@whalekeeper
Active 2 days, 7 hours ago- Rank: Chosen One
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whaley replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 1 week ago
What is Jonathan’s arc supposed to be?
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whaley replied to the topic Alan Becker Fans in the forum Film 8 months, 1 week ago
I just watched Animation vs. Minecraft, and it was super wholesome, I loved it
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 1 week ago
…And here I am, praising the game and not talking about Alan Becker. XD I still haven’t watched. Next chance I get, probably this week.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 1 week ago
I think some YouTubers make Minecraft way too loud and showy. My brothers watch competitive YouTubers and I’ve never caught on to that. The game by itself is much more impactful.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 1 week ago
Minecraft is the kind of thing I never thought I’d enjoy. But one day it clicked. I think the combination of the music and graphics have the same uncanny feel as old memories. Pieces of the world make sense, but much of it is random and silent. It’s such a strange, melancholic feeling.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Writers can insert two sides of themselves into that conversation and it still tracks. XD
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
I appreciate the thoughts! I hadn’t thought much about items before – although specific things come to mind. My goal is to make this character less of a person to mourn for, and more of a person to enjoy reading about. *Bows and offers you a jar of glitter to poof yourself back home if needed*
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey guys, I’ve been thinking. How do you encourage a reader to like a character who is already dead? And with minimal flashbacks? And and without being boringly sad? I have a few ideas, but this has been a challenge so far and I was wondering what everyone else thinks.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Alright, here is my feedback!
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
You know Tyn and Cyrus were my favorites from the previous book. In this book, I enjoyed James and Eric (post-memory wipe), both for their enthusiasm. Iskyagus was fun as well for the brief moment he was there.
~ Were there any c…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 2 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 2 weeks ago
AAHH GUYS
Look. I would watch them anyway to make my guy friend smile, so it’s a win-win for everybody. *Holds out hand to shake on it* I’ll watch em
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 2 weeks ago
I still haven’t watched Alan Becker, but one of my best friends has always been obsessed and I should watch them for the sake of making him happy. XD I have no doubt they’re good.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Aaahh the Link drawing! 🤣🤣
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 2 weeks ago
I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!
The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.
Bruuuhhh
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Sometimes I find a huge piece of paper and doodle on it with my siblings. This time I doodled a frog without really looking, and it came out like this.

It’s an absolute monstrosity and now I don’t trust myself to doodle without paying attention
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ve tried using that designer too. Never got to the same level of detail as Keilah’s characters here. 🙂
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
A few things happened, but it shouldn’t be too much reading, luckily.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Barnes
“Call me Barnes.” She stuck her hands in her pockets. “That being my regular name. Yours?”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
*Is sick and has nothing to do* *Proceeds to spend 2 hours reading the whole thing and summarizing it* Okay, I’ve got a crazy summary for y’all.
Fantasy Adventure RP so far
“Your characters have been summoned to a fantastical world where war rages between an evil Dark Lord and a determined resistance.” – Jonas
On the outskirts of the city…
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