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November 20, 2017 at 10:37 pm #54105
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Aww, sorry! How bout a cameo appearence, then? (You don’t have to fill in the form thing)
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November 21, 2017 at 9:15 am #54120@dekreel That would be great but you don’t have to do it if it would be to hard for you.
November 23, 2017 at 9:07 pm #54292@lady-iliara @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @princessfoo
I have created maps of our worlds, and have assigned all of the characters into settings! So now I need someone to beta-read my maps. PLEASE let me know of any inconsistencies or anything I left out!! 😉
Here are my maps:
And a handy little legend:
Sorry about how small some of the maps are! They won’t get any bigger!
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November 23, 2017 at 9:16 pm #54296*mouth drops open* ANNND I forgot to post the Kingdom of Pen! Of all places…!!!
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November 23, 2017 at 9:29 pm #54301Also I need a name for my Writer’s Block villain. Something related to writer’s block, but, y’know, not totally obvious. Any ideas?
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November 23, 2017 at 10:24 pm #54312@dekreel for the maps, I think that they look great! (Did you draw those yourself?? If not, what did you use? I still need a map for my WIP 😉 ) although I don’t see Bootleg Pass in Aethasia (it leads from the beach [which I think is called Cog Bay] to No Man’s Landing, and my character lives about three quarters of the way to No Man’s Landing in Bootleg Pass), and I didn’t see Allora either (of course since @catwing already posted a map, I don’t think that you’d need to remake it, but perhaps [for reference purposes] you could add something like a little dot or something to show where it is, how far it is from the other islands, etc.) And although I don’t know much about the other places and so can’t exactly be of much help there, I think that your maps look awesome!
As for the villain, I sometimes pick a word that describes them and then use that, or I sometimes spell that word backwards (so maybe something like Kcolb S’retirw) and either use that or use it for inspiration.
Or if you don’t like that, what about something like (the) Inspiro Void (inspiration void)? Word Blocko? Count Condemner (word-count condemner)? I’m bad at names. ):
November 23, 2017 at 10:39 pm #54316@dekreel *jaw drops*
Those are some EPIC maps. Especially with all the topography legend and details
I don’t know that much about the worlds you’ve created, so I can’t be sure if there are any inconsistencies. But, awesome job. ;D
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.November 23, 2017 at 10:47 pm #54318@destiny I have never been to Aethasia (or played the game). Is Bootleg Pass a peninsula? So No Man’s Landing is in the Pass?
I used a very very very cheap computer program called KolourPaint.
@catwing is traveling in the Writer’s (@inkling-for-christ ‘s) TARDIS along with @emily. (In case you don’t know, a TARDIS is basically a spaceship/time machine. From Dr Who) Allore is on a different planet. So I’m not making a map of Allore.Thank you for the name suggestions!
@sam-kowal Thanks a lot! They’re my very first original maps!You can pronounce it however you want.
November 25, 2017 at 2:56 pm #54469@dekreel Sorry, I haven’t been on here in a while! (Thanksgiving, LoTR marathon, and all that 😏😏)
Here’s a map of Aethasia with some places labeled for your reference. 😉
( @aislinn-mollisong @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @0-0enyali0-0 @destiny)
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ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*November 25, 2017 at 11:48 pm #54499@lady-iliara Ohh… Aethasia is smaller than I thought. Thanks so much for the map! It’s very, very helpful!
So is the Snowmoors a mountain range or is it just an area with lots of ice? Or something else? Is there anything west of the Snowmoors? And how big is the Engine Bay? What’s that mountain next to Evercity? And where is Bootleg Pass?
Sorry about all the questions! 🙂
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November 26, 2017 at 1:16 am #54502@dekreel I’ll try to answer some of those questions…!
1. Honestly I have no idea, I haven’t gone to the Snowmoors yet in the game.
2. I don’t know that either… haha… I’m being very helpful!
3. Engine Bay is basically a beach. I’ll try to get in-game pictures of the place to give you a feel. It’s not a town or anything, it’s just a beach with an Aetherstep (portal).
4. The mountain next to Evercity is the Old Mount.
5. Bootleg Pass (I think) is in the middle of No Man’s Landing and Engine Bay. In the south of No Man’s Landing there is a pathway, and when you follow it, leads you to a fork: you can either go to Engine Bay or Smuggler’s Cove (a beach).
The red lines are Bootleg Pass. The arrow pointing to the end of the T is supposed to be Smuggler’s Cove not Bootleg Pass, haha!
I hope I didn’t confuse you more, heh heh heh… If you have questions it would be best to ask @lady-iliara XD
ISFJ, energetic, writer-crazy, and has-an-unstoppable-obsession-with-The-Aetherlight!
November 27, 2017 at 6:06 pm #54624@dekreel Ok, I’m here! The Snowmoors is mostly pretty flat, with lots of ice, although there are a lot of rock outcroppings. You’ll find snow cobras, snow scorpions, and snow crocodiles there. And I have no clue what’s west of the Snowmoors—that’s up to you, I guess. 😉 (I’ve never been to the mountains.)
And I think @0-0enyali0-0 explained it pretty well. Engine Bay is pretty small, a little cliff leading down to a beach. Bootleg Pass goes from the west edge of it to the east of No Man’s Landing. (Right to left) And Smuggler’s Cove is a little strip of coastline along the Pass. You can collect sea flowers there. ☺️
Hope that helps!
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ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*November 28, 2017 at 1:42 pm #54670Thanks @lady-iliara, @0-0enyali0-0 and @destiny!
@epicaddie2 @princessfoo Anyway I could improve my Araluen? Landmarks? Climate? Size? Cities?- This reply was modified 7 years ago by Joy.
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November 28, 2017 at 2:30 pm #54674IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT: I have selected three main characters for the KPA!
Presenting…
@princessfoo, @sam-kowal and Stan!!
Sorry to both of you for any inconsistensies in this drawing. 🙂
All the rest of you will be supporting characters, all in an army, like Bilbo and the dwarves! I will do my best to make all your characters as big as possible! 😀
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November 28, 2017 at 2:58 pm #54683@dekreel YESS
Stan is so thrilled that’s he’s, like, tearing the furniture in my house apart–STAN, THAT WAS MY BED YOU–oh never mind
The drawing is AWESOME by the way 😀 😀 😀
It’s the awesomeestist portrait of Stan and I that’s ever been conceived ;D
It really looks like Stan, too
I can’t wait to see us in the story 😀
Thanks and epic job on the concept art picture
*turns around*
STAN!!
He’s so excited to actually be in a book he just blew a flame, like, several feet long
I think that’s a record for him
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
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