@whalekeeper
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whaley replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 days, 20 hours ago
Thx
🧐 I need more convincing of your self-confidence. 🥳🤩🎉
I hope you enjoyed reading the stories. I also hope my dumping on you of information in this post didn’t bore you.
Nope, does not bore me! The reason I asked those questions was because the answers were not evident in the story, so now you know. Of course it’s up to you what i…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 20 hours ago
Oh, I see, so it can happen whenever. That makes sense, since a ceremony wouldn’t trigger something like that.
comes when the Holy Spirit fully comes into someone’s life
This is where I’ve not understood this before. 😅 Do you believe those spiritual gifts are necessary if you are going to fully take in the Holy Spirit? Does that mean you c…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 21 hours ago
*plays how to train your dragon theme song*
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By the way, did you read what I decided to do with my magic system? You were the one who was encouraging me to keep it the way it was the most. While I have made my choice and am going to stick with it, I am curious to see what you think.
I wanted to support that version of your…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 22 hours ago
Sorry, it struck me and I feel like it would be super cool to turn the timid love interest girl into a dragon-rider.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 22 hours ago
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OH OH OH I have an idea. Martha is always described as super timid, but she should have a dragon for a steed by the end of the series. That was her first fun interaction with Alan, talking about dragons.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 22 hours ago
And then with all you girls starting to root for them, I really considered letting it happen.
XD Count me neutral. I didn’t notice this potential ship on the first read-through, and I still feel like it’s not on my radar despite finding the quotes. This may be because I’m not big into romance, like you. (You can do whatever you w…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days ago
I am sorry, I am a slow wiki XDXD
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days ago
Wellll actually that took me an hour, but I started before you mentioned needing a wiki. XD
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whaley replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 3 hours ago
Fine by me! I will be audio-only, but I hope that’s not too weird.
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whaley posted a new activity comment 6 days, 3 hours ago
Got it!
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whaley replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 4 hours ago
I might pop onto the call if we share emails. :]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 18 hours ago
This is a list of all the suggestions of romance between Alan and Martha – that I can find.
This excludes any interactions which can just as easily be platonic interactions, such as Alan and Martha’s discussions of Charles, dragons, or the Faithful.
At one point, Alan makes a plan to save Martha from prison, which makes her a damsel in d…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 18 hours ago
TNPT doesn’t have a website or a fandom or anything yet lol
Then I shall be the substitute for the wiki/fandom, gimme a sec
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 days, 20 hours ago
I have a question! What is Baptism by Fire? I believe in baptism by the Holy Spirit, but we just call that Baptism in our church, and that’s when we use water.
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 6 days, 20 hours ago
I remember thinking it was better than Clone Wars, and the music was also really good in comparison.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
You also got me rooting for a romance between Martha and Alan! Don’t know whether that was intentional or whether us readers were just like “get them together.” XD
I don’t remember Marthalan!! Everyone says it’s there but I didn’t see it at all. XDXD Not saying it’s bad, I just didn’t detect it.
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 6 days, 22 hours ago
Hehe. It is good, but only if you don’t mind some crass humor now and then. And the episodes have to be taken in small doses.
I did not end up finishing the show. My siblings watched too far ahead of me, and the school year was starting. :’)
Ah, it’s kind of funny when you watch a show ti the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 days, 22 hours ago
I’m also glad you’re having fun with something fresh, after all your other projects made you tired. :]
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whaley replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 days, 22 hours ago
Yayy I read them!! Congrats in the new project and the progress. :-p
I really like how smooth and descriptive your language can be. Since I read some of Guardian Angels, you’ve always written very peaceful, poetic descriptions, and that’s one of tour strengths.
You also do a good job giving each character some defining traits, so they aren’t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week ago
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Could you send me an email soon, just so I have yours for Saturday?
It doesn’t have to be now, just sometime today!