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November 9, 2022 at 8:44 am #121117Anonymous
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@elishavet-pidyon. OOH! Can’t wait to meet Winifrith!!! đ @godlyfantasy12. PAXTONNN!!! THE SWEET BABYYYYYY!!!! *sobs* Kinda makes sense that Autism and Severe PTSD in kids can have some similarities! And now I may be able to get ideas for Peter/Pietro/Wanda in the AU…which I really need to get back to writing. XD But Paxton having moments where he can’t talk…now I want to add Eli…hehe. @keilah-h.
Oh, and sorry y’all! My computer kicked me out of my KP account yesterday and I couldn’t get back in, but it’s (hopefully) fixed now! xD So happy the girls/Vince and Dawson are meeting with Viktor and them!!!! AHHHH!!!!
Nathan
âYou think heâs alright to pick up?â Grimm asked, turning to face him.
Nathan slowly nodded. “If you’re careful…yeah…I think so.”
Leo
Paxton was asleep in his arms.
Leo let out a deep breath.
Poor kid.
Joshua’s hand rested on Leo’s shoulder. “What…was…that…?”
Leo shook his head. “I…I don’t…know…”
He wished he did.
Leon
“Nice to meet you.” The dark-skinned man, Vince, said, shaking Leon’s hand.
Leon smiled. “Nice to meet you as well.”
He then shook Dawson’s hand, and Riker shook their hands as well, before turning to the others. “It’s good to see all of you again. And nice to meet you, Luna.” He smiled.
Luna smiled back. “Nice to meet you.”
Lily slowly got back down onto the floor. She looked up at Luna in awe. “You look like a fairy! Daddy, Luna’s a fairy!”
Leon laughed and Riker walked over to Lily. Riker chuckled. “Come on, Lily, give her a little space.” Riker replied with a chuckle, slightly pulling Lily away.
“But Daddy, she’s a fairy! Like in the stories!”
November 9, 2022 at 9:02 am #121120@freedomwriter76 yea KP can be kinda weird đ and ikr! My baby đ @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Grimm
The kit was still twitching, fitfully resting. He mustâve been dreaming about something, because every few minutes his maw would open and close in a lethargic snap. Grimm frowned, hoping whatever nightmare he was in would soon fade.
He carefully lifted him into his arms, wrapping him in the fabric the twins had given him earlier. He stood, looked back.
Paxton was now fully asleep, and the brothers were staring at him.
âHeâll be alright,â Grimm nodded slowly. They didnât look convinced. âThis has happened a few times before. Not manyâŠbut, certain things trigger specialâŠepisodes, I guess you could call them.â Grimm gently maneuver Nyx into one arm, so that he was able to walk over and run a hand through Paxtonâs hair.
He glanced at Leoâs side, brow raised. âYouâre not hurting? We can switch. Nyx is asleep for now, he shouldnât be any trouble until he wakes up again.â
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#ProtectSebNovember 9, 2022 at 9:08 am #121122@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Luna
Luna giggled at the little girl, Lilyâs, obvious excitement. She wasnât sure what stories the lass had heard, but she was obviously enthralled.
âIâm afraid Iâm not a fairyâŠâ The little girlâs face fell slightly, making Lunaâs heart quiver. âBut I am an elf.â
Lilyâs eyes widened, âAn elf!â
âMmhm!â Luna nodded.â
âWe do have a Fae in our group! Or, as you call them, Faerie. Not sure how they look in your world though,â Lyn smiled, approaching ReĂșven and Lily. Lily beamed, giggling as Jocelyn bopped we on the nose.
Ara turned to November, âSpeaking ofâŠhave youâŠseen any of them?â
He shook his head. Ara sucked in a breath and then nodded. November frowned, but quickly took her hand in his giving it a squeeze. âH-Hey, heâs fineâŠIâm sure. Heâs probably with Grimm. Or Nyx.â
Arabella smiled.
