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July 16, 2022 at 10:01 pm #113455
I think we should meet up with the others. If the numbers are too much at the moment, Alyona and Viktor can get separated from the group and rejoin before the Ocran Battle.
But I do want them all to meet @freedomwriter76 ‘s and @koshka ‘s characters.
This is fantabulous!
By the way, the far building Viktor keeps referring to could be the one in which the others are.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 16, 2022 at 10:02 pm #113456Sounds good!
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July 16, 2022 at 10:05 pm #113458Lyn & Nyx
“Thanks!” Lyn smiled, bounding off to where he’d pointed.
No clue what a cistern is…but…whatever!
Eventually, after a few minutes of scrounging around, Nyx was able to figure it out, and she was able to get out some water for herself and her fox.
Nyx quickly lapped it up, splashing it on his whiskers. Lyn laughed, wiping her dress. “Watch it!”
When he was finished, he shook his head, clearing the water from his face, and licked his paw.
Ara and November also got themselves a quick drink-with November accidentally spilling most of his and having to get more.
Once they were satisfied they returned to the group, with Nyx sitting on Lyn’s shoulder.
”So, what are we going to do now?” Lyn placed her hands on her hips, looking around at all of the faces in front of her.
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#ProtectSebJuly 16, 2022 at 10:09 pm #113459@koshka @freedomwriter76
@elishavet-pidyon sounds good to me! As for a lot of charries, it is but ya know what it’ll be fine. We all end up going for a while without RPing anyway sometimes so I think it’ll be fine if we stay as a group (but maybe during the adventure one at point we get separated with different characters (like not with our own charries, make sense? Like Viktor gets seeperated from alyona and has to go with one of the other RP charries) that’d be fun to write those interactions.I honestly enjoyed the scenes when it was November and the twins, so it’d be fun to have a scene where the group gets seperated later down the road but from each other at the same time (November doesn’t have to be with the twins I was just saying that as an example lol)
what do y’all think Koshka and freedomwriter76 about the building thing?
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#ProtectSebJuly 16, 2022 at 10:24 pm #113460@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.
The brothers
“Let’s review v’at ve know.”
Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.
“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful around corners.”
Most of the group looked confused.
“However, my brot’er and I need to…meet v’ith him.
“Zere is also somev’one ‘ere by name of Corvina, who Ve don’t want to meet.” He nodded to Arabella. Lyn’s eyes went wide.
Zlatan froze, eyes on Nyx. The fox was staring toward the far building, ears wild.
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Fork the GorkJuly 16, 2022 at 10:27 pm #113462That sounds good to me!
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Fork the GorkJuly 16, 2022 at 10:33 pm #113463Absolutely! I’d actually love to separate the siblings again, since I’m playing with it being a huge plot point in my book.
So… Maybe Alyona gets caught?
And Viktor is with the group still?
And they get to see another part of him. XD
This would also add pressure to find Ocran before…..?
But I don’t know. What do y’all think?
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July 16, 2022 at 10:41 pm #113464@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
The Gang
Corvina…
The name made Ara and November’s blood run cold. They’d forgotten about her in all of the chaos, but now…they remembered. She was here too.
Looking for them.
Even Lyn went silent, her eyes getting a far-off look, and Nyx’s fur bristled.
The moment faded however, when Nyx’s ears flicked and he straightened, lifting one paw in the air.
“I hear something…”
Lyn’s eyes went wide and she turned to face him, immediately taking him at his word. All three of them did. Nyx’s senses usually weren’t wrong.
Vulkasin seemed to have noticed the fox’s heightened awareness as well.
”Vat is it?” He whispered.
“Nyx..?” Lyn questioned.
”Not sure…it’s extremely faint…only reason I even picked it up is because there’s…more then one sound.”
”Soldiers?” November frowned, his skin going pale. The others looked around, now on high alert.
Nyx leapt from Lyn’s shoulder, slinking his way closer to the building the group had gotten water from. His nose scrunched up. ”If it is, they’ve been partying or something. Sounds like singing.”
”Singing?” Lyn crossed her arms, wondering if she’d heard right.
“Yup.”
Everyone looked at each other and Ara explained. “Nyx hears…singing.” She felt a bit odd at saying that, but it was the truth.
“It’s stopped now.” He said. Ara relayed the message.
”Do you think it’s soldiers? Or…more people like…” November searched for the right words but eventually gave up and shrugged, “Us?”
