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November 9, 2023 at 2:21 pm #163785November 9, 2023 at 4:18 pm #163812
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @oh-man-I-feel-like-I’m-missing-someone-sorry-whoever-I-forgot-😭-😂
(Ok, well that last tag was just obnoxious and probably unnecessary. 🤣)
Alrighty! I’m adding in a villain who needs a lot of development.
Firouz Kian al Ezhdeha
He’s 6 feet tall and has blue eyes, but this is also what he looks like…
His hair may have streaks of gray in it. (I’m actually not sure about that yet. I’ll post about his hair sometime later once I develop him and his conspiracy more. That probably doesn’t make sense, but I’m still figuring it out so I can’t fully explain yet. XD)
Kian has the same type of accent as Amir. He’s also the leader of a conspiracy known as the Shamil, whose aim is to basically overthrow the shah and his entire government. (XD)
Um… I don’t have much backstory for him yet, because, like I said, he still needs a lot of development. Oh, and he also wants Amir dead, but Amir doesn’t know why (yet…)
There he is! I know, super exciting. 😂 He’s a lot scarier than he sounds, I guess. XDXD
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November 9, 2023 at 4:24 pm #163817he sounds….terrifying lol
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 9, 2023 at 4:28 pm #163821Okay I just realized I haven’t RP’d Marcurious yet…so I probably should do that, huh?
Anyways….here’s his mood board (because I feel like it)
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 9, 2023 at 4:48 pm #163826For some reason, I got a notification of your Marcurious RP, and I can read it in my email, but I don’t see it here. Is it the same for everyone else?
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 9, 2023 at 4:55 pm #163828I didn’t get any notification for it, but I can’t see it on here.
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November 9, 2023 at 5:48 pm #163832@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Am I supposed to see more than a moodboard??
"You need French Toast."
November 9, 2023 at 6:16 pm #163837All I see is the moodboard, too.
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November 9, 2023 at 7:25 pm #163843For some reason, I got a notification of your Marcurious RP, and I can read it in my email, but I don’t see it here. Is it the same for everyone else?
It’s because I posted it, then edited it, and then tried to post it, but KP ate it.
If you can, can you copy and paste it from your email and post it here so I don’t have to rewrite it? That would be most helpful XD
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 9, 2023 at 7:28 pm #163845Never mind. It saved in my profile history! So I can just copy and paste! Yay!
@everyone
Here you go:
Marcurious
He sat next to Neveah by the fire, warming his hands. They were quiet, both were tense, and both stared off into the setting sun. Both were thinking the same thing:
Where is Ottoline?
Finally Marcurious asked, “Should I go look for her?”
“Yes,” Neveah agreed. “I’ll stay here in case she comes back.” Marcurious nodded and launched into the sky, taking on the form of a falcon, his favorite. “Be back before dark!” Neveah called after him. He screeched in response.
He loved flying. It always made him feel awake, alive.
Nothing could touch him, up there where he soared among the clouds. He scanned the ground for Ottoline, but he didn’t see her. Where was she? He was getting worried. It wasn’t like her to suddenly disappear…
Suddenly a great blast of light filled his vision and everything went dark.
***
His head was throbbing, and he slowly opened his eyes. The room was dark, and it seemed to be made of bricks. Definitely not the sky where he had been only moments before. “Oh, great. Where am I now?”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 9, 2023 at 8:33 pm #163860Ah, yes, KP’s infamous post eating habit.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 9, 2023 at 8:34 pm #163861November 9, 2023 at 8:36 pm #163862@everyone
Okay, it looks like that’s all the villains. Only five. I might add another, but I’ll have to invent one first.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 9, 2023 at 8:37 pm #163864November 9, 2023 at 8:40 pm #163868I think she has three ideas, but only added one so far.
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