Luna looked up at the large bird in front of them, âYouâre bird is gorgeous! What is itâs name?â
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#ProtectSebNovember 9, 2022 at 9:10 am #121123Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. IT CAN! xD Yes…he’s just a BABY!!! đđđ
Leo
âYouâre not hurting? We can switch. Nyx is asleep for now, he shouldnât be any trouble until he wakes up again.â Grimm offered, stroking Paxton’s hair.
Leo smiled. “I’m fine,” he lied, the lie coming off easy.
Joshua gave him a raised eyebrow.
Leo shook his head at him and turned back to face Grimm. “I’m fine…really. It doesn’t hurt anymore.”
November 9, 2022 at 9:46 am #121125@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Grimm
Grimm knew Leo was lying, butâŠhe couldnât blame him. He wouldâve done the exact same thing. So, he said nothing.
He turned to all of them. âWe should probably keep going. See if we can find any others. Iâm sure the rest of my companions are hereâŠsomewhere.â
He looked down at the kit in his arms, frowning.
He could only imagine Jocelynâs reactionâŠ.
But, perhaps it would be in the kitâs best interest to find her, and soon. He needed to recover, in more ways then one it seemed, and LynâŠwellâŠthey held a special bond. Grimm was sure she could help Nyx in ways he could not.
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#ProtectSebNovember 9, 2022 at 10:52 am #121128I love your drawing of Kaine! The colors are really well done.
Thanks!đ
Also, I love your drawing of Kaine! That is a cool manga semi relistic style. How old is he again? Matthew is 13.
Kaine is 15, and thanks! đ
Also correct me about Mathews hair if that isn’t right. I was remembering a picture you posted of him.
Also what is Mathew’s demeanor like? a bit nervous, right?
Kaine
Kaine whips around to see the boy approaching. His brown hair falls down, almost into his eyes as he walks.
Where do all these people come from?
Kaine studies him with suspicion.
“Who are you?” He asks, facing the boy head-on.
It’s going to be getting dark here soon. We should either go into the woods or try to make our way to that castle.
Kaine glances back at the majestic castle.
Whoever made that must have been really powerful.
The sun gleams behind the castle spires, slowly moving down towards the horizon.
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"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
November 9, 2022 at 12:09 pm #121145@godlyfantasy12 Ahh, makes sense! Poor Paxton!
@elishavet-pidyon Cool!
@loopylin That’s a nice drawing! Oh, by the way, do you want to RP next? I just did one yesterday.@freedomwriter76 @koshka
Feather
âWe should probably keep going. See if we can find any others. Iâm sure the rest of my companions are hereâŠsomewhere.â Grimm looked down at Nyx.
Feather nodded. “That’s probably a good idea.” She looked around at the others.
Nyx would want to be with his owner, the girl she’d met before….Lyn, right?
And Paxton would want his sister.
And the others might have friends here, too.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
November 10, 2022 at 10:01 am #121192Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @keilah-h. @elishavet-pidyon.
Joshua
âWe should probably keep going. See if we can find any others. Iâm sure the rest of my companions are hereâŠsomewhere.â Grimm said, looking down at Nyx with a frown.
âThatâs probably a good idea.â Feather agreed, looking around the room.
Joshua nodded. “Maybe we can find Paxton’s sister.”
Jakob nodded in agreement. “True. And maybe we’ll find Reuben too…”
Wolfgang’s gaze fell and he bit his lip.
Wolfgang blamed himself for Reuben running away.
“Wolfgang…” Joshua whispered.
Wolfgang looked up and offered everyone a smile. “Well, come on then. What are we waiting for?”
Julius (Y’ALL!!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE I’VE FORGOTTEN HIM ALL THIS TIME!!! DX)
So much had happened…even within the last few minutes.
At least Nyx and Paxton were bandaged…and sleeping.
Julius slowly stood from where he was sitting against the wall.
Hitchens had been…well…terrifying.
Julius shuddered.
He reminded him of his father.
He took in a deep breath.
None of that.
Not here.
Not now.
“Well, come on then. What are we waiting for?” Wolfgang said, suddenly looking around at everyone.
