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November 4, 2023 at 8:07 am #163005
We don’t get a great view of the sunrise at our house, because we don’t have very many windows on the East side. There’s also houses across the street with trees behind them, so we wouldn’t be able to see anyway. We get good sunsets though. Our house is on a small pond, so the sun sets over that.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 4, 2023 at 8:13 am #163006Cool! We get good views of both usually.
The sun comes rising above our trees and sheds orange light on the trees across the road. We also have a small manmade pond, but it’s to the south and shielded by trees.
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November 4, 2023 at 8:13 am #163007Trees trees and more trees.
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November 4, 2023 at 8:18 am #163008I’m waiting for Nahim to begin fighting…
If you want my personal opinion, I think though Nahim is only twenty-two, he’s probably better than Zahlin, unless Zahlin can beat his credentials. But he’s my charrie, so I think my opinion is obsolete.
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November 4, 2023 at 8:21 am #163009Another thing I forgot is that on his own planet, Zahlin can use a magic system, but it doesn’t work here, so that’s a disadvantage for him, because he’s probably used to being able to use it. That said, it might mean that he would win if he could use it.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 4, 2023 at 8:30 am #163010Possibly, though it would depend on the type of magic and how it’s used.
Why?
Cuz the strengths of Mithaln are great, and the lore and legends are long.
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November 4, 2023 at 8:31 am #163011Yeah, I don’t know what the magic can do. I don’t think @HighScribe even knows. The out of universe reason Zahlin’s magic isn’t working is that she didn’t know what it did yet, lol.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 4, 2023 at 8:35 am #163013November 4, 2023 at 8:41 am #163014So, Mithaln is a very strong metal, and it is rumored to have some varieties that are actually sentient and rational. Gold Mithaln most likely is that way, but I haven’t decided for sure.
To give you an idea of it’s strength, Nahim, when he was dueling Vorgan, had Vorgan defeated. But the drider caused the Nanian aboveground castle to collapse. Nahim was thought dead by that, but he was alive.
That’s the best example of strength of the top of my head, though Nahim also has been blown up and survived.
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November 4, 2023 at 9:15 am #163015For being a Saturday, not many ppl are on yet.
How far did you get with the docs?
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November 4, 2023 at 9:19 am #163016Yeah, I’m surprised.
I started at the end and am working my way backwards. I’ve reached the point just before the house got transported. I also haven’t added some of the newest ones yet.
I haven’t started editing much yet. Basically just fixing some grammatical mistakes and misspellings and changed the order on a few that were not chronologically correct.
If you want, I can send you the link to the doc. Just a warning, anyone else on there (just me so far) would be able to see your email address, if you care about that.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksNovember 4, 2023 at 9:46 am #163017My goodness
I remember when the school RP would be updated fifteen pages a day…
And here I am, sounding like a veteran 🤣
All I can say is, sounds like pure chaos
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November 4, 2023 at 9:48 am #163018Ugh, I slept in. But I’m back!
Do you want me to get Fennin to come in and stop them when they are about to kill each other?
We can see what happens. If things get really bad, one of the onlookers can run and get help. As for who is better, I’d say they’re probably about equal. Nahim might be slightly better, but Zahlin has no qualms with using dirty tactics to win, though if its a formal duel, he probably won’t.
Zahlin almost killed one of the best fighters on Nathir, so that’s a pretty good gauge of his skill. We’ll just see how this goes 😅
I’ll write an RP now…
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November 4, 2023 at 10:02 am #163019Zahlin
“So are we rattling off lists of things we’ve survived now?” He said. He glanced at the other two. “Get out of the way and don’t run for Fennin.” He glared at Nahim. “He has no right to stop us.
Zahlin drew his Sword, which was silent for once.
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IDK why that took eleven minutes to write 😅
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November 4, 2023 at 10:25 am #163020@jonas @rae @highscribeofatherium @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer
Ok, so I think I’ve caught up with everything now. XD
(I’m most active during the afternoons, so I think I miss it when y’all are most active. (: )
Oh boy, Hedieh’s at the forge. 🫢 That could be dangerous.
And for swords/weapons and such, in Amir’s actually story, he eventually learns how to wield a sword. So you guys could give him a normal-ish one because he claims he knows how to use it, but the swords you guys are talking about here are probably different than the ones he’s used to using. That would be funny. 😁
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