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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
Do y’all have strong thoughts on either of the chapters?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
I just didn’t do them yet because I decided it was a hugging day.
Can I just say, that is a hilarious quote. 🤣
I don’t know if the one with Joseph hugging the girl is a major part of the story, so I would maybe hesitate on moving it onto the next stage. Not that every illustration needs to be an important scene, but I don’t k…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
Sorry, I forgot to add you. Chapter 3 and 4 are out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
Also, what’s on Joseph’s hand in the one of him with Amelia in prison?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
FOR LTBL
Hmm… I don’t think there was any scenes I wanted to see that you didn’t get. Do you have illustrations for anywhere near the end? You probably wouldn’t want to show Aaron’s execution, but maybe him standing arrested by the soldiers or something.
My favorites–probably the one of Sabina hugging Turin, the two little…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 7 hours ago
The amount of “vertically challenged” jokes at school in seventh and eighth grade still haunts my soul…
At least I’m taller than my mom
She’s five foot
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 7 hours ago
Chapters 3 and 4 are out! I think I’m going to post these on a separate doc for now, and we’ll see how it goes. As of now, I’m also planning to post two chapters every week, maybe on Tuesdays. That way I’m not glued to my screen all the time waiting to hear y’all’s feedback, and it gives me some time to catch up on my…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 7 hours ago
Yayyyy!!! Illustrations!!
(Even tho I already saw most of these haha. Great job!!)
Also, you can delete a forum???Â
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 9 hours ago
How big is your church? (if you go to church.)
The church I attend is rather small (less than 50 people) but we’ve been slowly growing the past couple years so maybe eventually the pews won’t be so empty.
What is one thing you disagree/don’t understand with a different denomination?
Oh dear, there is an entire list of things I disagree w…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 12 hours ago
My sister, introducing me: So this is my sister
Me: Hi, what’s your name? I’m My Sister.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 23 hours ago
*sings* Meeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 1 hour ago
Here’s an alternate version I just edited. I didn’t remove all hints, but I tried to make it less explicit–still not sure which version I’ll eventually go with, though.
When a classmate invites her to an underground church meeting, Sara starts to wonder if she’s been missing something all along–or Someone. But her twin bro…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 2 hours ago
That does make it easier! I’m pretty sure I have them all… though it’s been a while since I actually saw them. I don’t even know if I’ve come across the warden or armadillos, but I haven’t played in a while. Maybe I’ll check it out!
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 3 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 3 hours ago
Wow, that sounds like a cool seed! I don’t know if it would work for Xbox though… the editions kind of confuse me. 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 3 hours ago
That’s hilarious 😂
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 4 hours ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 5 hours ago
*starts singing*
🎶We’re those weird lefties
On the border’s other side
Our brains are wired
To be artisti-fied
We’re the Canadian lefties
On the border’s other side
*violin solo*
If next to us you go
At the dinner table
Be careful of an elbow
And avoid it if you’re able
It’s kind of questionable
If we’re mentally stable…
We’re the…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 5 hours ago
*nods slowly*
Ah, yes. Thou hast achieved a good argument for keeping it the way it is.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 5 hours ago
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