@whalekeeper
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
no I haven’t!!!
Oki, I’m going to explain this structure because it seems to work for a looot of stories! 🙃 It’s very broad/all-encompassing, except for some Eastern cultures and the like.
I did not invent all of this. I listened to Brandon Sanderson’s writing lectures and explained them in my own words. So just to clarify, I…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
I don’t like being super graphic/body horror about it, I just make sure my favorite characters come out of it with a tangible reminder of the incident.
Tangible reminder is a fun trope. I haven’t used it too often. I can’t remember the last time I gave a character a dramatic scar. It feels like something that belongs in the Keilah genre. :p
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
To be faaiir I do not even know who Alec and Everette are. Yet. I’m getting there. 🤣
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
But it’s so sad when the favorite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!
If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters.
But trauma doesn’t automatically make characters deeeeep… 😫 Actually side note, I’ve been thinking about this topic and we should make a thread for…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
Why am I not surprised loll
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.
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whaley started the topic What are some interesting things you've learned through story research? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 week, 4 days ago
What are some interesting things you’ve learned through story research?
I feel like there’s always something interesting in a writer’s search history. Very often, this includes creative character deaths, so if you’d like to share… XD Well, I’ll go first.First off. I’ve been researching the origins of the electric guitar (because I have a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
I just got the cabbage stuck on the stove so we can eat in a few minutes.
*Snorts* XD
I’ll hang around here for a bit, mainly to think up a new TotW (Topic of the Week). I have a few other things to work on, like researching synth music, the earth’s atmosphere, etc. all for my projects. I’m waaay to concerned with…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I was just thinking about making pana cotta! Never tried to make it before, but I had it a few days ago and enjoyed it.
Although I might swap out the rosewater for orange or lavender.
You can totally do that. Just decide what flavor combo with the spices is best in your opinion.
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
*Sighs* *Flips hair dramatically* I have answered your irrelevant interview questions. It’s too bad I’m behind bars, or I would set your printing press on fire. And not in a good way.
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whaley replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Hm. I have a couple characters who go through the same thing. One has a few days, the other has a suspicion of their own death and only becomes sure of it in the last few hours.
I think it depends on how much of a communicator they are, and what kind of legacy they want to leave behind.
Character A might tell his friends immediately (or not long…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I suffer from dessert-making mania. Here, for you.
Rice Kheer Recipe
– 3/4 cup basmati rice
– 1 Tbsp butter
– 1 tsp ground cardamom
– 1 tsp ground nutmeg
– 10 cups whole milk
– 1/4 cup cornstarch
– 2 cups heavy whipping cream
– 3/4 cup sugar (or to taste)
– 4 tsp rose water (optional)
1. Rinse the rice until water turns clear, then soak…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
“I know about a broken vending machine nearby that you can get free drinks out of,”
Waaaiiit… I think I know which vending machine this is. XD
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Silencing KP in your inbox is so much work. XD *Unsubscribes* *Unsubscribes* *Unsubscribes*
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whaley posted an update 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Hey guys, I will be off KP for the next couple months (at least) due to graduation and the complications of life. I will pop in every week to update Topic of the Week and roleplay, but otherwise, I won’t be on as often. Tag me for anything I need to see.
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whaley replied to the topic DnD QNA in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
If we do this, we’ll have to wait until my school year is over (around the first half of May). Graduation. 🤷♀️
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Also, back to the memes, the Maverick one is so accurate
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