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  • #54105
    Joy
    @dekreel
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      @silverclaw-bonnetfolly Aww, sorry! How bout a cameo appearence, then? (You donā€™t have to fill in the form thing)

      You can pronounce it however you want.

      #54120
      Silverclaw Bonnetfolly
      @silverclaw-bonnetfolly
        • Rank: Wise Jester
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        @dekreel That would be great but you donā€™t have to do it if it would be to hard for you.

        #54292
        Joy
        @dekreel
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          @lady-iliaraĀ  @epicaddie2Ā  @aislinn-mollisongĀ  @princessfoo

          I have created maps of our worlds, and have assigned all of the characters into settings! So now I need someone to beta-read my maps. PLEASE let me know of any inconsistencies or anything I left out!! šŸ˜‰

          Here are my maps:

          And a handy little legend:

          Sorry about how small some of the maps are! They wonā€™t get any bigger!

          • This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Joy.

          You can pronounce it however you want.

          #54296
          Joy
          @dekreel
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            *mouth drops open* ANNND I forgot to post the Kingdom of Pen! Of all placesā€¦!!!

            You can pronounce it however you want.

            #54301
            Joy
            @dekreel
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              Also I need a name for my Writerā€™s Block villain. Something related to writerā€™s block, but, yā€™know, not totally obvious. Any ideas?

              You can pronounce it however you want.

              #54312
              Destiny
              @destiny
                • Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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                @dekreel for the maps, I think that they look great! (Did you draw those yourself?? If not, what did you use? I still need a map for my WIP šŸ˜‰ ) although I donā€™t see Bootleg Pass in Aethasia (it leads from the beach [which I think is called Cog Bay] to No Manā€™s Landing, and my character lives about three quarters of the way to No Manā€™s Landing in Bootleg Pass), and I didnā€™t see Allora either (of course since @catwing already posted a map, I donā€™t think that youā€™d need to remake it, but perhaps [for reference purposes] you could add something like a little dot or something to show where it is, how far it is from the other islands, etc.) And although I donā€™t know much about the other places and so canā€™t exactly be of much help there, I think that your maps look awesome!

                As for the villain, I sometimes pick a word that describes them and then use that, or I sometimes spell that word backwards (so maybe something like Kcolb Sā€™retirw) and either use that or use it for inspiration.

                Or if you donā€™t like that, what about something like (the) Inspiro Void (inspiration void)? Word Blocko? Count Condemner (word-count condemner)? Iā€™m bad at names. ):

                #54316
                Sam Kowal
                @sam-kowal
                  • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                  • Total Posts: 635

                  @dekreel *jaw drops*

                  Those are some EPIC maps. Especially with all the topography legend and details

                  I donā€™t know that much about the worlds youā€™ve created, so I canā€™t be sure if there are any inconsistencies. But, awesome job. ;D

                  *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
                  Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

                  #54318
                  Joy
                  @dekreel
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                    @destinyĀ  I have never been to Aethasia (or played the game). Is Bootleg Pass a peninsula? So No Manā€™s Landing is in the Pass?

                    I used a very very very cheap computer program called KolourPaint.


                    @catwing
                    is traveling in the Writerā€™s (@inkling-for-christ ā€˜s) TARDIS along with @emily.Ā  (In case you donā€™t know, a TARDIS is basically a spaceship/time machine. From Dr Who) Allore is on a different planet. So Iā€™m not making a map of Allore.

                    Thank you for the name suggestions!


                    @sam-kowal
                    Ā  Thanks a lot! Theyā€™re my very first original maps!

                    You can pronounce it however you want.

                    #54469
                    Lady Iliara
                    @lady-iliara
                      • Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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                      @dekreel Sorry, I havenā€™t been on here in a while! (Thanksgiving, LoTR marathon, and all that šŸ˜šŸ˜)

                      Hereā€™s a map of Aethasia with some places labeled for your reference. šŸ˜‰

                      ( @aislinn-mollisong @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @0-0enyali0-0 @destiny)

                      • This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Lady Iliara.
                      • This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Lady Iliara.

                      šŸ‘°šŸ»šŸ¦ŠšŸ’„
                      ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*

                      #54499
                      Joy
                      @dekreel
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                        @lady-iliaraĀ  Ohhā€¦ Aethasia is smaller than I thought. Thanks so much for the map! Itā€™s very, very helpful!

