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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@GracieGirl *cheers you on*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*throws pizza around for the party*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Jess Yay cool! Welcome. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Dragon-snapper eyyy. Hiya.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Daeus I’ll join you!
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m a tad late but someone mentioned motivational pizza sooo. *gives you both platefuls for next time you have a writing session*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 It really depends on how you’ve done the rest of the novel really. It could easily be seen as a copy, unless you give it that unique aspect or feel. And you’re already pointed in the right way for that.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 You’ve done a pretty great job with this whole thing! *applauds*
Although it does have a very ‘Harry Potter gets a letter from Hogwarts’ feel to it… 😛 -
Jane Maree posted an update 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 sorry that I have been taking a while over critiquing your chapter. >.< I've been on holidays at my cousin's house so I kept getting interrupted when I was doing it. I'm working on it now though, and I'll go a little bit more of a rough once-over and get it done for you. Sorry that it's been so long though. D:
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yess that’d be a great idea. I think it would be cool to have a weird daydream and then hold it- it was real?? *nods*
Oh yep, that prologue is good.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92
Okay so I’ve put all my notes and critique points into a google doc (hopefully that works for you). I haven’t finished going through it yet (but I’ll keep going after I post this for you), but as far as I have at the moment I’m quite enjoying it. It had a cool prose style that I’m quite liking. Good job. *thumbs…[Read more] -
Jane Maree replied to the topic OYAN considerations in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Jess
I liked the layout and style of the workbook. It is true that over half of it was planning and the writing part only started at lesson forty-something (out of 70-ish), but that basically meant -for me- that I was well and truly ready for writing, and I knew completely what I was doing and where I was going with the novel before diving in. If…[Read more] -
Jane Maree replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 WELCOME TO THE BESTISTEST PLACE ON THE INTERNETS. *flails*
GO YOU. ANOTHER AUSSIE ON THE FORUM. *dances* I, too, am Australian – and there’s several others around the forum too!
I’m 10th grade. *nods* and homeschooled.
Yesss piano. I love music. (I play (self-taught) piano too, as well as several other instruments.)
Ookay so I’m an INFP…[Read more] -
Jane Maree and
The Impossible Girl are now friends 9 years ago -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Woohoo another Aussie!!! I would join you, but I’m just about to have dinner so I can’t. >.<
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Winter-rose alrighty! See you in the future. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’m still around. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Dragon-snapper good job! *applauds*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years ago
@Dragon-snapper I had a little bit of this in the first book of my trilogy. But I was able to use the Snarky Adventurous character as a Foil and an important part of the MC’s character arc, so that occupied him enough not to have to be a main. (And then in book two I had him as the main protagonist so that worked out well)
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