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June 2, 2023 at 5:21 pm #146066
@freedomwriter76
Oh boy….
Crosshair has probably triggered some not so great memories for Pax with the talk of Siblings, especially with Crosshair being sent to kill them 😬😬😬 dunno how this will affect their relationship…
Paxton
Paxton’s eyes widened at Crosshair’s story. He took another step back, a piece of rubble grabbing his pants leg and tearing into his skin. Not that he felt it, his nerves were too frayed.
He’d always thought Crosshair had looked kinda scary…but looks didn’t mean everything…
And he’d been nice to Paxton…
But now he wasn’t so sure.
Pictures of blood and skin flashed before his vision. The fists landing against his brothers as they fought, each blow harder then the last.
The knife gleaming as it was pulled from a hidden sheath.
The crazed…horrible smile from Aramis…after he’d…he’d…
Paxton didn’t realize he wasn’t breathing until he screamed, allowing a burst of air to escape his lungs.
He stepped back, falling over a piece of rubble. His skin burned, but not like fire. It was a cold burn, like ice when it touched you.
Someone tried to touch him, and he shrieked, kicking at the attacker with closed eyes, holding furiously onto his stuffed bear like a life preserver.
He didn’t want to be touched. Didn’t want to be here…
(sorry to whoever he kicked XD. Also…for context. Paxton basically watched a murder…he watched Aramis murder Sorren. Sorren was trying to protect Pax.)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 2, 2023 at 5:53 pm #146074Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h Poor Paxton and poor Crosshair. The babies *cries*
Riker
Guilt filled Crosshair’s features. Shame.
Two things Riker knew, even better than many.
Riker almost spoke, when Paxton screamed.
“Paxton? Paxton!? Are you alright?” He rushed to Paxton, rushing past Crosshair, going right past him.
He reached for him, to touch him, comfort him…but Paxton kicked him and shrieked.
He kicked Riker in the stomach, and Riker took a step back.
Touching him wasn’t the best course of action…so then, what was?
“Paxton…hey…it’s okay.”
June 2, 2023 at 6:03 pm #146077@godlyfantasy12 Aww poor Pax!!
@freedomwriter76 I have a feeling Crosshair’s gonna hate what you just called him, but he’s going to have to get over it lol
I won’t be able to RP right now, but I’ll get around to it tomorrow or something.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 2, 2023 at 6:12 pm #146079Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h ok, whenever you feel like RPing!!! 😀
Crosshair will get over himself XD it is my form of showing endearment XXD
June 2, 2023 at 6:14 pm #146081@freedomwriter76 should I wait till @keilah-h can RP? I don’t mind
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 2, 2023 at 6:16 pm #146082Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 maybe best, but idk. XD
but yeahhh, we can wait for Keilah 🙂
June 2, 2023 at 9:22 pm #146096@freedomwriter76
Lol the quote on your posts XD I actually know that one
Is your pfp from the princess bride?!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
June 3, 2023 at 2:27 pm #146146@freedomwriter76 LOL yeah, he’s just not used to it.
Crosshair
Paxton stared at him, terrified.
Riker reached to comfort the boy. Paxton screeched and kicked at him.
What had set him off?
Crosshair ran all the words he’d said through his mind again, trying to pick up what had made Paxton start screaming.
His siblings…..
That was what had done it.
His mention of trying to kill them.
He remembered Paxton’s brothers.
The ones they’d had met tormenting him. The one who’d thrown Feather into the wall, and the one who Crosshair had promptly shot at.
Had they tried to kill him at some point in time?
They must have……
“Paxton!” he shouted, trying to get through to the kid. “Paxton, it’s okay! I’m not them! I’m not going to hurt you!”
But was that really true?
The memory of what he’d done to Hitchens burned bright in his mind.
If he could do that to a grown man……
Imagine what he could do to Paxton if the boy hit him out of fear, and he lost control again…..
