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December 26, 2022 at 2:49 pm #125771Anonymous
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@loopylin. Reuben is still here, but he’s gonna be with Jakob now. 😉
December 26, 2022 at 2:55 pm #125773@freedomwriter76
Oh cool! I love combat boots.
My Christmas was great! I got to see my grandparents and I got some glitter pens, a miyazaki manga book, and a lot of chocolate.
Reuben is still here, but he’s gonna be with Jakob now. 😉
ok!
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 26, 2022 at 3:20 pm #125778Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@loopylin. Yeah! Combat boots are really cool! 😉 I love them so much already. XD
I’m sooo glad to hear you had a great Christmas! And ooh, cool!!! 😀
December 26, 2022 at 3:46 pm #125780Wilkins
A headache. He sat up and rubbed his eyes, waiting for the pain to subside.
The room around him looked long deserted. Half a musty tapestry dangled from the wall, it’s other half lying forlorn on the stone floor. He shivered and wrapped his arms around his knees. Where am I?
A castle. The shivers up his spine muntiplied down his arms, and he staggered to his feet. His axe was still in place, as was the wicker shield on his back.
A shadow moved in the corner of his vision. He froze, eyes wide, axe in hand.
The form shifted, stood up, became a hooded figure. “Wilkins?”
A long breath escaped and the axe went back into his belt. The figure stepped out of the shadows and slipped back his hood. Bright red hair and keen hazel eyes peered back at him.
Daithí
The corridor was dark with rare shafts of light falling in wispy lines across the floor. The shadows would hide them well if the need came.
“Daithí, where we goin’?”
He glanced down at the grey eyes beside him. No point lying to the lad. “I don know.”
The younger boy sighed and nodded. They walked on for some time, light steps silent on the stone floor. No sign of fellow inhabitants or of a way out.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 5:06 pm #125793@freedomwriter76
Ooh, cool! Glad to hear you had a great Christmas!!! I got clothes, mostly, which are always appreciated, and notebooks and pencils and the black combat boots I wanted!!! 😀 😉
Awesome!! Ooh, combat boots are cool! I got my first phone!! And a character workbook!
They do look pretty good…especially the guys…XDXDXD
I’m glad they fit their names! 😉
Yes! They do! Also, on the topic of names, in my new WIP, there’s a character named Iris. Isn’t one of your charries named Iris, too? I wanted to ask you if you want me to change her name, bc I don’t want it to seem like I copied you. 🙂
Absolutely! 😀
Thank you!! 🙂
(Abel is soooo stinkin cute!!! I want him to meet my baby sister XD)
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December 26, 2022 at 5:11 pm #125794Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Awesome!! Ooh, combat boots are cool! I got my first phone!! And a character workbook!
Yeah! I love my pair already! XD Ooh, cool! A phone and character workbook are both really cool! 😀
Yes! They do! Also, on the topic of names, in my new WIP, there’s a character named Iris. Isn’t one of your charries named Iris, too? I wanted to ask you if you want me to change her name, bc I don’t want it to seem like I copied you. 🙂
Riker’s wife’s name is Iris, yes! But don’t change the name! Plenty of us here on KP have characters that have the same name! 🙂
Thank you!! 🙂
(Abel is soooo stinkin cute!!! I want him to meet my baby sister XD)
You are sooo welcome! 😀 I know, right!? XD He’s ADORABLE!!!! <33333
December 26, 2022 at 5:31 pm #125795@freedomwriter76
Yeah! I love my pair already! XD Ooh, cool! A phone and character workbook are both really cool! 😀
Lol, yeah, they sound cool! Yeah, I was so excited.
Riker’s wife’s name is Iris, yes! But don’t change the name! Plenty of us here on KP have characters that have the same name! 🙂
Okay! Thank you!! 😀
You are sooo welcome! 😀 I know, right!? XD He’s ADORABLE!!!! <33333
Yes!!! HE IS!!! XD
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December 26, 2022 at 5:51 pm #125796Anyone wanna meet Dante and Ellie or Eddie? (I’m splitting up my twins. 😣 I kinda feel bad.)
Eddie
Eddie rubbed her eyes and blinked. She was alone in one of the castle’s corridors. She tried to remember what had happened, but all she could remember was a very bright light. Still drowsy from the effects of the stun gun, she rubbed her eyes again.
Where’s Ellie?
“Ellie!” she called, her voice echoing off the walls.
I hope she’s okay.
Dante
Dante stumbled as a bright light blinded him. He caught himself on a stone wall and repeatedly blinked his one eye. His sight returned quickly, and he saw he was in a completely different place. It was a dusty old bedroom with a wardrobe and a chest in the corner.
“Dante?”
The soft voice startled him. He whirled around to see Ellie sitting on the bed, looking curiously at him.
“What happened? Where’s Ed?”
“I… I don’t know.” Dante responded. He went to the door and swung it open.
“Come on. We can go find her.”
Ellie followed.
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 26, 2022 at 5:57 pm #125797@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Okay, y’all! After washing a huge amount of dishes and being chased by a huge bulldog on my fourwheeler while taking some warm gloves to my dad and little brother (XD) I can finally RP!!
Matthew
Paxton glanced over at Luna, who Lyla was talking to, as if for permission to speak. She nodded.
Then he turned back to me, and, biting the inside of his cheek, looked at his bear.
“H….H…” He started softly, “H-Hope. Her-her name…is-is H-Hope.”
I smiled at him, encouraging. “That’s s-such a p-pretty name, Paxton,”
He smiled softly and whispered, “Th-th-thank y-you,”
Suddenly, I heard a loud thud and spun around to find Tauren lying in a heap on the floor.
Lyla
“W-w-what h-happened?!” Matthew exclaimed, eyes wide.
“Oh my goodness, is he okay?!” I rushed forward and knelt by Lesli, who was checking his pulse.
“He’s fine, I think,” She said. “He passed out.”
“What can we do to help?” Carmen asked.
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December 26, 2022 at 6:05 pm #125798A bulldog? Lol, that sounds like an interesting story
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
December 26, 2022 at 6:15 pm #125799@freedomwriter76
Would you mind/like it if Wilkins and Dáithí run into one/a group of your charies?
I was thinking maybe Ezekiel or Fin’s group, if it wasn’t a problem (although the group is pretty large, so Ezekiel may be better?).
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 6:16 pm #125800A bulldog? Lol, that sounds like an interesting story
Yes! A huge american bulldog. (Or maybe it was a pit bull.) Tbh, it was kinda fun. At one point, I had that huge dog running after me, and then there were THREE OTHER little dogs chasing me!! As long as the four wheeler is faster than the dogs, I’m okay XD.
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December 26, 2022 at 6:18 pm #125801You’re splitting up the twins?! *Horrified gasp*
Although, I can’t really say anything here. That is a huge plot point for my first book.
That sounds wild. XD
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkDecember 26, 2022 at 6:18 pm #125802Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@koshka. Sure, I don’t mind at all! Either group works fine! 😀 Your choice! 🙂
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