WritingWren

@raxforge

You may!

And here is your answer!

Hope you like him!!

@theducktator

Here’s You’re girl!!!

@godlyfantasy12

YES?!?!! XD

@whalekeeper

Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.

Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.

@loopylin @raxforge

Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?

Syph

“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”

Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]

@raxforge @loopylin

Apology? Whoops, I think I missed one. I’ll rp in a minute.

@loopylin

XD

Thank you, thank you.

I need to write too. XD

Actually though, I’m trying to make my writing itself be consistent. I’m finding it hard to keep a balance of action/description/dialogue. That makes it even harder to write, because what I do write doesn’t even sound like the same book. Or needs a lot of action to connect it, but not summed up, sped through action like…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

AHH! Godly is here!

*Hugs*

What do we have here? A November scene?!

*Excited reading*

*Meets this Callan and his cuckoos.*

Who is this creep?

*plots to cause him destruction*

*finishes reading*

Aw, November, it’s not your fault, dearie.

Great section! Grammatically, the writing is rough, but the scenes flows well. Vivid…[Read more]

I need to work on consistency, which I get is mostly self-discipline (and which is something I’ve always had to work on, writing life aside). I want to write, but I don’t have to write, and there are many things in my life right now that I have to do. Setting aside a specific time to do what I want, even when I’m tired, has been hard. But I’m tr…[Read more]

Callan’s….oof. I so want to strangle that creep

@godlyfantasy12

*Slowly freaks out*

November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-

*Freaking out escalates tenfold*

@savannah_grace2009

Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!

I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜

💕💕💕

So for a while I stopped writing altogether, because even when I would try to write happy things that didn’t include violence or too much evil or darkness, somehow the topic would always shift. And my heart was…

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@linus-smallprint

Ha!

That’s kind of funny, but Julian would KILL anyone who did that to him.

Plus it seems a little cliched.

BUT, it was funny. XD

@linus-smallprint

Got it.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, I’ll fix that. He was supposed to be joking. If he was joking would it work?

Sorry. Sometimes, I shy away from commitment and speak with uncertainty (that’s one of the ways my character, Eric, is like me). Maybe waiting until they are published would be a good idea, but yes, I will let you use them as a r…

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@linus-smallprint

I thought he might want to turn back and no longer continue with them at this point, seeing this as a sign to return to his village and be with Liesle (if I spelled that right). But he seems determined to keep going for the moment.

Yeah, Roland’s pretty stubborn.

Julian is sounding a bit like a mother here. (I’m not sure i…

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@linus-smallprint

I thought so.

A lot happened in that last section that I was hoping on feedback for, so it was surprising when you didn’t say anything. XD

@liberty

Would you be okay with me moving on? I don’t need you to give instant feedback if you’re unable to keep up.

If you really need me to wait a day though then I can.

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, okay. Well that’s odd.

Okay, so you have reached the point where Roland is injured.

No thoughts on the assassination attempt?

idk what I ended up saying.

Okay…. let me go look.

Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad the characters are becoming more alive! Hybridlore would disagree with you on not having all of…[Read more]