Julius followed the others, falling into step between Crosshair and Nathan.
November 10, 2022 at 11:21 am #121194@keilah-h yeah, I can rp now! Sorry I was waiting because I was I was kinda out of ideas and wanted to see if freedom wanted to add anything first.
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EllieÂ
The gun fired and Eddie collapsed.
Ellie yelled and ran to her. She had fallen forward and now lay on her stomach in the grass. Ellie rolled her over and propped her head up on her knees with shaking hands.
Sheâs okay. It was just a stun. Sheâs okay. Sheâs just unconscious.
Repeating the thought to herself, she quickly inspected the spot where Eddie had been hit. A large bruise was forming just beneath her collarbone, a normal effect from a sun gun. Other than that, she looked alright. Ellie let out a small sigh of relief. Now, she just needed to get her to the ship. But how? Ellie tried lifting her up several times, but each time she slipped, and Eddie remained on the ground. Ellie has always been fast, but she wasnât strong.
Panic started welling up inside her again and she looked around desperately for someone to help.
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November 10, 2022 at 11:31 am #121196Yeah his hair comes down almost into his eyes. And covers his ears.
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Oh my gosh!! I forgot about Julius and Kursk! I knew I was forgeting someone XD.
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November 10, 2022 at 11:50 am #121197Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Reuben
Everything descended into chaos…fast.
Everyone was fighting.
Reuben slipped into a corner, breath heavy.
But…then…he saw something.
The two girls…the one that was hit on the ground…unconscious…the other…trying desperately to help her.
Reuben moved.
He had to help.
He just…he had to.
“Reuben, v’ere are you going!?” Kursk yelled, as he fought off the dark-haired knight. (Wayne)
Reuben ignored him…and made a run for it.
He got down onto one knee beside the girl.
She turned on him with a gun. “NO! Don’t hit her again!”
Reuben held up his hands. “Wait! I’m not going to hurt you…I’m going to help you…please…let me help you help her…”
November 10, 2022 at 11:51 am #121198Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. It’s okay. They’re so new, I forget about them sometimes too. You’re good! đ
It happens! xD
November 10, 2022 at 12:25 pm #121200@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Grimm sighed, taking up the lead on their group. Leo and the brothers were in step next to them, the hallway wide enough to fit most of them in twos.
He glanced at Paxtonâs sleeping figure, and then at Nyxâs, still curled in his arms. Thankfully the kitâs nightmares seemed to have lapsed, and he was no longer kicking or jerking in his sleep.
Grimm felt the silence grow around them, a bit stifling. Heâd brown used to Nyxâs constant voice in his head, or Jocelynâs cheerful conversation.
He glanced at the brothers, sighing. âIâŠmust apologize.â
They looked at him, stunned.
âFor your brother. Reuben. I apologize for the things I spoke, earlier. WasâŠnot the best way to handle the situation Iâm afraid. AndâŠI apologize.â
(also do you want to start some conversations about backstory?? Because that about Grimmâs sister was kinda just Thrown out there. Also, Grimm doesnât know much about the boys, and the boys got to see Paxton feathers for the first time, along with all the bruises on his back)
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#ProtectSebNovember 10, 2022 at 2:56 pm #121216@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Feather and Crosshair
âWell, come on then. What are we waiting for?â Wolfgang asked.
The group set off. Grimm took the lead.
All was silent for several minutes. Crosshair eyed Julius and Nathan as they picked up their pace to walk beside him, but he didn’t attempt to start a conversation.
“I must apologize.” Grimm said suddenly. “For your brother. Reuben. I apologize for the things I said earlier. WasâŠnot the best way to handle the situation Iâm afraid. AndâŠI apologize.”
The brothers looked at him, surprised.
Paxton and Nyx were still sleeping. Feather watched them.
She wondered what species Paxton was. He looked human….but what was on his back said otherwise.
What is Paxton exactly? Feather wondered, wanting to ask Grimm as soon as his apology was over.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
November 10, 2022 at 4:01 pm #121226@freedomwriter76 u wanna RP??
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