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November 6, 2023 at 8:41 am #163347
Sorry it took so long, I didn’t know exactly what to write so whatever is there is what I’ve got.
"You need French Toast."
November 6, 2023 at 8:43 am #163348Btw the Queen’s presence is needed cuz she’s what they have for a healer, that and the obvious…
"You need French Toast."
November 6, 2023 at 8:56 am #163349Would you like to do the honors of chewing out Nahim and Zahlin, if @highscribeofaetherium is okay with it?
"You need French Toast."
November 6, 2023 at 12:39 pm #163356I don’t care. You can do it.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 6, 2023 at 4:51 pm #163397@highscribeofaetherium @anyone else who would enjoy this ( @jonas )
The Scolding of Nahim and Zahlin
Nahim cast an evil glance at Queen Silvae as she attempted to come near to help him. Yet still somehow he seemed very courteous.
“My Lady, I don’t let others touch me unless they are Realn.” Queen Silvae smiled.
“You are stubborn for an armorless wounded man. Very well, Sir Zahlin, shall I tend to you then, first?”
(Forgive me HighScribe if I do wrong with his character I am making an attempt)
Zahlin grunted, making it clear he didn’t like the idea of being touched either, but he hurt enough to consent. She requested he lie down on one of the middle bunks as she tended to him.
Her touch was light and warm, the tune she hummed was sweet and calm. The bird that ever flew around her, alighted upon her shoulder, cleaning his bright feathers.
But it was Fennin’s voice that rang above the quiet enchanted song Queen Silvae sang.
He was basically yelling at Nahim, who was standing up, but leaned against one of the bunks, faking being fine.
“And why did you think it was a great idea to kill each other!? Nahim, Zahlin, I want to know who had such a bright idea!” Nahim pointed at Zahlin, and Zahlin pointed at Nahim.
“His.” Their voices, the deep and the young, blended in unison.
Fennin looked annoyed at the answer.
“What does it matter? Both of you tried to kill each other. I put you two together so you could learn about each other, become friends not enemies! I thought you were wise enough not to do that! I was wrong. Even the elder of you two,” Fennin cast a glance at Zahlin. “Didn’t even think that a duel could lead to this! I wonder what it’s like when there are an entire nation like you two!” Nahim grinned, something that looked rather devilish.
“Utter chaos.” Fennin didn’t get the sarcasm.
“That’s what I thought. And I thought Gilgan* was bad enough. I can’t imagine your cultures!” Fennin paused for a second before asking, “Do I need to lock you up in cells in sight but not next to each other so that you can get to know each other!?”
Nahim put up a hand to his head, the features of Fennin disappearing in a blur. He grinned again. “Nah, we’d just kill each other with glares.”
Fennin gave up and looked at his mother.
“How’s Zahlin?”
“He should rest for a while. Nothing is serious, just he’ll be sore and hurting for a while. Though, that doesn’t mean I won’t be checking on you.” Queen Silvae pulled the blanket up to his neck, gathering her stuff and standing up to go over to Nahim.
Zahlin pulled away the blanket and sat up carefully, so as to not bump his head and crossed his arms. Waiting for the fun of getting Nahim to submit.
Nahim was reluctant, hanging back as Queen Silvae approached.
“Nahim, on the other hand, looks like he’s about to pass out.” The Queen sweetly smiled. “You have no reason to fear me, I want to help you.”
“Yeah, like pulling me into your world to fight dragons is helping me.” Nahim stepped back, almost falling but caught himself on the bed. Fennin sighed.
“Mother, he can just pass out for all I care, and then you can help him.”
Zahlin smiled at the look of frustration on Fennin’s face, he was just done with the two of them.
Nahim closed his eyes and shook his head as if shaking the water from his hair after a swim. He wavered on his feet, unable to keep himself steady.
Okay, yeah, he needed help.
Nahim still cast the Queen evil glances as she approached softly, the only noise being the ruffle of her skirts. And it was she who steadied him as he made his way to lie down on the bed. Though he kept his hand on his sword.
“Continue, Fennin, I believe that your message about hostilities didn’t get across.” Was that laughter in the Queen’s voice?
“Yes, mother. You two need to…” Nahim sighed, closing his eyes as the dizziness began to subside. He focused on Queen Silvae’s humming and the movements she made rather than Fennin’s words. Whatever Fennin said during the next half hour never got through…
Neither did the Queen’s instructions about resting…
Sorry again HighScribe if I botched Zahlin, I tried. Where did I get him wrong? I’m curious now.
* Gilgan is my name for the country our Villains shall appear fro
"You need French Toast."
November 6, 2023 at 5:13 pm #163399Not the best, but what do you think?
"You need French Toast."
November 6, 2023 at 5:15 pm #163400Lol. It’s mainly because it is named ‘Character Party’ but is no longer anything resembling that. It should be called ‘Character Adventuring Party’ lol.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 6, 2023 at 5:24 pm #163401November 6, 2023 at 5:26 pm #163402I didn’t? wow, I guess I’ve been studying him to hard then…
"You need French Toast."
November 6, 2023 at 6:01 pm #163405Are Fennin and the Queen still there, or did they leave? Zahlin has some words for Fennin.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
November 6, 2023 at 6:02 pm #163406@rar
Lol your new profile pic is so confusing. I keep thinking you’re GRCR 😂
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
November 6, 2023 at 6:06 pm #163407Lol your new profile pic is so confusing. I keep thinking you’re GRCR 😂
Same!!! I thought I was the only one, lol
Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 6, 2023 at 6:08 pm #163408Now that that situation is over, we can get back to Ellis, Ottoline, Snake, and Kaine! Now where were we…
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 6, 2023 at 6:10 pm #163410Well i think where we left off, Ottoline was terrified of Ellis (as usual) and she was setting up targets to practice, and Ellis and Snake were talking about what weapons they can use.
Lukas&Livia
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333November 6, 2023 at 6:11 pm #163411Oh, yeah, I was waiting for Snake to answer, but I probably don’t need to—-it won’t be a long conversation or anything.
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