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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my. How did auto correct not get that? How did I even type that? lol. Haha. I made up a new word.
Now the question is, how well is Joseph going to remember this conversation?
That would indeed be the question.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Nope! You just told me I could only put a few of them in my signature, plus the 100 character limit, and that was when I was trying to convince you to save Eric. I can try to fit them all in, or I’ll just write “all of Ellette’s charries” if that’s what you prefer. 🤗😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
*steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*
Wow. loyalties changed.
So I’m free to kill Asher, Julian, and Sabina?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
*steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*
Wow. loyalties changed.
So I’m free to kill Asher, Julian, and Sabina?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle Looks good!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
The next morning when Joseph woke, he lay in bed a moment, trying to remember what had happened the day before. All at once it came back to him and he scrambled to his feet. Yanking on his vest he hurried into the hall and knocked on Asher and E…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank ye!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks so much for the feedback! I’m feeling pretty confidant with this new switch, so you can delete the old version. lol.
What’s with suddenly swapping the governor in this new version?
well, a few reasons.
1. Flows better with the idea that they just opened the gates after 7 years.
2. Why else would Asher and Eric have s…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks you guys! 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I love that!! I love how you can see so much personality in each person! <33
So cuteee! Yesss, she needs to become a new character!!
That looks soo good!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
The humor in that chapter is so good. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Good, good. I’m glad this is better.
Yesterday we reached Acts 12 in a sermon series at our church, and I almost started laughing because it was pretty perfect. So yeah, that’s where I got my inspiration.
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Makes sense. I guess it would be a little awkward if that wasn’t the case 😅
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
The ship.
The way you interact with one another would be very awkward if you weren’t.
Just saying.
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already
You’re not the first, lol
It was pretty obvious. lol.
Do you mean the ship or something else? And if you mean the ship, I don’t know if I should take offence of that or not, lol, jk
Also, if anyone thinks that I am adorable because I am small and chubby, they are…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Asher would not appreciate you bringing that up again. lol.
No, not much to rewrite. Just a little.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Gotcha. Yeah, no problem. He did faint, so there obviously was enough blood lost for that. You’re good! So, does this mean you’ll have to rewrite a lot of what you already have, or not much since you’re about to have Joseph leave?
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