Joseph Darkgrate

@xonos-darkgrate Welcome to the dark side, Xonos. We have ice cream.

XD

Well, you might’ve guess that this isn’t the dark side. We have too many elves and unicorns for that. But anyway, welcome! Glad to have you!

Cool name, BTW.

@xonos-darkgrate It isn’t filled with catwings. We live there with Griffins, mermaids, jackelopes, humans, and other things.
*throws choclate since you are probably allergic to feathers too.* *adds chocolate notes to Catwing handbook*

@xonos-darkgrate Heh, you’re welcome! By some sort of blessing or curse, I can’t help noticing all the punctuation-ish things, so it wasn’t a problem. 🙂 The comma is slightly mis/overused sometimes, but I totally understand how easy it is to just go with it when you’re on a roll. Best wishes for the rest of the book!

@xonos-darkgrate *flys in through window* Hello and welcome. I am Catwing, Abassador of the catwings of Allore (a kingdom in my book).
If you are feeling alone, I can not (and do not wish to) read any of the Harry Potter books (or movies). *starts humming* I will read your except later. But I am trying to write… *nervous laughter* edit.

Good answer @xonos-darkgrate. I recommend reading this.

@xonos-darkgrate Yep, the narrative voice is sweet.

@xonos-darkgrate I agree, that was really well done. Very good at drawing the reader in, too. And I love the beginning quote by the Jake of Jacks guy.

I have a few things to point out, but they’re mostly just structural/punctuation stuff. The first paragraph, after it says The City of Cards, is mixing past and present tense. I can see how it…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate I really, really like the excerpt you posted. The voice is very strong. The one criticism I have is that the summary of his early life never really clearly transitioned into the present. He was looking back, and I never quite caught where he stopped and began living the current story.
And I’m already curious about Brandon. 😉

@xonos-darkgrate Oh sorry, yup, that’s basically what I meant. Are you male or female. 😛 So you’re the first INTJ/Architect (dominantly at least) guy on this forum as far as I know. That’s real cool.

Aha, gotcha.

@xonos-darkgrate so, des that in your mind mean that God loves us one on one? Does that mean that He is a kind ruler? Or does that mean He is our friend and constant companion?

*Nods* However, that answer was good, I will stop my probing for a while now.

@xonos-darkgrate Ah, right. Well, you’ve probably gathered that they are nothing alike, but another site that is a bit better than Wattpad is Sweek? It isn’t Christian, but is not as, well, dodgy as Wattpad. I’m on both as J.A.Penrose. So, if you need a Christian around, I’m there.

*Nods* A good answer. But is living for Christ what he desired?…[Read more]

What’s the point of the game? @xonos-darkgrate

Heheh, well, here comes a belated ‘Aiya’ from over here! Oooh, sounds like ye write some interesting things… *squints* are you on Wattpad, or just know about it and are looking for a safer place?
Also, just to find out a tad about you, what is the purpose of your existence here on Earth?
Anyways, welcome to KP @xonos-darkgrate

What even is Aetherlight, anyway? @aislinn-mollisong @xonos-darkgrate

Fair enough. In my own defense, I do read the Bible, I’ve just chosen to guard my own heart against the “evil” in the Harry Potter books and enjoy it as a story instead. That’s how it was meant to be taken, after all.

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Yep, that’s exactly what she means. @xonos-darkgrate

It’s funny you mention the argument behind not reading Harry Potter, because this is where my mother stood, up until the moment when I told her that I felt I was strong enough in my faith to not be effected in any way by reading about such witchcraft and magic. It took several conversations,…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate awesome! INTJs and INTPs both are so cool. 😀 I’m an INFP myself.

@xonos-darkgrate I feel you. I just have so many worlds swirling around in this head of mine just waiting to be dumped onto a blank page. 😜

@xonos-darkgrate That is so cool. INTJs are one of the neatest types. We have several on here, though only female as far as I know. Which are you? For some reason I thought you were a guy, but I don’t know.
And I identify with getting more than one result. 😛 I’ve gotten several different results, and with a lot of reading and thinking it over…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate Well, it looks like you’ve already been pretty properly introduced around this fair kingdom. But I figured I might as well stop and say hello and welcome. Glad to have you here. Seems like you’ve already been having some fun discussions. I’m glad to see it. 🙂