marcurious!”
“Mar…what?” Hugo raised his voice above the clamor. “It doesn’t matter, we just have to-” and then suddenly there he was.
“You called?” he smirked down at them.
“Marcurious!” Ottoline breathed a sigh of relief. “You have to help us! Shapeshift into something, anything!”
Marcurious nodded, and then changed into a large horse.
“Climb on!” Ottoline screamed at a bewildered Hugo. Hugo helped her up, and they barely had time to get on Marcurious’s back before a smoldering beam fell down behind them. Marcurious galloped through the flames, kicking open the door to the palace and out into the fresh air.
When Ottoline looked back, she beheld a horrible sight. Soldiers were storming the palace, engulfed in flames. Screams were heard from inside. “We have to help them!” she whispered. “But how?”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 23, 2023 at 6:03 pm #166358Hugo
He found Ottoline. She was crawling towards him and coughing from all the smoke. His eyes began to water from the smoke, but he managed to see her outline and reach her
“It’s okay, I’ve got you…” He told her in a comforting tone, dropping to his knees “Your safe… Actually your not, but we will be!”
“We have to get Marcurious!” She gasped,
“Mar…what? You know, nevermind, lets get-”
In the blink of an eye, a figure appeared and Ottoline yelled at it. The figure turned into a horse,
“Climb on!” Ottoline yelled.
Hugo, confused, obeyed and scrambled on behind Ottoline. He threw a wary look over his shoulder and gasped as a huge flaming beam dropped just a few inches behind them. He held on to Ottoline as she took the reigns.
He felt pretty cool, riding out of a castle on a horse with a pretty girl. It was almost just like a movie, though most of the time the castles weren’t on fire. When they were a safe distance away and could breathe fresh air again, they stopped. Ashes were still floating towards them and screaming, loud screaming was heard over the roar of flames.
“We have to help them!” she whispered. “But how?”
Hugo leaned closer to hear her. The flames and the sound of crackling wood filled the air. Ashes were raining down and coating the people and landscape in fine dust. The sky was full of thick black smoke.
“I don’t think we can…” He said in a horse voice, the smoke didn’t help.
“We… we have to!” She gasped, “They…they cant…”
He blinked the ashes off his eyelashes and thought hard.
“I could go in,” He thought to himself, “I know about fire. I…I can do it.”
Hugo felt that this was the way to he could feel better about his past. He had put a few people in danger and felt terrible about it every second. Now he could save people. He wouldn’t be the bad guy anymore. Not a person here knew about last year, he could start new and be the hero, but knowing him, he would probably end up being the victim.
Carefully, he slid off the horse and took a few steps forward, looked at Ottoline for a moment. her face was a mix of confusion and fear. He stared at the castle and listened to the screams which were getting louder and more frightened. He took a deep breath and broke into a run towards the flaming castle….
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November 23, 2023 at 6:53 pm #166359That wouldn’t be too OP, because we don’t want any of our characters to die anyway.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 23, 2023 at 6:55 pm #166360Wow. I’m actually shocked. There was only, like, a page and a half.
Signature is limited to 100 characters? That seems awfully unjust. We refuse to be bound by these ru
November 23, 2023 at 7:00 pm #166361Kate
A spear struck her opponent in the side. He immediately, pulled it free and turned it on Kate.
Kate created a shield in the nick of time. For a moment, she and her opponent were locked together, he trying to push through the wall of red light. The the shield burst, throwing him backwards.
There was a crash as a piece of the ceiling caved in. The fire was causing serious damage.
The man hesitated, looking as though he very much wanted to attack her again, but then he turned and leapt through the hole in the ceiling, disappearing.
Kate turned around to find a pool of blood.
”What happened…?” she asked Nora, her vision suddenly becoming blurry. “Where did Nahim and the Queen go?”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 23, 2023 at 7:01 pm #166362@keilah_h
That’s funny, I was imaging Snake as being roughly human-sized this whole time!
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 23, 2023 at 7:02 pm #166363Wait. Snake is twenty feet tall?
Signature is limited to 100 characters? That seems awfully unjust. We refuse to be bound by these ru
November 23, 2023 at 7:05 pm #166364Ellis
Ellis dodged aside as a section of the roof fell. When he looked up, his opponent was gone.
We’ve got to get out of her.
He coughed, his head feeling light from all the smoke. Who was still in here?
He had seen Kari back herself into a corner, and Zahlin was around here somewhere. He was pretty sure Ottoline and Hugo had escaped on a horse—-no idea where that came from. Carrie was probably still here too.
”Zahlin! Kari! Carrie?” he called. “Anyone? Where are you? We’ve got to get out of here!”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 23, 2023 at 7:07 pm #166365Btw, there are some generic Gilganing soldiers here too, so Snake could just be attacking them.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 23, 2023 at 7:10 pm #166366Ottoline
She watched in horror as Hugo ran towards the burning castle.
“Hugo!” She screamed at him. But he didn’t look back. “Hugo!” he disappeared inside the castle. “No…” she whimpered. Tears fell down her face. She looked at Marcurious, now in his normal form. “We have to save him!”
“Ooh, rescue mission?” Marcurious smiled. “I’m in!” With that, he ran after Hugo.
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