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June 29, 2022 at 1:51 pm #111977
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Rinzler and Feather
“Feather, are you sure this’ll work?” Rinzler asked, but it was too late. Feather was already standing on the Dark Player’s shoulders, reaching up toward the vent.
A loud creaking sounded through the room, and water started pouring in through holes in the walls. “Hurry up,” said Rinzler urgently. “We don’t have all the time in the world.”
“I got it!” said Feather, stepping off of the dark Player so he could stand up again. “It’s open, can you find something we can use as a ladder?”
Rinzler found a pole on the wall. “Is this what you need?” He pulled, and it came loose. A rush of water blasted him in the face. He realized it was one of the pipes carrying the water.
“Rinzler, what did you do?” Feather asked as the water level started rising faster, forcing them all to tread water. He gave her the pipe, and then she knew what to do with it. Propping it up against the opening, she climbed up, and the others followed. Rinzler came last.
The area they were in now seemed to be a primitive air duct. It was crowded, but safe. Feather turned to Hesh. “Now can you tell me about the glass-spitter?” [he’s the one that mentioned it right?]
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 29, 2022 at 3:55 pm #111979@elishavet-pidyon u wanna go?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 30, 2022 at 8:00 pm #112026Yes! I’m sorry it’s been a while. I’m at church camp, and haven’t had much time or energy left for the forum.
However, I’ll get something up in the next hour or two.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 1, 2022 at 2:26 am #112031@elishavet-pidyon oh cool!!
Hey…I promise I’m not trying to be a creeper 🤣 but r u at a youth camp?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJuly 2, 2022 at 1:25 am #112052….and that was NOT one or two hours…and it’ll be a little longer till I get it in, but not as long as that was. 😂😬
Actually…
Yes! I’m at the Texas District Youth Camp. *Whoop*
It’s the last day though.
*Sniff*
But it’s been amazing!!!!!
(Hallelujah!)
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 2, 2022 at 2:12 pm #112056@elishavet-pidyon OH MY GOSH!! 2 of my friends/youth group is there!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJuly 2, 2022 at 3:52 pm #112058What?! Really?!
The one at Lufkin?
I don’t know if I can ask for names, but that’s awesome.
I had a response written, but it just got obliterated, so I shall to rewrite it in the next few minutes.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 2, 2022 at 4:00 pm #112061@elishavet-pidyon yes! They’re there!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJuly 2, 2022 at 8:10 pm #112072@godlyfantasy12 (Wow! The world grows smaller every day. It was soooo good. I hope they were exceedingly blessed!) @emilysf @koshka
Finally, here it is!!
Viktor
The rest of the group wasn’t following. Or at least, not quickly, and not completely. Viktor gritted his teeth and darted a glance behind him.
He saw a nightmare.
His nightmare all over again.
Their torches cast flickering shadows against the walls around them. Back and forth, red light on ancient stone. was too much flame, too little time. Soldiers were probably coming.
He gritted his teeth.
‘Run!‘
Viktor pushed Alyona ahead of him and spun back. The two VoyageFolk were drawing up close, but the rest lagged behind.
Didn’t they see the danger?
But a second look stilled him; it was like gazing into a mirror. Dreadful memories shrouded Arabella like a wet mantle. Lynn and November walked beside her, love for their friend slowing their step.
Viktor swallowed back bitter fear and squeezed his eyes shut.
‘Please Lord, help us. Help us all. And give us peace. You’re the only one who can.’
When he opened them, the moment had passed and Arabella was capably leading her friends toward safety.
Hopefully.
Alyona
The dark walls continued, leading them on. Viktor guided them all through a winding passage, and Alyona followed him, holding high her light to illuminate the way.
Then before she expected it, but long after she looked for it, she smelled something wonderful. A quick glance showed the rest of the group sensed it too. Fresh, sweet air drifted by, filled with everything alive and green.
Chins lifted, and faces lit. Alyona smiled ashe the awful tenseness in Viktor’s gait eased away. What a wonderful blessing the breath of freedom was!
And suddenly she strode out into the cool night. An herb garden spread before them, full of what was sweet and healing. All about it stood a white wall, cradling this leafy place from danger and sentries.
Alyona could have danced. Or sung.
But instead she settled her torch into a socket near the door and turned to the others as they spilled out into the star roofed sanctuary.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
July 4, 2022 at 8:16 pm #112099Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Wow. Y’all have taken this far. XD
July 5, 2022 at 10:31 am #112106@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?
By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkJuly 5, 2022 at 10:52 am #112108@koshka no clue lol I think Mila’s kinda off on her own rn until she approaches us again so u can go next if u like
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJuly 5, 2022 at 10:52 am #112109@koshka then I’ll go 😊
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJuly 5, 2022 at 11:29 am #112110@koshka I do not know. (Tho the correct spelling is Milla (two l’s)) What is it?
"[Write] today like there's no tomorrow!"
July 11, 2022 at 1:32 pm #113140@freedomwriter76 Sure have! Wanna join us?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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