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November 9, 2023 at 8:48 am #163714Anonymous
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@keilah-h Ok! I’ll probably try to RP later today 😊
Hmmmm, honestly, I don’t know!! Haha, I really don’t know what he’d call it! The dragon sounds super cool tho
@smiley Aww, Eleanor 😭also, haha, ikr? He’s gonna use that line in the 2nd book😏
Leon
Silence fell, with no one daring to speak.
“…None of us deserve forgiveness. All of us have sinned…everyone. Forgiveness is never earned…it is freely given.”
“Isaiah-”
Isaiah’s eyes turned to him, soft, gentle, and patient. “Leon, hasn’t anyone ever told you that hating someone is like drinking poison and expecting the other person to die? I’m not saying that Riker and Eleanor’s father, whatever he did, are innocent, but that doesn’t mean they deserve death any more than the rest of us do. There are consequences, and sin should come with consequences, but just because they’ve sinned greatly, that doesn’t mean that they should die any more than we should. The Nazis killed my son Judah too, Leon, you know that…and I hated them for it. Hatred destroyed me, and I don’t want to see it destroy anyone else.”
November 9, 2023 at 11:59 am #163740@freedomwriter76
Aww, Eleanor 😭
*cries* she is by far one of my most tragic charries, and that’s saying something
also, haha, ikr? He’s gonna use that line in the 2nd book😏
Go Isaiah!! literally one of your sweetest characters
Eleanor
“Leon, hasn’t anyone ever told you that hating someone is like drinking poison and expecting the other person to die? I’m not saying that Riker and Eleanor’s father, whatever he did, are innocent, but that doesn’t mean they deserve death any more than the rest of us do. There are consequences, and sin should come with consequences, but just because they’ve sinned greatly, that doesn’t mean that they should die any more than we should. The Nazis killed my son Judah too, Leon, you know that…and I hated them for it. Hatred destroyed me, and I don’t want to see it destroy anyone else.”
The speech was nice, and well said, yet Eleanor wasn’t about to give up her anger because of what a stranger told her, and perhaps she was mad that no one gave this speech to her father. That no one told him to put the alcohol down and to get over his own anger. Why was she, the victim, getting this speech, why was the one abused being told to put away the anger?
Sure she had hate, but she never let it hurt anyone else.
“I think we should agree to disagree on this topic,” Eleanor stated, looking at Marek and Isaiah, the two who were clearly ganging up on Leon and her. “But I am sorry about your son, and your wife, I can only imagine by the two of you and your clear and deep grief, that they were good people,”
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneNovember 9, 2023 at 12:21 pm #163747Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley That really is saying something XD
ikr??? I love Isaiah sooooo much 🥰🥰
Leon
Isaiah smiled. “Thank you, Eleanor.”
Leon merely nodded.
Sorry wasn’t going to bring Aadelheide back.
Harsh? Perhaps.
But Leon truly didn’t care.
Leon began walking once more. “We should keep moving. Maybe we can find a way out of here.”
November 9, 2023 at 12:23 pm #163748Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h I was thinking…and I’m asking for your input, would it be ok with you if Riker got separated from the group for a bit?
I’d still be Felix, Hans, Frida, and Fin and Jennie too, and Riker would probably leave Paxton with Feather and Crosshair so they could protect him…but I was just wondering about your input.
Bc I kinda want Miley’s Eleanor and Marek to meet Riker, but if u are not good with it, then I’ll just keep Riker where he is😊
(and Riker would come back to the group, I promise, lol)
November 9, 2023 at 12:24 pm #163750Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I also may bring Franz back into this RP y’all 😱
I need more practice writing him for the 2nd book…heh
November 9, 2023 at 12:26 pm #163751Alright, finally here to face the confusion 😂 What is happening?
“Everything is a mountain”
November 9, 2023 at 5:00 pm #163829@freedomwriter76
Marek
Leon began walking once more. “We should keep moving. Maybe we can find a way out of here.”
The walk was silent, nobody said anything. He looked over at Eleanor, who looked tired, most likely from the conversation about hate.
“Do you everyone is worried about us? back home I mean,” Marek questioned, trying to make some conversation.
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneNovember 9, 2023 at 6:09 pm #163836*a stalker appears from the shadows*
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Isaiah lost SON? You Killed Judah? 0_0
And Eleanor…what has your author done to you?
*Glances at characters*
*Contemplates inserting two in this sadly mistreated group*
*Realizes the poor dears may not be able to handle that*
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkNovember 9, 2023 at 6:44 pm #163838Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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*whispers* I’m sorry…at least he died before the book takes place so no one has to cry too much over Judah
and at least Isaiah has Yosef
also…*wonders if this group needs someone that can help calm them down* XD
November 9, 2023 at 7:04 pm #163840@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
So should we send our group’s charries towards another group, orrrr…
Because if we have to, I could make up a villain
I just don’t have any good ideas at the moment 😅
“Everything is a mountain”
November 9, 2023 at 7:34 pm #163850@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76
yeah let’s make up a villain!Or maybe we just throw them into a mind games labyrinth they have to escape together? XD maybe it needs a key but you have to find the bad guy who will give you the key?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
November 9, 2023 at 7:46 pm #163857Yeah!! Or they also have to open a door, but they can only open it if they each reveal their greatest secret! 😈
“Everything is a mountain”
November 9, 2023 at 10:28 pm #163899@freedomwriter76 @smiley
Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.
Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.
*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*
*Crickets*
The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add them? They’re from my and my twin’s newest WIP, a contemporary/Sci-fi spy novel. I’d really just like to see what y’all’s characters think of them (two boys from the IFF school, one an observant Jew, the other a book of Acts Christian). I’d probably have them show up for a bit and then rapel out a window or something after a little
hopefullycalming chaos.(If Jay doesn’t start a full on fight first)
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkNovember 9, 2023 at 10:37 pm #163900November 10, 2023 at 12:17 pm #163946Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@koshka Good with me! I’d love to have your charries join 🥰
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