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October 20, 2023 at 4:29 pm #159674
Alrighty, I’m adding my second character… My boy Flazzy (just forget his last name for now…)
Flaz is 15 years old and stands 5 foot tall. His jet-black hair is shaved on one side of his head, and it always looks shiny in the moonlight. He has sandy beige skin, a button nose, and naturally pinkish lips. His monolid eyes have a soulless/alien feel to them (but still look human though), and his irises are so dark brown that they appear black. He also has a high voice. He’s wearing a blue zip-up hoodie, pink tee-shirt that says “Acid Puddle” in neon green lettering, tight black jeans, and unreasonably large sneakers.
Flaz is loud, talkative, and sometimes aggressive. He remarks on everything, and sometimes his friends have to tell him to be quiet. (He is also a prankster. and is known to pull tricks on people)
So yeah… thats the boy.
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@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @rae @mineralizedwritings @esther-cHere is Lane’s POV (I know… it’s very short…), I’ll give Flazzy’s POV in a minute…
Lane
Lane watched Hugo and Ottoline stand in the window. His hands quickly covered his head when a feminine voice rang through the house and greeted everyone inside. He gasped, slowly placing his hands back in his lap. Oh how scary. What now?
He stood up and moved to a window. Staring out, he noted the moons. …Three moons, eh? …Where are we? …Where in the world is Lillen? He leaned into the window and lifted his right leg off the ground (like a flamingo). His brows lowered, and confusion was displayed on his face
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 20, 2023 at 4:56 pm #159675October 20, 2023 at 5:10 pm #159677@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @grcr @mineralizedwritings @esther-c
NAHIM
Nahim started awake, ashamed that he had slipped off to sleep in a place where he didn’t feel safe. The house rumbled below him and a feminine voice boomed in his ears. With haste, he put his helmet on and stood, walking over to where two strangers that he had seen earlier in the crowd were. ‘Three moons.’ He tilted his head at the two beside him,
“Which galaxy is this?”
"You need French Toast."
October 20, 2023 at 5:21 pm #159678October 20, 2023 at 6:36 pm #159692Alright… my “minute” turned into quite a while… anyhow… Flaz is going to enter now….
Flaz
“Clothes and clothes and more clothes. Who, in the wondrous and ridiculous world of Extroit, has a wardrobe this large?” Flaz said loudly as he stepped out from under a rack in the basement. He made a weird sound as his round face brushed up against the hanging suits.
“Goodness me. If Fir or Frin had this many clothes,” He adjusted his blue hoodie and looked around, “I’d tell them to move right out of the house, and not leave a shirt behind.”
He dusted himself off, and stood there amongst the bunch of dresses and suits that he accidentally pulled down while crawling around beneath the racks. He looked disgustedly at them, crossed his arms, and closed his eyes. He sighed, “If there’s one thing I do know, it is that no one — not even the richest person in the world — needs this many outfits.”
He re-opened his eyes and blinked.
“Ooo, a door! I wonder what that leads—oh! Lots of doors! I love options.” He said. Opening a first door, he was disappointed to find that is was nothing but a changing room. He opened a second one, but at the same moment he heard the woman’s voice. He jumped and rolled into a pile of clothes, and pressed himself as flat as he could to the ground. Lillen? Wait… I’m not in Burne? Oh no. After a long pause, Flaz stood up. He laughed manically as he dusted himself off.
“What am I thinking?” he said out loud, “If I’m not in Burne, then there are probably enemies around here somewhere. Aaannnd… I wouldn’t want to be caught on the ground. What, am I trying to get killed? If trouble comes, I’ma look it in the eyes and—ooo! A stair case!”
Walking to the staircase, he peeked though the doorway, and then silently ran up. He came to an abrupt stop near the top. He looked around at everyone and started to take several steps backward. He thought for a moment, then continued up the steps.
“Hello everyone!” Flaz said, loudly.
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 20, 2023 at 8:36 pm #159696Ok Flaz is hilarious! Even after this one scene, I think he’s gonna add a lot to the RP!
"Real love is for your good, not for your comfort." -Justin Whitmel Earley
October 20, 2023 at 8:43 pm #159697@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @jonas @rae
Kari
God, what is happening? Kari silently prayed. Then she frowned. God, I’m assuming you created this world, too, if you created Earth. At least, I hope you did. If you didn’t, and you can’t hear me, then I have a major problem.
Since she became a Christian, Kari hadn’t really thought about other worlds actually being real. Sure, there were other worlds in stories, but if they were real, what did that mean for her faith?
Kari pinched herself. Ouch. Guess I’m awake. Bummer.
She turned to look at the other members of the party. Several were gathered around the windows, looking up at the strange sky.
“What now?” Kari asked, verbalizing the question they were all thinking.
"Real love is for your good, not for your comfort." -Justin Whitmel Earley
October 20, 2023 at 8:54 pm #159698October 20, 2023 at 9:51 pm #159701@trailblazor @acancello @grcr
Could somebody explain what’s happened/where they are for me lol? I think I missed something XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 20, 2023 at 10:01 pm #159702😅 So… They’ve already done the dance… (I don’t know if they are going to continue any bit more…)
The Queen of Lillen (I think??) has told them that they have been transferred to the new universe/country/world… but she hasn’t said much else. The house has moved everyone already, and they are still trying to figure out where they are, but no one has left the building. Hopefully that helps…
(I’ve also dropped a second character, Flaz, into the house)
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 20, 2023 at 10:26 pm #159703I love Flaz! His personality is just…awesome!
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333October 20, 2023 at 10:30 pm #159704Aww thanks 😊 He’s one of my favorite characters
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 20, 2023 at 10:39 pm #159705Oh ok thanks @grcr , that makes more sense XD are we just making up anything for this world, or is it a pre existing place already built out?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
October 20, 2023 at 10:41 pm #159706I don’t really know… lol… I don’t think anything is known so we’ll probably have to make it up as we go…
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
October 21, 2023 at 12:42 am #159710@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @jonas @rae @trailblazer
Kaine leans against the old wooden window sill. Steady rain patters the outside of the glass, obscuring the faint glow of starlight. He stares at the three moons hanging in the sky, creating a light reflection in the collecting puddles. Kaine presses his face onto the refreshingly cool glass. It stings a little, but his breath quickly warms the window with a layer of fog. Fluffy meows, swinging her tail from side to side before jumping onto the window sill and trotting over to Kaine.
“Hey Fluff.”
Fluffy purrs as he gently pets her fur. She turns to look out the window, as if equally intrigued.
“I don’t know where we are.” Kaine whispers, holding her close to his face. He smiles as her whiskers brush against his nose. “Is it a dream? It might as well be the most interesting one I’ve ever had.”
Kaine stares into her green eyes, as if looks alone could respond.
“Yeah?” Kaine holds her tighter, patting down the fluffy fur on her back.
“I wonder if anyone here is going exploring. If we were in a dream… we might as well, make the most of it and get lost. I’ve always thought it would be really interesting to actually get lost for real… no map of compass, just exploring as far as the eye can see… that’s the kind of things you do in dreams. Because right when things go wrong—” Fluffy leans into Kaine’s hand as he scratches her behind the ear. “You wake up!”
“If we are in a dream, I’d be so free…” Kaine sighs. “Nothing to fear when none of its real right? You see that girl over there? She just pinched herself.” Kaine holds Fluffy onto his shoulder, feeling her soft fur brush his neck. “Me? I’d rather not find out. Besides, I’m sure I could pinch myself in a dream if I wanted too.”
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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