@whalekeeper
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I have a way I can do a bully. She’s a shapeshifter, by the name of Narsa Jeptune. She’s actually an adult, but since she’s a shapeshifter, that doesn’t really matter. In Shyton, she’s a school teacher, but here we can say she was rejected for teaching, so came as a student named Judy Emerson instead. She’d join the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I have a Tenz scene!
@ellette-Giselle @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @whoever
It’s not that great, so don’t go in expecting much
Tenz brought his knees up to his chest, resting his cheeks on his patella’s, and wrapping his arms around his legs. His large, childish eyes looked from Roan resting on t…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Thank you. It’s maybe COVID, but ehhh, I’ve had covid twice already, so I’ll be fine😂 Ty tho💖
Freedom’s Fire (Book 1): Start of the story; Leon/Riker’s journey during WWII; Leon’s plunge into Hatred; Riker’s plunge into Guilt/Shame; ends with an unfinished life story for both of them (spoilers, but🤷🏻♀️)
Broken Shackles (Book…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok @rae @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @anyone else who cares
Here’s the opening scene for Slick
Slick
“Alright class,” the music teacher said matter-of-factly, closing the damaged door to hide the dancing invaders, “let’s get back to it.”
Unfortunately for the music teacher, no one was having that anytime soon. The room exploded…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @grcr @keilah-h @anyone-I-missed Thank you all for your kind words💖 And I’m happy to hear about everyone’s writing progress! <3 And even if your writing progress is slow, don’t worry, everything will come together in God’s perfect timing💖 And everyone will know when Freedom’s Fire is released, don’t worry :3 @whaleke…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot
Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @freed_and_redeemed
Btw, I thought I’d tag a few people and mention that I’ve been sketching characters if anyone is interested. I started the forum here.
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calyhuge replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper what have you done 🫣
revenge shall be mine 😈
Whaley: I am a member of the mafia.
Also Whaley: My great-grandfather was Al Capone’s jeweler, and some of my other relatives snuck moonshine across the president’s backyard.
Pastor at Youth Group: Does anyone have any comments about the passage in Revelation about the Lamb who…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
She wouldn’t want to join the gang probably because she’d see them as failures or something, but we could have a Wednesday personality (if you don’t understand, it was a tv show. I’ve only watched a review and a vid called “best Wednesday quotes” on youtube but she seems pretty funny…in a dark way) I just wouldn’t be able…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper I just couldn’t resist the character backstory! You could have a coal-miner or a minister if you wanted because those are my Welsh ancestors (mostly coal miners though). Although my grandfather’s second cousin is a druid and I went to his house. Also diabetics and polio. Fun times in the homeland!
Well if I have ideas for more…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@rae @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2008 (I think that’s everyone active in this RP at this time, correct me if I’m wrong)
Here are some ideas I’ve been having for bullies: (only 3 so far)
The leader is a skinny boy in all grey with a grey hoodie. He’s been here the whole time, just sort of seeing how he ends up in the social structure. Now, he…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
UPDATE TIME
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol
Freedom’s Fire is sooooooo close to publishing. Just waiting on the finalized cover designs, complete with the book blurb, and then it’ll all be set…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@jonas JOIN ME BROTHER WE SHALL BE GREAT
@rae thank you for the compliment *bows dramatically* and for the update. I will be thinking up bully ideas, if anyone wants to join me…
@whalekeeper I didn’t tag you in the RP correctly
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Ok I’m still doing my break but I also want to write the roof scene so here
Lois
“Felicity… would you like to go somewhere after this and hang out together? Marcel offered to fly us to the roof.”
Felicity looked up from her drawing and smiled.“The roof? Yeah sure!”
Lois noted her lack of hesitation.
“Just us two,” he added.
“Sou…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Why is it every time I read one of your rps I laugh so hard that I start crying?
Also, i know some kids in class tripped my poor Chase twice, but I don’t think we’ve officially added any bullies. Though the math teacher…does she count?
Um, me, Whaley, Loopy’s taking a break, Esther, Sara, Freedom is currently not in any rps, Keilah…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk
Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.
Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.
@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed
OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.
Prologue
7/10/2065
Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@grcr (CASSIAN SCENE ALERT) @ellette-giselle @esther-c @rae @jonas @whalekeeper @highscribeofatherium
This scene isn’t really edited either…
But let me know if it makes sense AT ALL
Chapter 5
Birdie
“I love birds,” Sef sang as she spread her arms wide, mimicking the birds soaring overhead, silhouetted against the bright blue sky.
She lov…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Alriiight, Chapter 1. Please tell me if you get overwhelmed with all the feedback, because if that happens, I will gladly pause.
I was overwhelmed a bit, but you don’t have to pause, I just needed a day to process everything haha!
Sooo I get this weird feeling about Nico. I’m not entirely convinced he doesn’t love them, nor do I kno…
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@loopylin see ya
You could probably go for a year and not miss the dance XD
Here’s another RP so the story can actually continue…
Kate
For a moment, Brian and I glanced back and forth from the now sleeping child and the unenthusiastically dancing Cole and Callipsa.
“He said sixty minutes,” I said. “I kind of want to watch to…[Read more]
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