                        So is the Snowmoors a mountain range or is it just an area with lots of ice? Or something else? Is there anything west of the Snowmoors? And how big is the Engine Bay? Whatā€™s that mountain next to Evercity? And where is Bootleg Pass?

                        Sorry about all the questions! šŸ™‚

                        • This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Joy.

                        You can pronounce it however you want.

                        #54502
                        0-0Enyali0-0
                        @0-0enyali0-0
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                          @dekreel Iā€™ll try to answer some of those questionsā€¦!

                          1. Honestly I have no idea, I havenā€™t gone to the Snowmoors yet in the game.

                          2. I donā€™t know that eitherā€¦ hahaā€¦ Iā€™m being very helpful!

                          3. Engine Bay is basically a beach. Iā€™ll try to get in-game pictures of the place to give you a feel. Itā€™s not a town or anything, itā€™s just a beach with an Aetherstep (portal).

                          4. The mountain next to Evercity is the Old Mount.

                          5. Bootleg Pass (I think) is in the middle of No Manā€™s Landing and Engine Bay. In the south of No Manā€™s Landing there is a pathway, and when you follow it, leads you to a fork: you can either go to Engine Bay or Smugglerā€™s Cove (a beach).

                          https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui/54502/354cc97h6dndhpgv6mh97kmof0yx1llv.jpg

                          The red lines are Bootleg Pass. The arrow pointing to the end of the T is supposed to be Smugglerā€™s Cove not Bootleg Pass, haha!

                          I hope I didnā€™t confuse you more, heh heh hehā€¦ If you have questions it would be best to ask @lady-iliara XD

                          ISFJ, energetic, writer-crazy, and has-an-unstoppable-obsession-with-The-Aetherlight!

                          #54624
                          Lady Iliara
                          @lady-iliara
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                            @dekreel Ok, Iā€™m here! The Snowmoors is mostly pretty flat, with lots of ice, although there are a lot of rock outcroppings. Youā€™ll find snow cobras, snow scorpions, and snow crocodiles there. And I have no clue whatā€™s west of the Snowmoorsā€”thatā€™s up to you, I guess. šŸ˜‰ (Iā€™ve never been to the mountains.)

                            And I think @0-0enyali0-0 explained it pretty well. Engine Bay is pretty small, a little cliff leading down to a beach. Bootleg Pass goes from the west edge of it to the east of No Manā€™s Landing. (Right to left) And Smugglerā€™s Cove is a little strip of coastline along the Pass. You can collect sea flowers there. ā˜ŗļø

                            Hope that helps!

                            • This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Lady Iliara.

                            šŸ‘°šŸ»šŸ¦ŠšŸ’„
                            ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*

                            #54670
                            Joy
                            @dekreel
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                              Thanks @lady-iliara, @0-0enyali0-0 and @destiny!


                              @epicaddie2
                              Ā  @princessfooĀ  Anyway I could improve my Araluen? Landmarks? Climate? Size? Cities?

                              • This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Joy.

                              You can pronounce it however you want.

                              #54674
                              Joy
                              @dekreel
                                • Rank: Chosen One
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                                IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT: I have selected three main characters for the KPA!

                                Presentingā€¦

                                Ā 

                                @princessfoo, @sam-kowal and Stan!!

                                Sorry to both of you for any inconsistensies in this drawing. šŸ™‚

                                All the rest of you will be supporting characters, all in an army, like Bilbo and the dwarves! I will do my best to make all your characters as big as possible! šŸ˜€

                                • This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Joy.

                                You can pronounce it however you want.

                                #54683
                                Sam Kowal
                                @sam-kowal
                                  • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                                  @dekreel YESS

                                  Stan is so thrilled thatā€™s heā€™s, like, tearing the furniture in my house apartā€“STAN, THAT WAS MY BED YOUā€“oh never mind

                                  The drawing is AWESOME by the way šŸ˜€ šŸ˜€ šŸ˜€

                                  Itā€™s the awesomeestist portrait of Stan and I thatā€™s ever been conceived ;D

                                  It really looks like Stan, too

                                  I canā€™t wait to see us in the story šŸ˜€

                                  Thanks and epic job on the concept art picture

                                  Ā 

                                  *turns around*

                                  STAN!!

                                  Heā€™s so excited to actually be in a book he just blew a flame, like, several feet long

                                  I think thatā€™s a record for him

                                  Ā 

                                  *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
                                  Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

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