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October 13, 2022 at 9:09 pm #119402Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. It’d be SOOO FUN TO ADD THEM!!!! đ I’M READY TOOOOOOO!!!!!! đđđ
October 13, 2022 at 9:11 pm #119403I don’t know if this will go through, but KP is being… interesting right now. In my email notifications I can see that y’all have posted on here, but whenever I try to swap over to the forum it has the same castle as earlier, with is probably a page late, at this point…
Ugh. I’m trying to figure it out.
- This reply was modified 2 years ago by Koshka. Reason: Ato-correct needs to be pummeled
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkOctober 13, 2022 at 9:22 pm #119405@koshka I hate when stuff like that happens!!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 13, 2022 at 9:50 pm #119416@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @e-m-trepke anyone wanna RP?
or is it my turnâŚ.
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#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 13, 2022 at 10:11 pm #119417I did,did it go through? I’m seriously wondering if it didn’t. It should be on the previous page.
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
October 13, 2022 at 10:20 pm #119421(*Whispered* I think It’s your turn…unless I need to put one in for Mikkel? I’m not sure what I’d say for him though.)
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkOctober 13, 2022 at 10:54 pm #119422@elishavet-pidyon just saw ur RP!! @koshka @freedomwriter76 @e-m-trepke @keilah-h
November
ItâŚ.
It was over.
Novemberâs chest rattled. He tried to focus in on a single sight, but everything was a blur. His eyes cleared, giving him ample sight of everyone. Including the fallen guards.
And thankfully none of their own had fallenâŚ.
But they were injuredâŚ
AndâŚ
Some were bleeding.
And it wasâŚToo muchâŚtooâŚ
His stomach heaved, recoiling at the sight. His skin was clammy, his skin on fire.
A quiet groan escaped his lips as he turned away.
He was gonna be sickâŚ.
And ohâŚwas he ever soreâŚ.
Something warm, gentle, wrapped around his neck in a flash. Tight enough to surprise him, but not enough to upset his stomach anymore then it was.
âNovemberâŚâ Ara cried, chin resting into his shoulder. Her voice was tear-streaked, turning his queasiness into heartache. She pulled him a bit closer and he felt as all the tension left his body.
âNovemberâŚ.I-IâŚI didnât know if you made itâŚ.â She whispered. âThey said you did butâŚ.â
âY-Yea, I-Iâm okay,â he chuckled, hating the stutter in his voice. Ara let out a sigh, tickling his ear. He turned pink.
She stepped back, smiling. Then, her eyes grew wide, landing on his arms and torso.
âNovember, youâre bleeding!â
He blinked, glancing down.
Indeed, it seemed the hound heâd fought had gotten in quite a few good nicksâŚ
He winced at the sight, clearing his throat.
âAhâŚI-itâll be okay..â But Ara didnât look convinced. âR-really!â He smiled, trying to reassure her.
âMmmâŚ.MaybeâŚmaybe someone should check it anywayâŚI think everyone else will be needing it too,â she glanced back at the crowd.
Ah, rightâŚ
Speaking ofâŚ
JocelynÂ
âWellâŚthat was somethingâŚ.â Lyn huffed, glancing at the fox on her shoulder. She was bent over, out of breath for once in her life. Her hair half pulled from its ponytail, but still she was grinning.
She looked back at everyone else. âWe all here?â
Everyone looked at her, then smiled.
Except Franz.
âBarely!â The grumpy man muttered.
Lyn shook her head, sniggering. He was a crotchety old fellow, and she didnât like at ALL how he treated his sonâŚbut she had to admitâŚ
His grumpiness was starting to rub off on herâŚ
If only for the fact that it was hilarious.
She glanced at Nyx.
âYa good bud?â
âAll good here. You?â
âIâm Good. Now, donât think youâre gonna get out of explaining your pawâŚâ The fox frowned, looking away.
âDoesnât even hurt anymoreâŚâ
âUh-huh. Iâm sure..â She rolled her eyes.
âDonât believe him. Heâs a liar!â Naja cried from across the hall, giggling.
Nyx stared in shock at the little girl. Lyn laughed, before her eyes widened.
âWaitâŚyou can hear him?â
âThey all can. Didnât exactly have a choice in the matterâŚâ Nyx grumbled. Lyn sighed, shaking her head, but smiling.
AhâŚhow sheâd missed her friend.
Slowly, she lifted him from her shoulder and set him on the ground, but not before giving him a good long squeeze and a ton of pets.
And kisses.
Which he complained about immensely.
She turned on her heels.
âAnd nowâŚâ
She ran toward Ara and November, reuniting with her friends, in the form of a large hug that nearly knocked the two over.
Nyx merely waved at November, limped over, and was then lifted into the boyâs arms. The fox nudged the boyâs curls with his nose.
 âHey, Ginger.â Nyx grinned. Someone chuckled.
November sucked in a long breath. âHi, Nyx.â He gave the fox a couple pets, smiling.
âYou have a run-in with those mutts too?â Nyx glanced at him. November looked down at his ravaged shirt. He nodded meekly. âWell, good job for not getting mauled.â
âUhhâŚthanks?â
XD!!!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 14, 2022 at 1:13 pm #119448Afternoon fine fellows! (UmmâŚ)
Not-fellows cuz almost everyone on here is a girl!! XD
is anyone on? *taps mic* and for that fact, is this thing on??  XD
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @e-m-trepke @keilah-h#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 14, 2022 at 1:27 pm #119449I’m kind of, sorta, not really on right now, as I’m supposed to be doing math homework. (I’m homeschooled so is all my work homework?)
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkOctober 14, 2022 at 1:40 pm #119450@koshka hmmm I guess it is!!!
Do u wanna RP in a few minutes??
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOctober 14, 2022 at 1:56 pm #119451I can, but it’ll be a little bit. =)
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkOctober 14, 2022 at 2:37 pm #119455WaitâŚ
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-hHow many of you are fellow homeschoolers?
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorOctober 14, 2022 at 2:44 pm #119456@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
The fight was over, but…this was a mess. The guards had retreated, taking their wounded with them. Several in the group were injured, although none seriously. He caught sight of Zlatan looking for something to clean his blade and hands on.
“Ah, someone move the young folk farther down the hall.” Mikkel dug out his medical pack. Not that it was actually his.
Thankfully no one was serious. He had no idea how to treat anything worse than minor scratches and abrasions.
Vulkasin
Well, hadn’t that been exciting! He grinned and gave a flourishing bow to his brother.
“Vulkasin, take off your boots.”
“V’hat sort of greeting is zat?!”
Zlatan frowned, but the corner of his eyes crinkled. “So I can see how badly you got mauled.”
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkOctober 14, 2022 at 2:45 pm #119457I’m not sure…? A lot of us. XD
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkOctober 14, 2022 at 2:53 pm #119458@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @e-m-trepke who wants to go next?
also Vesper will have to introduce himself. And maybe not mention Corvinaâs name XD
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