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#ProtectSebJuly 16, 2022 at 10:45 pm #113466@elishavet-pidyon that would be interesting! Or instead of getting caught maybe they just get seperated, that way we don’t have a “timeline” on when we have to find her, but the pressure is still on because they’re separated due to being chased by guards or something so he doesn’t know what’s happened to her (same with everyone else who was separated.)
BRUH IF LYN AND NYX GOT SEPARATED 🤣
Cuz Nyx don’t trust none of the guys still XD
also I’m thinking once they meet Eva and stuff, Nyx is gonna open up to letting Alyona and maybe Eva hear him, but still not the guys XD…
and the twins (mostly Zlatan) still gotta earn his trust, (I gotta feeling he’s gonna have some issues with the soldiers too XD)
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#ProtectSebJuly 16, 2022 at 10:57 pm #113467Ah, yes. That would make sense.
Poor Nyx! XD
So… Would he and Alyona get stuck together? Or Alyona and Lynn?
Awwwww. ❤️ That would be an honor. 😉
Oh, the dear little fuzz ball.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 16, 2022 at 11:05 pm #113468@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
This is getting awesome!
The Brothers
“Singing.” Vulkasin grinned.
Nyx came back, placing his tiny self between Lyn and the building.
Zlatan turned to the Mynclaises. “Is it usual for Ocran’s gaurds to sing?”
Alyona shook her head.
He turned to the fox. “Could you tell the type of song?”
Ara covered her mouth, Lyn scooped up the fluff ball before answering.
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Fork the GorkJuly 16, 2022 at 11:23 pm #113470Viktor
Dorwains did sing.
Could it be soldiers?
They were like a lost sheep surrounded by hunting jackals.
Or walls of flames.
And dogs.
Viktor shook his head.
He didn’t know what they meant by Nyx hearing anything, but apparently the tiny fox was incredibly intelligent.
What were the songs?
Viktor rubbed the back of his neck, then his his hands behind his back.
Alyona
Either soldiers or more trespassers were somewhere nearby, singing.
More people like them. “Us.”
If it was a song of joy or harvest or praise, then it might be friends. If the song had told of battles and future conquests, well…
Alyona bit back her fear and decided to hope for the best.
Maybe it was someone like… Us.
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July 17, 2022 at 3:17 am #113483@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76
The Gang
”Could you tell the type of song?”
”Type? What? It’s a song, idiot, how much more do ya need to know?”
November squinted, his face flushing; he was thankful no one else could hear his friend’s snarky replies.
Arabella placed a hand over her mouth, also paling. She shut her eyes and released a sigh.
Lyn inhaled, her tone low and firm, “Nyx…”
The fox rolled his eyes, “What? I said I couldn’t hear it all that well. Next the guy’s gonna want to know the tempo or somethin’. Pfft, stupid…”
Lyn breathed through closed lips. The rest of the group-the ones who couldn’t hear the young fox-stared on in a bit of confusion, allowing the one-sided conversation.
Lyn knew she couldn’t be too hard on the fox-he was probably a bit tired and cranky. Though…he was usually cranky.
He often had the personality of a crotchety old man…or an annoying child.
There was hardly ever any in-between.
Not that you’d ever want to tell him that.
”One thing I did make out though was a female. There was definitely a woman’s voice.” His ears twitched.
Lyn smiled, “Thank you.”
The fox grumbled, “Yea yea.”
“So,” Jocelyn started, returning her attention to Zlatan, “Nyx couldn’t make out much of the song.” She made a point to leave out everything else he’d said, “But he did hear a woman’s voice.”
“Are there any female guards that you know of?” Ara questioned. “If not…perhaps they really are travelers. Strangers, like us.”
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#ProtectSebJuly 17, 2022 at 3:20 am #113484I luv my Nyx 🤣
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@godlyfantasy12. I love all the interactions too! 😉
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“I sure did.” Ezra replied with a wink.
Mikkel smiled.
“It’s fine Mikkel. Not your fault.” Eva replied with a smile.
Footsteps.
Voices.
Riker’s ears were fine-tuned to hear footsteps. He had to know where his father was. Because Riker knew when he needed to steer clear of Franz’s path.
“Any of you hear that?” Riker asked softly.
Mikkel reached for his rifle. “Footsteps and voices.” Mikkel took out his rifle. “I’ll take the front.”
Ezra nodded. “Me and Riker will be your backup.”
Mikkel nodded.
Ezra and Riker both took out their pistols.
Eva got behind them.
And together, they headed towards the direction the voices had come.
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