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November 22, 2023 at 8:25 pm #166202
He also might really creep some people out.
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November 22, 2023 at 8:27 pm #166203He’d probably be fine, but if you’re not sure, you can give me some more details.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:28 pm #166204*gasp* Betrayal!
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:28 pm #166205I’ll just write his thing up and you guys can decide if he’s too OP and/or creepy.
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November 22, 2023 at 8:29 pm #166206I have Rigere, and Jeptune. I can add Rigere’s brother, Angere, I think.
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November 22, 2023 at 8:30 pm #166207Wait, have you introduced Jeptune yet? I think you wrote her thing up, but I don’t think she was ever in it.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:31 pm #166208November 22, 2023 at 8:32 pm #166209You could probably pretend she has been here the whole time. In fact, we can just say any villains anyone wants to introduce here were already there.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:33 pm #166210She kinda just wasn’t participating in our villain antics. She’s around, probably disguised as a eight-eyed Lillening
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November 22, 2023 at 8:36 pm #166211Nahim
Nahim almost avoided the question, but remembered how that left him last time.
“Blurry vision, head swimming a little bit. Headache, though better. Feel like I want to chop off some heads and gift abdominal injuries to all people who try to kill me when all I can see is a black, fuzzy blob. Where’s Nora?”
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November 22, 2023 at 8:37 pm #166212The Shadow
The Shadow is not his real name, but it is good enough for now, so that is what we will call him. He is surrounded by a black fog. His form is generally humanlike, but eerily distorted. His eyes are completely black, pupil, iris, and sclera. He is completely silent, in every way. It is impossible for him to make noise.
He can normally teleport, but since other Celestian’s (I think that’s the right term?) abilities are not working, he won’t be able to do that. The life of anything he touches is slowly leeched away until it is reduced to a deathlike state similar to his own. The stronger the ‘will’ of the thing he’s killing, the harder it is for him to leech its life away.
His behavior is rather animal like, though he may have some moments of lucidity.
Um… I think that’s it.
I’m not writing a horror story, I promise you 😅
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November 22, 2023 at 8:37 pm #166213Kate
“No idea. Um…by the way, the palace is sort of on fire…”
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:38 pm #166214Um…by the way, the palace is sort of on fire…
Lol!
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November 22, 2023 at 8:40 pm #166215It’s not really true that all Celestian powers aren’t working. Kate can’t create new Arcweavings because there is no Arcflux. But Zash and Dlek can use their abilties, because they are entirely self-contained and not reliant on an outside power source.
I don’t think he sounds too creepy, but how is going to fight other than by leaching people? If you think he would work well, I think he would be fine.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 22, 2023 at 8:41 pm #166216He can weaken them, and also do other stuff.
We’ll see how this goes.
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