A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc

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May 8, 2023 at 5:37 pm #142608
Anonymous
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@esther-c GIRLLLLL!!!!!! that scene was so sweet!!!! but I cried!!!! 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️
May 8, 2023 at 5:38 pm #142609
Smiley
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@esther-c

Awww it’s so sweet

I love it!!

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May 8, 2023 at 6:19 pm #142610
Esther
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@freedomwriter76

Tysm, girl!!! 🥰

I actually started writing this scene and thought of changing the POV from Ev to Ami since it was Ami’s family that was playing around, but then when I realized how Ev felt, I was like, no way am I changing this. I had never realized before that Ev didn’t get to goof off with his family because of Malyk. And that made me feel so much worse for him, cuz me and my fam goof off all the time. 😢

@smiley

Thanks so much, Miley!! 😊❤️

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 8, 2023 at 6:58 pm #142616
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@esther-c you are soooo welcome!!! ❤️

ahhh, the baby!!!! 😭🥺 yesss, so sad!!! 😢😢😭 my fam goofs off all the time too…makes me sad knowing that Ev’s and other families don’t 💔
May 8, 2023 at 7:09 pm #142617
MineralizedWritings
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@esther-c

Love the scene! 😭

@freedomwriter76

I saw that fanfic scene you posted with Steve and Bucky! It was so good! 😊😭

"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 8, 2023 at 7:11 pm #142619
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@mineralizedwritings ahhh, tysm!!! ❤️❤️❤️

i feel so bad for ma bois 😭🥺
May 8, 2023 at 9:16 pm #142637
Felicity
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@esther-c

Love that scene! Fynn is so typical bro. Poor Ev though. ;(

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May 8, 2023 at 10:22 pm #142639
Gwyndalf the Wise
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@freedomwriter76 @esther-c

AHH I LOVE BOTH OF THOSE SNIPPETS!!!

"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19
May 9, 2023 at 11:24 am #142656
Euodia
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*goes in a corner and sobs* THAT WAS SO SAD BUT GOOD!

I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 9, 2023 at 11:27 am #142657
Euodia
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@esther-c

Awwwww Ev!!! 😭 Poor boi.

Love the sibling interactions tho. 😂

I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 9, 2023 at 12:12 pm #142659
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@gwyndalf-the-wise @euodia-vision ahh, thank y’all so much!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
May 9, 2023 at 1:30 pm #142668
Esther
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@freedomwriter76

For real! 😭

It’s definitely one reason why I never want to give up on writing this story. I know that with God’s help, this will be able to change lives. 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you!! 😊

(I agree with your emoji. XD 😭)

@felicity

Thanks girl!! ❤️

For sure. 😉

Yes, the poor boi!! 😭

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Thank so much!! 🥰

@euodia-vision

I know, I feel so bad for him!! 🙍🏻‍♀️

Definitely. 😉 I love writing scenes like that. 😁 (What makes this scene even funnier though, is that the joke about hunting pancakes is sorta an inside joke that was created when our youth group went camping last year. 😂 I love throwing in Easter eggs like that. 😁)

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 9, 2023 at 2:02 pm #142677
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@esther-c

For real! 😭

Yesssss 😭😭😭

It’s definitely one reason why I never want to give up on writing this story. I know that with God’s help, this will be able to change lives. 🙂

Amen, sister! ❤️ Glad you’re determined to not give up!!! I believe the very same, which is why I keep writing! 😉 in fact…i may have a chapter to share later…😏
May 9, 2023 at 2:20 pm #142685
Esther
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@freedomwriter76

That’s awesome, Freedom!! Keep on writing for the Lord! 😊

Oooh, I’m looking forward to it! 😏

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 9, 2023 at 2:21 pm #142686
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@esther-c Tysm!! You too, sister, keep on writing for the King of Glory!!! ❤️❤️❤️👑✨✨✨

yessss…I’m actually almost done with it right now…hehe…😏😝😉
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