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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@mnvalentine Yes, I was laughing, too, as I wrote it. It’s another one of my favorite parts XD
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Joy replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
By the way, I really loved your poem “Autistic”! That was really beautiful.
Thank you!! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Eight: Up a Tree
Having just hidden a Star Trek GIF, Skredder suddenly lifted her head. “Earthquake,” she simply said.
Everyone looked at her. “What?” said Valentine.
“Earthquake! An earthquake’s coming!” Skredder repeated.
“She’s right! I feel it, too!” called Catwing from a tree branch.
“But earth…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
What is all that on top? I didnt mean to write that! This crazy computer.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
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@rochellaine. Well, sometimes my cousins call me Sylvester, so maybe you are calling me.;) -
Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine I think dragons might still exist some places on the earth, and I do believe that there used to be lots of them. But dragons are viewed kind of like unicorns are. Maybe there were unicorns as well? 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Oh, I just put the italics there to let you know what the difference was. So really I meant it would look like this:
“When it threw fearsome flames at me.”
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Well done!! I love the parable you used! 😀
The one thing I would change is instead of “When fearsome flames it threw at me,” I would say, “When it threw fearsome flames at me.” Unless you want it to be elegant, in which case feel free to ignore that suggestion 😉
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine By the way, what is with “Sylvester!” if you dont mind me asking?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Maybe if its a serious poem, use a fear of something that isnt as fantasized as dragons are. If its a comical poem, then use whatever imaginary creatures you can find. Even still, I love it! Its an awesome poem. Dont take my advice because I said so, because I still have tons to learn!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Oops. I spelled force like forse. Sorry about that. Sorry its such a lousy part, but I wasnt sure what else to write.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
“Where do you think your going?” Akira asks, pushing me back onto the bed. Tears begin to form in my eyes. I pull myself up again with trembling hands and forse my eyes to focus. “The Ravine.”
Akira’s blond head shakes back and forth. “Are you out of your mind?”
“Please!”
“No. You can’t. Just look at yourself! I know you want to get it,…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@sam-kowal. Dear Stan, most eloquent of dragons, I give thee thanks from the depths of my heart for the warm greeting bestowed upon me! I am indeed grateful for the hearty welcomes of the kapeefers and excited to be here among such talented writers and creautures! You are the first dragon I have ever heard of that has a taste for raspberries, …[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine I like it! Although its kind of in between serious and comical at the same time. Thanks for sharing!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@ariella-newheart Thank you! I like what the names mean, so thats why I chose them as a pen name. What do you like to draw?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
Right handed. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@catwing I love your characters names! I love coming up with names! Romance or not, it sounds like a story I would love to read! Is it a roman island like in the Mediterranean?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@sam-kowal. Hello! Yes I have heard of Stan. Tell him hi from me. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
@kaya-young Jenna would live in a log cabin, hands down.
@that_writer_girl_99 Ohh… Ummmmmm… probably shapeshift
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Joy replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@ingridrd We seemed to have hijacked your thread… XD
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