Zelphia Peterson

Oh! What was I thinking? I forgot to say hi.
Hi, Zelphia! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! We might get a bit crazy at times, but I think you’ll like it. (At least, I hope so. 🙂 ) Which genre of books is your favorite?
@ZCPeterson

@bluejay @corissa-maiden-of-praise @kate-flournoy
You three better be careful or you’ll scare @ZCPeterson away

Welcome @zcpeterson! What sort of things do you like to write? I enjoy fantasy and futuristic fiction…along with some retold fairy tales. 😉

@BlueJay *sheepishly brings back chocolate* What, how was I supposed to resist? *returns glare* *snickers* *bursts out laughing* *clutches stomach* Oh, doctor, I think I have a tummy ache! *smirks* 😀

@ZCPeterson, as you can see, we’re all pretty crazy. I’m probably crazy right now mainly because it’s way past my bed-time. 😛 😀

@kate-flournoy That’s fantabulous that you made up a new word. *giggles*
@corissa-maiden-of-praise If you end up with a tummy ache don’t turn to me.
You see @zcpeterson We are all nuts here. *and naughty, glares at Corissa*

On second thought, @ZCPeterson, the last line would probably be better as
The realms He holds safe in the palms of His hands. 🙂

Welcome, welcome, and thrice welcome @zcpeterson!

(You wouldn’t happen to be in anyway related to Andrew Peterson? He’s one of my favorite authors, so I have to ask. 😉 )

@BlueJay *stares at chocolate* *slowly grabs one* *hesitates* *disobeys and runs off with it all*

@ZCPeterson welcome! Another poet! We can always use more poets around here. The world can never have enough of poetry. 😉
And don’t worry; most of the forumers were stalkers long before they ever actually got involved. *winks* I think that’s because most writers are introverts. *grins*
So glad to be able to welcome you to the… uh… um… the…[Read more]

Hi! I see that lots of people have beat me to it, but welcome @zcpeterson! You are now allowed to eat crazy amounts of chocolate and carry a dagger! 😛

Hi! I see that lots of people have beat me to it, but welcome @zcpeterson! You are now allowed to eat chocolate and carry a dagger! 😛

@zcpeterson first of all, I really love this poem. I love the idea of building a poem off a piece of scripture, and you executed it very well. I may have to try this… 😀

The only thing that really needs work is what @Daeus said about the meter. For instance, take the first verse:

Who among you can number the stars
Who can count every small…

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Oh, @zcpeterson, I noticed you like Louisa May Alcott. I am reading Little Women right now! (spoiler) Why did Beth have to die? WAAAHHH!
You also mentioned Jane Austen. I will also be reading Pride and Prejudice for school this year! Yay!

@zcpeterson, welcome! So happy you can join us! I don’t grapple to be the first to welcome… (*@daeus, @hannah-krynicki… cough, cough*) 😉 I let you guys have the honor. Actually, I only just noticed that you got on. Whew! I said it.
Well, you can do a lot here. First, check out the forums! I suggest reading the Ren forum under general…[Read more]

@zcpeterson My general impression is that it could use a consistent meter.

@zcpeterson Hello and welcome. *rats, I was beaten!* 😮 I really like the poems you sent in. It’s great to have you on board the forum now.
*wonders whether to echo Hannah* *decides not to and just points up to her post* Just follow her instructions and you’ve got it. 🙂
One thing I will tell you about is tagging. Your tag is @zcpeterson. Now that…[Read more]

@zcpeterson

Hi Zelphia, nice to meet you.
I’m not the best person to tell you what you can do, but here’s what I do.
Read all the short stories and poetry, I make random comments on random forums, and occasionally, when I’m feeling brave, I even almost submit different works of mine.

@zcpeterson I’ll beat everyone to it this time: Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet! Now that you’re here, you: 1) act crazy like the rest of us, 2) ask writing questions, 3) give advice, 4) talk about whatever’s on your mind, and 5) hopefully join the KeePers’ book club. And most of all, you have fun. Look around and jump in; looking…[Read more]