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Elfwing replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 so am i wrong in assuming it would be similar to a hypertrophic scar? which looks raw and fresh but is actually healed, or is it a literal open wound?
if it was an open wound that might constantly be sticky and getting dirty because of whatever factors of the story, that could, cause infection which would also contribute to it not…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
smh things we’ll never understand. XD
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Anatra replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Lol I thought my laptop was buggy
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
It’s so hard to figure out how to injure your characters without permanently disabling or killing them… XDXD
Anywho, here’s what I’ve got to share!
- Head wounds
Head wounds bleed A LOT and for a long time. A small cut in the forehead (probably no longer than an inch) by the hairline, caused by contact with a blunt object,…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
OoOoooOooo As George Villiers famously wrote: “The plot thickens…”
mmmm, I see
Absolutely! Glad to help.
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Anatra replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
AAAHHHHH Gwweeeeeennnn
lol when I first watched the Amazing Spider-Man 2 (the one where *cough* she *cough* dies) my oldest brother only told me one thing abt the movie, he told me that Gwen dies in the most terrible way possible. All through the movie, horrified eleven y/o little me was picturing a million gruesome things…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
OH YESYESYESYESYES Flacon and the Winter Soldier, beautiful. If it were a book, I’d’ve re-read it, bought it, put it on my shelf and joined the fandom. *lol the proper standard to judge a movie*
Yea, and The First Avenger’s vintage soundtrack and costumes *chef’s kiss* perfect.
Lol I’m not gonna get the Avengers theme out of my…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
*Franticly searches* Where’d Storm go!?
That was great! I love the body language, the tones, the pros, the emotion, it’s so pretttyyyy :DD
Is this a scene from a bigger WIP? Cuz the only thing I wanna say is lacking a little bit, is the relative placement context(not a technical term XD).
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Anatra replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
YESS
My older brother and I are such Spider-Man fans lol.
Rn him my little sister and I are going through all the Marvel movies in order, everything but most of the rated R movies(extremely stupid decision, yes we have sacrificed world communication for this). We’re almost at phase four, gotta work through the tv series tho. As…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
XD hullo there
Love your pfps btw (I could fangirl over Marvel for hours)lol I have four siblings and my family practically adopted a toddler through babysitting for two years, so for a while I had five.
Oh my goodness how many times I would look up while eating or doing school and my younger sister was staring a death glare…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic Drafting scenes as playscripts in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Anatra replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
“You will never sleep again;
though you will never stop dreaming.
The end can only follow the beginning.”*embodiment of what I hope to write;-;*
Yeesssss I love it so much!
lol writing prompt number sixty one perfect realistic sibling relationship XD
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Anatra replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
THis is so cool!
For the minute I shall *poetry*
Break My Heart
Joy HarjoThere are always flowers,
Love cries, or blood.
Someone is always leaving
By exile, death, or heartbreak.
The heart is a fist.
It pockets prayer or holds rage.
It’s a timekeeper.
Music maker, or backstreet truth teller.
Baby, baby, baby
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Anatra replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 2 years, 2 months ago
Oof, I see the issue. Lotsa tension right here lol
Great character, btw.
Is she alone with November, or is it November, her and Corvina?
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Anatra replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yeessss I love these points in books
*I offer advice based on elementary observations and a house full of constantly injured and nursed daredevil little brothers*
ahem. *places spectacles precariously on nose tip*
Shall we?
For a non-magical injury, he may be concussed depending on how hard he hit his head. If this is in…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic Character Templates! in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
I like this! Gj. It came out so well.
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Lydia S. started the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Hey, ya’ll!
Lydia, here. 🙂 So, I thought it’d be fun to start an inspiration exchange thread!
This is a place where we can all dump interesting photos or dialog prompts we happen to find or come up with, and it’s also somewhere where we can resort to if we need inspiration! Post as many prompts/pictures as you’d like, but please make sure they…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ezra glanced at her.
Gave her a small, soft, sweet smile. “Eva…you save my life every day.”
THOSE LINES.
I’M DEAD. YOU’VE OFFICIALLY KILLED ME.
GOODBYE.
Yeah, those were pretty great…
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ezra…
*broken-hearted sniffles*
And I’m with @koshka on this one… It’s good Ezra’s attackers are fictional… XDXD
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Elfwing replied to the topic Self publish… HEEEELP in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 3 months ago
@daisy-torres @r-m-archer thank you both
yeah i know amazon isn’t great to support but if it works… gotta pick the lesser of the evils and difficulties i guess lol
I’ll check out LuLu though
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