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 3, 2023 at 2:42 pm #146151So I’m going to be gone for about three weeks and won’t be on here, so if anyone is in a group with my characters, you can do whatever you want with them.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
June 3, 2023 at 4:45 pm #146175@loopylin by Loopy!!
@keilah-h aww poor Crosshair 😭 @freedomwriter76Paxton
Paxton could hear jumbled, frantic words being thrown at him, but he couldn’t quite make out the voices.
His legs grew tired from the kicking, blood turning to metal in his veins. He rolled over to his side, curling into a fetal position and trembling. He squeezed his eyes shut, refusing to open them. Refusing to release Hope from his grasp.
His back was exposed…one of the points he was most accustomed to pain.
But he was used to this…he did it often back home…at least it made him feel a bit better, being curled around something, wether it be a blanket, or a pillow.
He sniffled, senses on high alert, but otherwise his body refused to move, completely frozen in place.
“-Axton…Pax…Oh, buddy…” A soft voice whispered.
It definitely wasn’t his brothers…but that didn’t relax his tense muscles. it wasn’t familiar enough.
“It’s alright…” something touched his shoulder, making him jerk slightly. The touch settled, warming him slightly. “It’s alright…”
So pax is basically in “fear mode.” Kinda like playing possum, or being as still as possible in the hopes nothing too bad happens. He can be picked up/moved and will probably fall asleep once he feels safe enough.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 3, 2023 at 10:45 pm #146187PAXTONNN 😭😭😭😭😭😭 AHHHH The babyyyyy 😭😭🥺
And Sorrennnnn 😭😭😭😭🥺🥺
Excuse me while I go cry over all the depressing fictional character deaths and trauma that have broken my heart…bye 😅😭😭👋
#HugRikerSquad
June 4, 2023 at 3:50 pm #146218@lightoverdarkness6 lol yeah depressing character deaths are just……agggghhhhh I hate it but I need it in my stories but then I get so sad when I have to kill someone off……
@freedomwriter76 I think it’s your turn. The comforting words Paxton heard sound more like they’d come from Riker. Crosshair….IDK, I think he’s kinda hanging back, indecisive on whether he should help or if he’ll only make it worse.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 5, 2023 at 9:50 am #146266Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings XD Yes, it’s from The Princess Bride 😆👌
@keilah-h Ok!!! Poor Crosshair 😭 @godlyfantasy12 PAXTONNNN!!! THE BABY!!!!! 😭😭❤️Riker
Riker gently, tenderly, lifted Paxton up into his arms, the boy laying completely still.
Riker adjusted him in his arms, trying to make sure the young boy was as comfortable as possible.
“It’s okay Paxton…it’s okay.” Riker whispered softly, gently, tenderly, trying to reassure him that it was okay, that he was safe.
He completely stood up, Paxton in his arms, and straightened his back. “Come on Crosshair, we should probably keep-”
A loud thud sounded.
(soooo, I still want Riker&Crosshair to talk, and they can, but I was also thinking about adding a couple other charries as well…😏)
June 5, 2023 at 9:53 am #146267Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 so, if I add them (i’ll let y’all decide if you’re ok with it or not 😊) these are the charries I wanna add👇
Hans Theodore Baumann
Age: 56
Personality: Vain, prideful, arrogant, evil, cruel, sadistic, abusive, controlling, manipulative, calm, only gets ruffled when things are really wrong for him, quiet
Looks: Pale skin, blue eyes, mostly gray hair with blonde strands, wears an SS officer uniform with a Lieutenant Colonel symbol on it, a black SS uniform cap, tall black jackboots, and has a luger pistol on his right hip in a black holster
June 5, 2023 at 9:56 am #146268Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Felix Heinrich Baumann
Age: 58
Profession: SS Officer (Major General)
Personality: Hard, cruel, prideful, devoted, hard-working, usually honest, rude, abusive, has his moments of goodness
Looks: Gray hair, pale skin, dark blue eyes, skinnier build, but has some muscles. Wears an SS Major General pitch-black uniform with the cap, black knee-length jackboots, and a gun on his side with a black holster
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