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November 4, 2023 at 7:56 pm #163107November 4, 2023 at 7:58 pm #163109
But be prepared, Zahlin is about to kick Nahim across the room.
I think this fight is just making them hate each other more XE
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
November 4, 2023 at 7:59 pm #163110Lol! I probably won’t hurt Zahlin eitherย
maybe, possibly, I’ll think about it…"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully ๐)November 4, 2023 at 8:01 pm #163111Yeah, @ancello @esther-c Hugo and/or Hedieh should probably get Fennin at some point. These two will kill each other otherwise!
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully ๐)November 4, 2023 at 8:02 pm #163112November 4, 2023 at 8:02 pm #163113Zahlin
Zahlin regretted not hurling that chunk of metal at Nahim’s face.
As he fell against the wall, he grabbed Nahim’s shoulder, smashing his fist against his head and kicking him away across the room. He slumped against the wall, panting and eyeing Nahim to see what his next move would be.
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
November 4, 2023 at 8:05 pm #163114OoooOOOOoooooooooooooOOoooooOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I’ve been promoted!
Except… I kinda liked being a Knight in Shining Armor… I kinda think that was cooler…
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November 4, 2023 at 8:08 pm #163115Sorry, tech trouble.
Hold on…
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully ๐)November 4, 2023 at 8:10 pm #163116No problem. Tech issues happen all the time ๐
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November 4, 2023 at 8:11 pm #163117Ugh! It might be like fifteen minutes before the reply comes, having sign out and lag problems…Joy
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully ๐)November 4, 2023 at 8:13 pm #163118Ok. I have to go in just a couple minutes, and then I’ll probably be off for the night (I might hop back on briefly, but other than that I won’t be back until tomorrow), so bye for now.
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November 4, 2023 at 8:24 pm #163119Nahim
Zahlin punched Nahim in the head and kicked him across the room, where he fell against a table leg, half propped up. He leaned against it with his breathing growing a little heavy. His eyes were half-shut.
Pain. It throbbed through his head, pounding against the walls of his skull in rthymn of his heart. He gripped his sword handle tighter as his vision grew blurred and the straightened out before going blurry again.
Zahlin leaned against the wall across from him, observing but making no movement.
Nahim knew he should stop, he probably had a serious concussion now for sure, but he wouldn’t stop for Zahlin. His adrenaline was flowing quicker, his heart quickened its beat. He had to finish this fight.
He could shoot Zahlin, or throw something at him, but Nahim knew doing that was against Code. He had never yet thrown away his Honor in a duel, and he wouldn’t start now.
Nor would he start making peace before the end just because something hurt.
Rising slowly, Nahim steadied his stance, and his breathing. He readied his sword. But his vision blurred in and out.
He wasn’t having a good day.
Finally, he charged Zahlin, and the blades clashed again.
Dodging, blocking, thrusting, missing, all happened again, but this time Nahim could only see the movements of Zahlin, everything else, besides the glow of the fire, was a blur.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully ๐)November 4, 2023 at 8:25 pm #163120November 4, 2023 at 8:36 pm #163121You hurt my charrie! Now I shall only repay the favor.
Nahim (continued)
Nahim thrust at Zahlin, only for him to step aside and strike at Nahim again. He saw his chance, as Zahlin sliced at him, he left under his arm open.
All happened in a blur, but Nahim avoided the swing and cut at Zahlin’s unshielded side. He knew Zahlin moved, but he also knew he had hurt him. And yes, there was a stain on Zahlin’s clothes around a cut. Nahim now wasn’t the only one hurt.
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"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully ๐)November 4, 2023 at 9:04 pm #163123I just read two of my saved articles on TBIs and discovered,
1 Zahlin, youย really hurt my charrie
2 Being unconscious over six hours (the first time he got knocked out) usually indicates a severe TBI
3 Zahlin is dead. One of the after symptoms that happen with a TBI isย anger outbursts.
4 Technically, Nahim should relax for one week and slowly return to normal if he wants to recover in like three or four weeks. If he’s just going to go fighting dragons, he could be seeing symptoms for months!ย But of course, Nahim would not relax even if there was no dragon bunch to fight.
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