KP Critiques Articles

KP Critiques! Writing Exposition and Description

Welcome back to another installment of KP Critiques! This is the corner where brave KeePers submit their work to Kingdom Pen for feedback.We talk a lot about many techniques for good writing on Kingdom Pen, but here we hope to show KeePers good writing techniques in...
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KP Critique! Writing Emotion and Grounding Your Reader in a Fantasy Setting

Welcome to another installment of KP Critiques! KP Critiques is where brave KeePers submit their work to Kingdom Pen for feedback.  At Kingdom Pen, we talk a lot about techniques for good writing, but here - through KP Critiques - we hope to show KeePers good...
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KP Critique! Lioness by Ella Fischer

Welcome back to another KP Critique! KP Critiques are where the Stewards of Kingdom Pen critique your work. We give suggestions for what could be improved, as well as point out all the awesomeness and writing lessons in order to help all writers improve. If you would...
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KP Critiques – Operation Bulls-Eye

Welcome back, KeePers, to another installment of KP Critiques!  This is the place where talented writers send in their work and the Stewards of Pen give feedback- highlighting both the good and what could be better.  If you want to get your story excerpt...
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