@xonos-darkgrate
Active 3 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Your stories are so fantastic!!! This is great! The way B-bot talks makes him sound both cute and wise. 🙂 But I have to ask…what is a B-bot? Is it something you made up?
*patiently waits turn to be in story*
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Joy replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x *appears from realm of the hiatus*
HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!
*disappears again*
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh, actually I think I see how. Is it that little box in the corner that says edit? @rochellaine
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine No, how do you do it?
That poor Uncle Bill.. 😛
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Actually, I have to go. 🙁 Hopefully will be back shortly! @rochellaine
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I meant to say characters.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I am working on perfecting my plot line and character for The Crimson Cup. Are you rescuing Uncle Bill?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Im here! Are you on still?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What Should I Do? in the forum Music 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @sam-kowal @seekjustice
I have another thought on singing. I was reading in Romans this morning, and I read the part where Paul was talking about not offending other believers. Do you think that sing “shady” songs, might cause younger, weaker believers to stumble?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano I got them. I cant wait to read them!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano That would be great! My email is imexinart@gmail.com and make sure to let me know who you are in the subject line.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
😀 I was going to send you a friend request. You beat me to it! @livgiordano
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano Yes, please post more!! It really has helped me. I memorized it. I think of it all the time. And good job getting @filewriterbase13x to join. She’s been awesome! Did you read The Light Triumphs? Its the first I have submitted to KP, but you might enjoy it.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano Oh my goodness! WOW! Let me tell you that is one of my FAVORITE poems on planet earth!!! I love it! And it came at a time in my life when I really needed that. (It was before I joined KP.) Yeah, it was so awesome I wrote it it my diary. And I wanna hang it on the wall. Its so beautiful!!!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano Are you the one who wrote the poem “Broken”!!!!????
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Okay, sure.
I think you were pretty detailed. You could describe the room and the people’s faces a little more.
I have a good idea of the guy. His face is not clear in my mind though.
The emotion was good. It wouldn’t be bad if there was more though. A few words describing it a little more would help.
I would def…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x I like it! Its really good! I think its well balanced with the things you mentioned. What era is it? Modern?
Do you and livgiordano know eachother?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Whoops! I wish I could help you finish the dishes so you can come sooner…
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Are you working on your western?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Im on for an unknown amount of time. Might have to go shortly. Working on characters for The Crimson Cup.
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