@whalekeeper
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whaley replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
*SUBSCRIBES*
I need to read this, one hundred percent. I’m sorry I haven’t jumped onto this topic right away, school and thesis have been attacking all my cognitive functions.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Eeeeyyyyyy cool art!!
Cross hatching and stippling look good, but they take sooo long… And if you get impatient, it looks messy.
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I talked with my dad about it a bit ago and he helped me fill in some holes, so now I’m a lot happier with the whole system now.
Yay, good! Parents are often helpful with this sort of thing. Just because they don’t know much about the system anyway and they can think out of the box.
YOU TWO SWITCHED NAMES AHHHHHH!!!! I kinda like it, i…
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Personally, I would at least have given it the limitation that the objects are still bound by their physical natures, because if you can literally make objects teleport, is there anything you can’t do?
That’s what I was thinking. But the stuff definitely moved wherever he wanted, and it wasn’t clarified whether or not he was creating t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*Slides in smoothly* *Trips and falls*
Hugo
Snapping his book shut, Hugo picked up a metal box from under the nearby coffee table and strode over to an older student nearby. The student was on all fours, searching for something.
“Is this what you’re looking for?” Hugo asked cheerfully. “It must have dropped and…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylin Together we shall rule the Kingdom of Pen, as one.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
This is disastrous in the best way.
Hehe.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Oki-doki. I have to catch up on some work, so I might not reply immediately, sorry about that.
Barnes
Barnes listened, and then replied quietly as the two young men thought. “I understand you aren’t too hopeful about this whole thing. But think for a second about the school you were transferred to. Your leaders must n…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
You can start with a blurb if you’ve written one! :]
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whaley replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*Subscribing*
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨
but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.
Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)
If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.
How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD
I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?
Ideas ideas
– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit
– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aaand I’ll reply to everyone else, but I have to go. *Poofs away*
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
That type of randomness must be preserved.
I agree. You can definitely keep that vibe and just make up the rules for yourself so you stay consistent. You wouldn’t have to tell anyone the rules of the system.
It seems like your magic comes from fantastical animals. I don’t know if that’s true, but I do think that would be a great source of…[Read more]
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