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December 27, 2022 at 4:39 pm #125894Anonymous
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@mineralizedwritings. I think he has three? But I may be wrong. XD
December 27, 2022 at 4:42 pm #125895Nyx**
Lol.
Taking a deep breath, she closed her eyes, willing her mind to clear. Slowly, she could feel herself becoming entwined with the boy, Tauren’s, own feelings. Could hear his heart, beating in tune with hers. Could almost see his emotions, drifting into her, likes a rainbow of colors.
Wait is this some kind of power thingy Luna has? I’m just going to try to go with the flow, Idk how that works in your world or what Tauren would be feeling so I might have to make some stuff up XD
Tauren feels himself being moved onto somebody’s shoulder. A dense fog distorts his vision, and seemingly his mind.
Where am I? what just happened?
Tauren’s eyes blink shut for a instant. He opens them again quickly, confused by a strange connection too someone in the room.
What was that?
Luna speaks. “I believe…You had what some call a…ah…panic attack?”
“Oh no! That isn’t good!” Lesli says while looking over, trying to get him to say something.
Tauren barely hears Lesli. He instead feels a strange rush, as if his very emotions were being read. His panic, fear, and care for others. Somebody else knew them too.
He glances up at the purple haired girl, leaning above him along with a couple others. Lesli shifts him on her shoulder, putting her arm around his back. He takes in a shuttered breath, looking towards the grand ceiling, and suddenly realizing reality. Tauren looks at her in utter confusion as the small string tied to their emotions begins to sever. The gray fog begins to dissipate leaving every thing clear, just as it had been.
“A…panic attack? But…don’t you…ya know, have to be breathing real fast to have those?” Someone asks.
Tauren doesn’t take notice, but instead tries to make sense of what happened.
Luna had something to do with that strange feeling. But I don’t know how. I just know it was her.
Luna shakes her head. “Not necessarily. Forms of extreme panic can cause attacks of different kinds.” She offers a gentle smile to Tauren. “The main thing is…are you alright?”
Tauren opens his mouth, but no words come out.
“I-I–” Tauren tries to speak, but instead lets out a long breath of pent up air.
I was holding my breath?
“Y-yeah.” Tauren furrows his brow in confusion. “I think I hit my head on the floor though.”
“Where?” Lesli asks.
“My forehead I think.”
Lesli pushes Taurens bangs up, revealing a small bump.
“Oh honey…” Lesli feels the bump with her hand.
Tauren makes a slight face of disapproval at her.
Ugh, now all these people will think she’s my girlfriend.
He lets out a slightly annoyed sigh, but smiles at her. He looks up at Luna with a confused gaze, still unsure of what happened.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 27, 2022 at 4:43 pm #125896@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Wow, I had no idea Nyx had more than one tail! 😂
Lol, It feels like I should know this by now XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 27, 2022 at 4:51 pm #125898Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Wow, I had no idea Nyx had more than one tail! 😂
Yeah, it’s really cool!!! 😀
Lol, It feels like I should know this by now XD
Lol, I forget things all the time…we all do. XDXDXDXDXDXD
December 27, 2022 at 6:10 pm #125906@mineralizedwritings oops sorry should’ve explained it more! So Luna has a bit of an ability like an Empath. But others can’t really see the colors she can and such (but it’s ok!)
HOWEVER extremely sensitive people can occasionally feel when she connects to their emotions and such, or if they’re tied to her.
Which can explain how Tauren feels the things he felt!
(Paxton is another sensitive soul who can feel it sometimes. November can also sometimes feel it. Nyx can also sense it and doesn’t like it in the slightest XD)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebDecember 27, 2022 at 6:12 pm #125907And yes he does have three tails!
@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin I’ll let one of y’all go before I do again 😊@freedomwriter76
“I’m afraid not…” Ara said in reply to Ellie’s question. She peered at the doors around her, mind wandering. “I’m wondering if we should take the door you came through, or risk one of these. Which do you suggest?”
Freedom we should come up with some sort of interesting room/hall they can enter!!! 🤩
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebDecember 27, 2022 at 6:16 pm #125909Ok! Hey, that’s actually pretty in line with my guess! And I think Tauren does seem like the type that could be sensitive enough to feel it.
Lol Nyx doesn’t like it that’s hilarious
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 27, 2022 at 9:44 pm #125995Slowly, she could feel herself becoming entwined with the boy, Tauren’s, own feelings. Could hear his heart, beating in tune with hers. Could almost see his emotions, drifting into her, likes a rainbow of colors.
Whoa! Luna’s an empath? That’s so cool!
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 27, 2022 at 10:00 pm #126010@loopylin thank you!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebDecember 27, 2022 at 10:06 pm #126013@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Carter and Carmen
Carmen wanted to rush over and help, but, if it really had been a panic attack, she didn’t want to crowd him. Instead, she backed up and grabbed Cater’s hand, squeezing it to ease her worry. Cater was used to this kind of thing, so he hardly noticed.
Lesli helped Tauren to his feet, asking if he was alright.
“I think I hit my head on the floor though.”
“Where?”
“My forehead I think.”
Lesli brushed Tauren’s hair aside, revealing a bump.
“Oh honey…”
Carter’s curiosity took over, and he once again forgot his manners.
”Are you two siblings or dating or-“ Carmen squeezed his hand tight, making him wince. He then looked down and tried to avoid everyone’s gaze. “Ah, sorry. You don’t have to answer that… Do you guys wanna keep going…?” He gestured vaguely down the hall in a half-hearted attempt to change the subject.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 27, 2022 at 10:09 pm #126016Carter forgetting his manners XD
Imma wait for light because she hasn’t rped in awhile
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 28, 2022 at 3:56 pm #125755Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Oh, and there’s a few more charries I want to add to develop more…I’ll be spreading them out to keep track of everyone better, lol. XD
So, without further ado, I first introduce y’all to Ezekiel Reiner Gessner!
Age: 32
Profession: Pastor
Personality: Courageous, firm, loving, compassionate, always stands for his beliefs and convictions, always tries to do what’s right, honest (sometimes somewhat brutally…), a faithful and strong man of God, does everything he can to protect the innocent
Looks: Dark brown, wavy hair that comes right below his ears, pale skin, light brown eyes, a somewhat muscled build
(A Pastor, husband, and father to 3 young kids)
Ellie Hannah Braun
Age: 20
Profession: Mother and Wife
Personality: Forgiving, loving, devoted, hard-working, faithful, a strong woman of God, always sees the best in others, never gives up on the people she loves
Looks: Long, bright blonde hair, more often than not worn in a long braid, bright blue eyes, pale skin, freckles on her nose and cheeks, and wears a 1940s era light pink dress, stockings, and white flats
She is Erich’s wife.
She will have her son with her, so here’s her six-month-old baby boy, Abel. <333
Hilda Matilda Kleine
Age: 21
Profession: SS Officer (1st Lieutenant)
Personality: Vain, prideful, arrogant, manipulative, controlling, cruel, hard-working
Looks: Bright blonde hair cut shoulder-length and in a 1940s era bob, dark brown eyes, pale skin, and wears an SS Female Officer uniform. (basically the same as the man’s, just with a skirt instead)
December 28, 2022 at 4:06 pm #126163@freedomwriter76
Lol I already dislike Hilda XD
Mainly from her personality description, she sounds just awful 😂
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
December 28, 2022 at 5:12 pm #126178@koshka @freedomwriter76 @lightiverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin y’all on?
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebDecember 28, 2022 at 5:28 pm #126182I’m on, but I think we’re waiting for @lightoverdarkness6 to rp
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
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