Enid

Thank you for snowballing me and sorry if I missed one of you! (And sorry it took so long for me to reply 😭😭) Finally getting around to this… lol. @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @whalekeeper

Little bit more than 500 words but I had to finish the scene : )

Oh, and you probably know Liz as Liv (The scientist from my wip OLH) I had to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ace could target Seb since he’s Dante’s buddy if you want. Though I doubt that would be much of a fair fight unless I experimented with giving Ace some extra abilities maybe

@calyhuge x3 💨⚪️ @ellette-giselle x4 💨⚪️  @rae x2 💨⚪️

hehehe

@whalekeeper you can throw the other five

@whalekeeper

I meant the latter.

Wait what I was kidding. I didn’t think you actually…

*eyes the massive pile of snow balls*

But I might as well enjoy this 😈

@koshka x2

@freed_and_redeemed x2

@elishavet-pidyon x2

@whalekeeper

There’s currently an agent outside the church somewhere looking for us that you could probably pound. I locked the church door, but that doesn’t mean he doesn’t have an idea of where we went.

…Or I could drop Leo’s bounty hunter somewhere for you to beat up. That could be fun.

@ellette-giselle

Leo

He paused mid step and looked back at the kid.

Quincy had looped an arm around Rory’s neck, and was reaching out dusty fingers for the glass. He giggled. “Roror, it’s God’s house.”

Roror? Leo smiled, feeling all the tension from the last few hours drain from his shoulders. And not just him; Silvia sank down on a pew…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Eh, not very far? But also not close at all. I’m just trying to save Rory’s (and now Leo’s) life. XD

@koshka

Yes he is! he’s such a darling.

Rory

Rory paused and looked about, his eyes wide. There was something about this place. It wasn’t just the quiet and sense of protection. No, there was… peace. Yes, that was it. Peace. Something Rory had never truly felt.

Leo was moving forward, saying something about the back door, but Rory stood…[Read more]

@koshka

So fun to hear from you on this!!

Yes, I know! The kids are so fun!

Hmmm, I might add more to the “knowing look” lol.

Well, with this I wanted each one of them to say a prayer. With big things in our family we normally all go around and say a prayer. Sometimes though, just one family remember prays. It really all depends on…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

LOVE IT!!! So, so pretty!

Do the shepherd boy!!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

Lovely. *Nods vigorously*

@elishavet-pidyon

It’s beautiful! I love the almost Ireland fairytale, almost medieval Europe feel. Lovely.

(Also, I hit you with some snowballs, so you could share some more scenes from Golden Song. In case you were wondering. XP)

@ellette-giselle

Ah. Such fun. I love the kid’s reactions. XD

Leon laughed, a knowing expression on his face.

So…what is a knowing expression? Raised eyebrows? A smirk? This is such a vague description that his face won’t settle into one expression. It’s just a blur.

This is random, but I’ve noticed that your characters pray in turns. Is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Cackles* *Grins*

I love it. Quincy seems good at activating ProtectMode in people. I need to tie that into the book.

Alrighty then.

Leo

The row of hedges ended in another lane. Leo turned up it for a few feet before darting around a large glass greenhouse with a gasped out prayer. He sent a glance over his shoulder.

Rory…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, it is a rough life. I feel like a lot of people will read about Leon and Julian and be like, “oh cool, the messenger missionaries on the run from soldiers” and not really think about what that would be like for NINE YEARS.

I chuckled at this.

so did I. lol.

Ew. Yeah, eat the bread instead.

You’ve never licked…[Read more]

@koshka

Oh my goodness. I can’t believe you just handed a kid to Rory. *silently dies* this is going to be great!

He needs something to fight for beyond his own survival.

Ummm….. whatever you would rather. i don’t care. Leo is leading which means you’re picking.

Rory

There coming. there’s no escape. there never is! Rory couldn’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lol, the last part. 😆

I think the scene felt a little awkward just because we haven’t seen much of Amelia and what she feels about Joseph, but I think you’re working on adding in more of that. Otherwise, good job.

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. We’re either going to an apartment flat, or their ship the Mantis, you pick.

Silvia

Number sequences flashed across her tablet. She stifled a groan. They had a tail.

A drop of sheer terror made her dizzy with the images, the sounds parading through her head. Pounding feet. Sharp metal. Blood.

She sucked in a deep…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed I love that scene!!

@whalekeeper @loopylin I mean sure, you can team up, as long as it doesn’t get out of hand. *hides behind a tree*

@linus-smallprint

Ooo, that would be a cool idea.

I had the pro version for a little while as well, but I think both work fine.

I like the look of hand-drawn ones the best, but the ones on there are easier to make and have on hand as I’m writing.