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November 20, 2017 at 10:37 pm #54105
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Aww, sorry! How bout a cameo appearence, then? (You donāt have to fill in the form thing)
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November 21, 2017 at 9:15 am #54120@dekreel That would be great but you donāt have to do it if it would be to hard for you.
November 23, 2017 at 9:07 pm #54292@lady-iliaraĀ @epicaddie2Ā @aislinn-mollisongĀ @princessfoo
I have created maps of our worlds, and have assigned all of the characters into settings! So now I need someone to beta-read my maps. PLEASE let me know of any inconsistencies or anything I left out!! š
Here are my maps:
And a handy little legend:
Sorry about how small some of the maps are! They wonāt get any bigger!
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November 23, 2017 at 9:16 pm #54296*mouth drops open* ANNND I forgot to post the Kingdom of Pen! Of all placesā¦!!!
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November 23, 2017 at 9:29 pm #54301Also I need a name for my Writerās Block villain. Something related to writerās block, but, yāknow, not totally obvious. Any ideas?
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November 23, 2017 at 10:24 pm #54312@dekreel for the maps, I think that they look great! (Did you draw those yourself?? If not, what did you use? I still need a map for my WIP š ) although I donāt see Bootleg Pass in Aethasia (it leads from the beach [which I think is called Cog Bay] to No Manās Landing, and my character lives about three quarters of the way to No Manās Landing in Bootleg Pass), and I didnāt see Allora either (of course since @catwing already posted a map, I donāt think that youād need to remake it, but perhaps [for reference purposes] you could add something like a little dot or something to show where it is, how far it is from the other islands, etc.) And although I donāt know much about the other places and so canāt exactly be of much help there, I think that your maps look awesome!
As for the villain, I sometimes pick a word that describes them and then use that, or I sometimes spell that word backwards (so maybe something like Kcolb Sāretirw) and either use that or use it for inspiration.
Or if you donāt like that, what about something like (the) Inspiro Void (inspiration void)? Word Blocko? Count Condemner (word-count condemner)? Iām bad at names. ):
November 23, 2017 at 10:39 pm #54316@dekreel *jaw drops*
Those are some EPIC maps. Especially with all the topography legend and details
I donāt know that much about the worlds youāve created, so I canāt be sure if there are any inconsistencies. But, awesome job. ;D
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.November 23, 2017 at 10:47 pm #54318@destinyĀ I have never been to Aethasia (or played the game). Is Bootleg Pass a peninsula? So No Manās Landing is in the Pass?
I used a very very very cheap computer program called KolourPaint.
@catwing is traveling in the Writerās (@inkling-for-christ ās) TARDIS along with @emily.Ā (In case you donāt know, a TARDIS is basically a spaceship/time machine. From Dr Who) Allore is on a different planet. So Iām not making a map of Allore.Thank you for the name suggestions!
@sam-kowalĀ Thanks a lot! Theyāre my very first original maps!You can pronounce it however you want.
November 25, 2017 at 2:56 pm #54469@dekreel Sorry, I havenāt been on here in a while! (Thanksgiving, LoTR marathon, and all that šš)
Hereās a map of Aethasia with some places labeled for your reference. š
( @aislinn-mollisong @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @0-0enyali0-0 @destiny)
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ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*November 25, 2017 at 11:48 pm #54499@lady-iliaraĀ Ohhā¦ Aethasia is smaller than I thought. Thanks so much for the map! Itās very, very helpful!
So is the Snowmoors a mountain range or is it just an area with lots of ice? Or something else? Is there anything west of the Snowmoors? And how big is the Engine Bay? Whatās that mountain next to Evercity? And where is Bootleg Pass?
Sorry about all the questions! š
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November 26, 2017 at 1:16 am #54502@dekreel Iāll try to answer some of those questionsā¦!
1. Honestly I have no idea, I havenāt gone to the Snowmoors yet in the game.
2. I donāt know that eitherā¦ hahaā¦ Iām being very helpful!
3. Engine Bay is basically a beach. Iāll try to get in-game pictures of the place to give you a feel. Itās not a town or anything, itās just a beach with an Aetherstep (portal).
4. The mountain next to Evercity is the Old Mount.
5. Bootleg Pass (I think) is in the middle of No Manās Landing and Engine Bay. In the south of No Manās Landing there is a pathway, and when you follow it, leads you to a fork: you can either go to Engine Bay or Smugglerās Cove (a beach).
The red lines are Bootleg Pass. The arrow pointing to the end of the T is supposed to be Smugglerās Cove not Bootleg Pass, haha!
I hope I didnāt confuse you more, heh heh hehā¦ If you have questions it would be best to ask @lady-iliara XD
ISFJ, energetic, writer-crazy, and has-an-unstoppable-obsession-with-The-Aetherlight!
November 27, 2017 at 6:06 pm #54624@dekreel Ok, Iām here! The Snowmoors is mostly pretty flat, with lots of ice, although there are a lot of rock outcroppings. Youāll find snow cobras, snow scorpions, and snow crocodiles there. And I have no clue whatās west of the Snowmoorsāthatās up to you, I guess. š (Iāve never been to the mountains.)
And I think @0-0enyali0-0 explained it pretty well. Engine Bay is pretty small, a little cliff leading down to a beach. Bootleg Pass goes from the west edge of it to the east of No Manās Landing. (Right to left) And Smugglerās Cove is a little strip of coastline along the Pass. You can collect sea flowers there. āŗļø
Hope that helps!
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ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*November 28, 2017 at 1:42 pm #54670Thanks @lady-iliara, @0-0enyali0-0 and @destiny!
@epicaddie2Ā @princessfooĀ Anyway I could improve my Araluen? Landmarks? Climate? Size? Cities?- This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by Joy.
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November 28, 2017 at 2:30 pm #54674IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT: I have selected three main characters for the KPA!
Presentingā¦
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@princessfoo, @sam-kowal and Stan!!
Sorry to both of you for any inconsistensies in this drawing. š
All the rest of you will be supporting characters, all in an army, like Bilbo and the dwarves! I will do my best to make all your characters as big as possible! š
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November 28, 2017 at 2:58 pm #54683@dekreel YESS
Stan is so thrilled thatās heās, like, tearing the furniture in my house apartāSTAN, THAT WAS MY BED YOUāoh never mind
The drawing is AWESOME by the way š š š
Itās the awesomeestist portrait of Stan and I thatās ever been conceived ;D
It really looks like Stan, too
I canāt wait to see us in the story š
Thanks and epic job on the concept art picture
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*turns around*
STAN!!
Heās so excited to actually be in a book he just blew a flame, like, several feet long
I think thatās a record for him
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