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@euodia-vision lol, I’m so glad!!! 😂😂😂 haha, yesssssssss, I love how they both call him those names!!!!!!! ❤️🤣
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I like that you do Marvel fanfic
I have about a hundred Ideas for a Marvel story I just haven’t gotten around to writing them.
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@smiley thx!!! ❤️ It’s a lot of fun, not gonna lie XD
You should totally write them!!! (if it won’t distract you from your books too much, that is 😉) They’re just so much fun!!!!! 😀
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soooo…idk who all remembers/even read the scene, lol, but I wrote a scene a while back (on page 29 of this forum, if y’all need a refresher 😉) where Hans was trying to make an example of/get information out of Riker, after Riker’s arrest.
Welp….I finally got around to writing the last of it 😅 Took me long enough! 😂😂😂
I really like how it turned out tho…so I wanted to share!!!
TRIGGER WARNING: MENTIONS/LIGHT DESCRIPTION OF TORTURE
Riker’s screams echoed off the snow; the buildings.
Every blow brought fresh blood, new screams.
Leon blinked with each blow. Some of the other men didn’t even bat an eye. Leon may have hated Riker…but that didn’t mean he was indifferent to the screams.
He had been in the camp for a year, but screams…they still got to him.
Riker screamed again, his scream bloodcurdling, nerve-wracking, and jarring, all at the same time.
Of course, Leon thought Riker deserved to feel pain. But even he was a little…jarred by it.
There were so many prisoners around…even guards and officers.
There was fear in everyone’s eyes.
Even guards. Even officers.
“Lord, be with him.” Isaiah prayed softly, quietly, attention fully focused on Riker. There were even tears in his eyes.
“Isaiah, are you cry-“
“Leon, shh…keep your voice down.”
Leon lowered his voice. “Are you crying…?”
“He’s suffering, Leon…how could you not cry? Have you heard the rumors? Do you even know why Riker was arrested?”
Leon shook his head. “No. Why was he?”
“There’s been rumors that he’s been rescuing Jews, getting some out of the camp, and also rescuing Jews in the Ghettos, keeping them from coming here.”
Yet he hadn’t helped Leon and Aadelheide.
And now Aadelheide was dead. Had been for months.
“I’ll believe it when it’s proved.” Leon retorted.
Riker, saving Jews? He hadn’t even tried to help Leon and Aadelheide.
“It seems like it already has been.” Isaiah replied softly, gaze returning to Riker again. “Them punishing him is evidence enough of that.”
Then why had Riker not helped Leon and Aadelheide?
“I’m sorry…truly, I am…if I had known…I would have done something…I would have…”
Riker’s own words. Was it entirely possible that Riker, as Isaiah said many times, truly hadn’t known about the camp?
Leon shook his head.
No. It was preposterous.
Riker was in the SS.
He had to know about the camp.
Sure, Leon hadn’t known…but Riker was an officer in the SS.
How could he not know about the camp?
Another scream plagued the air.
Riker had come to the barracks on Christmas.
Riker had gotten Leon an inside job when he was sick.
Riker had gotten medicine for Isaiah.
Riker had treated Yosef’s wounds.
Riker had let Leon see his wife.
But Riker had also killed Aadelheide.
Josef brushed a strand of his son’s curly black hair out of his eyes. “Everyone falls short, Leon. We all mess up. We all make mistakes. That’s why Christ came…so we could be saved from the punishment our sins demand.”
Everyone messed up. Everyone had good and bad in them.
But…no. Riker had killed. Riker had murdered. Aadelheide was dead because of him. Hundreds, thousands, maybe millions of people had been killed with his help.
‘for all have sinned and fall short of the glory of God.’
The verse from Isaiah and Yosef’s most recent Bible study.
Everyone failed.
Everyone fell.
Everyone messed up.
Everyone had hurt someone.
Everyone deserved death.
Everyone deserved hell.
Leon shook his head. Maybe it was true. Maybe it was reality.
But Riker had killed Aadelheide…he had killed Leon’s wife.
He couldn’t, wouldn’t, forgive him for that. He wouldn’t excuse that.
Riker didn’t deserve Leon’s forgiveness.
Not in a million years.
One more scream from Riker’s bloodied lips rippled through the air, and silence fell.
Hans stepped away from Riker, a sadistic smile spreading across his face.
Leon didn’t move…didn’t speak.
Isaiah and others…they said hatred got them into the mess of the war in the first place.
Leon had been taught from childhood that hatred was wrong. But if that was the case, why did it feel so good? Why did it feel so right?
@freedomwriter76 HA HA Ryo calling Rocket “kitty” was too funny.
Can I say Ryo is to me what you said Jareth was to you?? He’s so cute!
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@freedomwriter76 AGH THAT SCENE!
And ok, I can see even more similarities between Riker and Crosshair now……
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@keilah-h lol…i certainly thought so, so I’m glad you agree 😂🤣 And Thor being like: “oh, he’s calling the rabbit a kitty!!!” was actually something my dad said Thor would say when I was telling him about the fanfic 🤣
AGHHH, IKR!? ❤️😍 Man, put Ryo and Jareth together…CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGHH, IKR!? 😭 RIKER IS JUST SO SWEET AND HANS IS JUST SO VILE!!!!! 😭😡
AHHHHH, I KNOWWWWWWWWWWWW, RIKER AND CROSSHAIR JUST NEED TO MEET ALREADYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@freedomwriter76 RYO AND JARETH OH MY STARS AND SHADOWS YESSSSSSSS
And I KNOW RIGHT?? When can we organize that? Is Riker by himself in the castle or in a group?
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@keilah-h AHHH, IKR!?!?!? THEY WOULD JUST BE 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
YESSSSSSSS!!!!!!! Ahh, we can organize it whenever!!! XD Riker is with a group…but I can get him separated, no problemo 😂 I think it’d be kinda nice to move him to another group anyhow, lol. It’s Riker a bit from the future though, like, 5 years from when the book ends, so he’s saved and stuff, but he’s still struggling with guilt…oh…and he and Iris recently lost a baby 😢 But I’d LOVE to have Riker run into Crosshair!!!!!!!!
I think they met a long time ago with our old RPs, come to think of it, XD,…BUT THEY NEED TO TALK ABOUT STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!
@freedomwriter76 They did meet but didn’t talk much.
Depending on how your new characters in the current group act, Crosshair might easily take off or something. Feather will follow him, but they could end up separated. Opening up an opportunity to meet someone.
If not, you could just relocate Riker and whoever else of your characters you want him to be with.
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@keilah-h Yea…Riker was also with November and Mikkel most of the time 😂
speaking of which…I’m about to go RP as those 2 new charries 😉 Thx for reminding me! XD lol, he might take off.
What we could do, and you can give your thoughts, is separate Riker from his group, Crosshair from his group, and have the 2 of them meet up and maybe we could form a new group from them eventually, that way you would still have Feather with the group with Elliot, Hitchens, and the others.
and then Crosshair and Riker will have PLENTY of time to talk XD
@freedomwriter76 Yeah that might work.
I don’t exactly like separating the two, but hey, it might make him even more uneasy…..thus giving them more to talk about.
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@keilah-h you can have the 2 together if you’d rather!!!
But Crosshair does need to talk 😂
@freedomwriter76 Ehh, they can be together or apart, whichever works better in the moment. Come to think of it, Feather might actually be more bothered by your charries than Cross will be……
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@keilah-h lol. 😂
well, whenever you wanna do what’cha gotta do. I’m about to go on ahead and get Riker separated from his group bc I have a good chance to right now 😉
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