Enid

@koshka it’s going good! I’m happy to be writing again (:

So far I’ve got over 300 words rn gonna try to write a few more

@godlyfantasy12

Good! I’m lounging around after work, waiting for dinner to finish in the slow cooker and enjoying the fact that I don’t have any homework for the moment.

How’s life?

@hybridlore

I’ve used GroupMe a lot. You can create subtopics and stuff like that, but I’m not sure how well it would work for a substitute KP. It’s a group messenging app, not a forum layout…?

@ellette-giselle

Yes! I like how you did Rolf’s story. It didn’t disrupt the flow, but also kept you from an info dump (while still avoiding the confusion of too many flash backs). Well done.

Conrad. *Sniffles* Brave young boy.

One note: Rolf seems to weep a lot in the desert, despite severe dehydration. While I understand him crying, I’d…[Read more]

@koshka I am still here! @esther-c Hi!!

I am going to try and do some writing lol! How are yall?

I’d be open to creating our own community. Slack would probably work for me, I’d have to check with my parents about Discord since I don’t have it yet. There’s also Group Me… which I don’t know much about, but plenty of youth groups seem to use it for announcements (not sure if you can create mini channels or anything like that.)

@keilah-h

Yep, one of hers. It doesn’t have a lot to do with the book, but there is an otter who shows up with his trident great fork part way through. He’s possibly one of my favorite characters.

@godlyfantasy12

Story Embers? They closed their community forum down, so convo is basically impossible.

Annnnnd YDubs costs money…*broke college student speaking*

@godlyfantasy12

Hi!! I’m on for a bit.

@godlyfantasy12

I ammmm

but idk for how much longer, lol

@the_lost-journal

I love your signature 🤣🤣🤣

sooo is anyone on rn?? XD @loopylin @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c

@ducktator

Can I use the lyrics of your song and put to some music?

OH!!! HEY!!! What about the other affiliated website?! (what’s it called?! AGHHH!) The one thats waaaay busier then KP…surely someone there would know how to get in touch with someone? Or have a way to keep KP running with one of us? Or something?

I hope KP stays up…I don’t think I could do Discord… );

@linus-smallprint

😭😢

It’s okay…. I understand.

@loopylin @keilah-h
I’ve never used Discord, but I’m open to it!! I wasn’t aware you could have separate channels and such.

Keilah, Slack is mostly used for businesses, but I’ve also been a part of a writing camp that uses it and it works pretty well. The only problem is that if we use the free version, the message history is only 90 days.

@ellette-giselle

Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.

@hybridlore

Awesome!! I’m so glad you liked it!!!

Yeah….. Rolf had a rough time of it, but he got out sooner, whereas Leon was in the bad situation longer… things just didn’t escalate so high.

btw, was it you who asked about him changing his name? Well, if it was, you now have an answer!

@ellette-giselle

I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.

Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!