Enid

@loopylin see ya

You could probably go for a year and not miss the dance XD

@whalekeeper

Here’s another RP so the story can actually continue…

Kate

For a moment, Brian and I glanced back and forth from the now sleeping child and the unenthusiastically dancing Cole and Callipsa.

“He said sixty minutes,” I said. “I kind of want to watch to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Like some random dictator of favored fiction wants me to help you.

XD

@whalekeeper

Thank you for everything Whaley!! This means a lot <3

Both ways work well!! Whatever makes more sense to you; I’m just throwing random ideas to help you brainstorm

Ohhhh gotcha! Thanks XD

I think what Jonas was mentioning (please correct me if I’m wrong!) is before, there was some moral grayness and room for human variation, esp…

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@whalekeeper

We often become blind to the flaws in our greatest loves… man, I’m spurting poetry!

Lol well you’re right.

Drama is fine as long as you can see everything from a bird’s eye view, and you seem to be a pretty practical person so far.

Thanks! I don’t want to make something that’s super melodramatic though (still figuring out what that means XD).

@whalekeeper Ok, I understood it much better than I thought I did. The only part that I didn’t already get was if Seb had knocked them unconscious or just made their brains all fuzzy.
Thanks for explaining! I think the lovedream magic system is really interesting and I get excited when you talk about it.

@ellette-giselle

Wow, that was really good! I like what you said about the light shining in the darkness. Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I guess I never thought about it that way. Tbh, the only reason the post apocalyptic world exists is because of the main character (he didn’t cause it, but you’ll see why in a second). The main character is supposed to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The greatest enjoyment I got from the prologue was the twist from ‘we’re doing this to save the baby’ to ‘what’s this baby doing here?’ That was great.

Really?!?! That’s awesome…I guess I’m keeping it now XD XD

You should think about how strong of an allegory you want. Once you say Jesus, all readers will know this is a Christian a…

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@whalekeeper Nice pfp :]

Teleportation was the only part of Seb’s powers I felt like I understood, lol. What did he just do to Caly’s characters? I’m not sure I completely followed.

Lois 

He hesitated, fiddling with a pencil in one hand.

“…Sure,” he said finally.

“Yeah?”

“Yeah. After art class is done?”

“Sounds good.”

“Thanks, Marce…[Read more]

@whalekeeper
Lois

The slightest bit of color grew in Lois’ pale cheeks. He adjusted his glasses, resisting the urge to look at Felicity again. He blinked a few times at Marcel.

“I, uh,” He cleared his throat.“I thought you hated playing cupid.”

@whalekeeper

Ok Seb nice this should get interesting

Kate

“Are you here for practice?”

Brian and I exchanged glances. The door thumped as someone threw their weight against it, but Brian held it firm. I answered the man. “We – um – we’re kind of running for our lives right now. A little help?”

“You all might want to take cover,” advised…[Read more]

@whalekeeper the thing about the TF2 fandom is that everything, and I mean everything, is so heavily memed that I can find an answer meme to virtually any question

so in answer to “how did I start writing that fanfic”…..

this was an actual line. from their medic who SHOULD know what he’s doing but doesn’t because he’s a total psychopath.

@whalekeeper @grcr

Thanks!

@grcr

Oh, I’m interested!

Okay. I’ll wait for a couple more opinions before I decide to post it. Good to know at least one person is interested though!

@whalekeeper *now somewhat intimidated* ok

@highscribeofaetherium thanks!

@whalekeeper

I am finally jumping on here but I’m still sort of undecided which WIP I want to highlight… I feel like most of my WIP’s are either incomplete or I haven’t fully fleshed out the plot yet… or I’m considering turning into a series rather than one book but don’t really know yet. OK, I think I know which one I’ll do. Here we go! I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

More questions!

All right, here we go:

What outer plot is your protagonist/s dealing with?

Not entirely sure what outer plot means, but I have an idea and I will try to answer this question from that.

The outer plot of TNPT involves finding redemption in The Saviour and clinging to him down the narrow path, no matter what the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks for the tag, I’ll probably answer the old questions tomorrow if that’s okay.

@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @anyone

Hi guys!! Man, it’s been a long time since I’ve been on here 🙂 But yeah, lifes been… different? How are you doing? How’s your WIP’s?

About the Pinterest board, well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?).  I was really thinking about it a few months ago and real…[Read more]

@grcr @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @acancello (I’m still going to tag you until you come back) @anyone-else

See above post ⬆⬆⬆

@whalekeeper

XD y’know that’s the way to do it. My characters resemble myself so much that if I let my fam read my book, they’d catch on and know waaaaay more about me then they are allowed too 😂

Defenetly, and thank you so much for being here. My sister’s health improved when she moved out, and I think mine will too. I’m so relieved, I think I…[Read more]