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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
perhaps…
more like a knitted hat.
if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.
what do you think of Leon’s backstory?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Good section. The new prince’s beliefs make more sense now.
Yeah, he’s a character you almost feel bad for.
And we got to find out Leon’s backstory!!
I thought you’d like that.
Does him getting angry when Julian was all excited about him being the White Knight in the last book make sense now?
Did any of it surprise you…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
Ugh! I posted two hours ago, but KP ate it!
NEXT SECTION!
Extra long to make up for yesterday.
 It was several hours later that the sound of steps echoed in the hall outside. Julian and Leon stood as the door opened.
The guar…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
young-earth creationist.
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Koshka replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 5 months ago
Ah, this question.
I believe in a young earth, both scientifically and personally.
What is amazing to me is looking back at what we can figure out of how the Earth formed, and how that aligns with Scripture if you let Earth be young (Genesis 1 is shockingly scientific, so to speak).
(Plus, the Geologic record…there are some…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
no section today.
Super busy.
Sorry!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
You can do it! I would love to see it when it’s done, if you want to share, and if that helps give motive.
(But I totally get what you mean. I have a drawing I’ve been slowly working on, off and on, for about a year. All I have left are her feet and half her hair, but it’s still sitting on my desk, unfinished.)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Girl! That is so beautiful. I love it. The colors make a lot of sense. The moon is lovely, as are the leaves and his expression, in my opinion. I feel like I can really envision him now. My mental image has been edited. 😀 Thank you for sharing!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
*mouth open in shock*
GIRL!!!!!
NO WAY!!!
That is AMAZING!!!!!!
I love it so much!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Noooooo. Don’t give up! I want to see it!
Ahhh! It’s tomorrow!! Where is it?!?!
That was so cute!!!
That’s super cool that you can do that!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Are you threatening me?
Remember what happened last time?
Okay, I can smooth out the shifts,
Ah, thanks for the grammar catch.
I like how the soldier tries to get Julian and Leon to admit they’re traitors, and finally he’s just like, well, you’re the guys who defected, so there.
Lololol. He’s just not having it.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Fabulous! I’ll try to make it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
*gags*
I don’t even know who to tag in this conversation. XD I loath sluggs. They’re cute in theory, but they also creeped me out as a little child. I struggle with slimey/sticky things already, so they just aren’t my thing. Lol.
My mother likes Banana slugs though. She has a sticker with one on it beside the name of her home state. (It’s a cute…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
Leon blew on his hands and rubbed them together. He stood up and went to his pack. Digging through it, he found his scarf. It was worn, and there were a few tears along the edge. He held it in both hands and though…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
large fines could leave a family destitute and starving. Public retribution could be anything, including baring them from work or places of business or physical punishment.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
*blink* they have those?
BUT WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME BEFORE!!!!! *SOBS*
I guess I never stopped to think there might be such simple things on line. I mostly just use it when I have something super crazy complicated.
You know what would be funny? If you had Leon make the same mistake, forgetting that Julian wasn’t with h…
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