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December 6, 2023 at 9:00 am #168546
Okay!
Sef
She didn’t know where she was.
All she knew was that she wanted to be home. Home with her mother, home with Hanna…though she knew those things would never be possible, so why should this be?
She leaned against the wall to catch her breath. Her feet were weary and her heart was heavy. She couldn’t remember the last time she was somewhere without Lilitu.
And then she heard the sound of a gun clicking a bullet into place. She gasped, scrambling to her feet.
“Don’t-don’t shoot!” she tried to scream, but it came out only a whisper. “Please…”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 6, 2023 at 12:19 pm #168556@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Alright, I’ll throw Ariac in here.
Ariac
Ariac found himself in a strange stone corridor.
What on Diera?
He fished a couple of gold coins out of his pocket.
A sword.
The coins puffed away into mist, and a sword solidified in his other hand.
Is anyone here?
He crept forward carefully—his precognition could save him from lethal blows, but not all injuries.
He peaked around a corner. There was man holding a strange object, and a young girl cowering. He ducked back around the corner. He took a deep breath, then stepped around the corner.
“What’s going on here?” he demanded.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 6, 2023 at 12:22 pm #168557Ooh, I’m not sure what the sword-coin thing means but that sounds intriguing, is it part of your magic system?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:December 6, 2023 at 12:26 pm #168559Yes, I explained a bit above. Basically what he’s doing is trading the coins for a sword. He can trade other things. For example, he once made a transaction that gives him a precognitive reaction to potentially lethal attacks, but in exchange, he is no longer capable of intentionally inflicting a potentially lethal attack on someone else. You gain something and you give something up. It’s based on your perception of what is a fair trade.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 6, 2023 at 12:51 pm #168565Oh, okay! That’s really interesting, and it makes sense too. Is there a certain force he is trading with? Or is it something everyone does, wherever they are?
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:December 6, 2023 at 12:57 pm #168568It’s a power that some people on Diera have. It’s called Immancy. They’re kind of just trading with themselves, but I don’t really have a full explanation done yet. I think I’m going to have it so that Immancets really hold the power to just do these things, but it has to be filtered through the trading system for whatever reason.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksDecember 6, 2023 at 1:32 pm #168580Oooh, okay, cool!
I like the concept a lot! And Immancy just has a nice ring to it.
They’re kind of just trading with themselves, but I don’t really have a full explanation done yet.
Yeah, my magic system is fairly loose right now, I’m not the best at actually having reasons for things😂
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:December 6, 2023 at 1:47 pm #168586@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas
I’m gonna rp Nae, and then you all can incorporate her in any time it feels right.
Nae
“Skip, hop, run and trot. Flowers sing and the air does ring!” Nae skipped down the stone hallways, undisturbed that she had no idea where she was. She hummed her silly song that made little sense before halting, picking up a hopping pace, and starting another song.
“Heroes of old, their tales all told. Secrets they bury and wreaths they carry…” As long as it somewhat ryhmed, she didn’t care what she said. It just has to flow. “Give me a ring and I’ll give you a ding. A flower’s bow, and a…What ryhmes with ‘bow?’ Cow? Chow? Tou? Doesn’t matter…A flower bows to the wind, queen of sea and land. Her train dost cross the plain, her song makes the blooming again begin… Let your voice in song reach the sky, let your singing not stop until you die, dreams that fly…”
Flashbacks! This what I used to sing as a little child!
"You need French Toast."
December 6, 2023 at 4:50 pm #168602Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae @savannah_grace2009 @jonas
Alright, so to keep this less confusing, we’re going to need a RP turn order
I mean, unless y’all really don’t want one, but y’all RP so fast and I will quickly lose track if we’re not going at least a little bit by turn order 😂
But it’s up to y’all.
Anywhoo, RP!!!
Riker
Riker clicked the pistol.
A girl in the shadows scrambled to her feet. “Please…” She whispered, cowering, her voice a quiet whisper.
Fear…despair.
Riker’s fingers trembled. He wanted to lower the gun. But he was frozen to the spot.
Bullets.
Screams.
Bodies.
“What’s going on here?”
Riker’s head turned, even though the rest of his body refused to move.
A man, dressed in odd clothes, held a sword, ready for battle…ready to protect life. Or take one.
“P-Please, d-d-don’t shoot…” The girl cowering whispered.
Quiet singing echoed in the distance, slowly getting closer, bit by bit, from another side.
Riker was surrounded, and he had to explain.
Forcing his paralyzed body to move, Riker faced the man with the sword.
He held the Luger level, unsure, feeling unsafe. Not an unfamiliar feeling by any means. “…I’m sorry. This isn’t-I didn’t-I never tried to hurt her.”
December 6, 2023 at 6:54 pm #168611@freedomwriter76 How about our RP order goes like this: You, Me, RAE, and then Jonas?
Sef
She shrank back, trembling, as another man barged into the room.
“I’m sorry,” she whispered, looking around warily, “I-I-I didn’t mean to cause any trouble…it-it’s just that I don’t know where I am…”
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 6, 2023 at 7:06 pm #168612Actually, it should be @freedomwriter76 then @savannah_grace2009 then @jonas then Ruee, since that’s how it just went.
"You need French Toast."
December 6, 2023 at 7:16 pm #168613Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@rae @savannah_grace2009 @jonas
Yes, the order is Me, Sara, Jonas, and then Rae since that’s how it went 😊
December 6, 2023 at 7:18 pm #168614Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Rae is 100% right 🙂
December 6, 2023 at 7:51 pm #168618Oh, for some reason I had it in my head that you were before Jonas lol! But yeah, you’re right.
@freedomwriter76
Okay, that works!
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333December 7, 2023 at 9:09 am #168661 -
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