Enid

@godlyfantasy12

Hmmm okay I can see that, makes more sense

(Btw this is just my opinion, so with a grain of salt pleeze 😊)

Obviously there’s going to be some people who just want power, and it makes sense for them to make a big deal out of the snakeAra thing.

I would say tho that yeah, she WAS just a child, it’s easy to understand she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, and be sure to show how the people are being negatively affected through actions, not just dialogue. Give examples, in some of the charries’ lives, of why the people feel this way.

@esther-c

No probs, you’ll do great!!

@godlyfantasy12

Oki-dokie I love trying to help with these XD

The first question that comes to mind, is, why are the people resentful of the royal family? Why are they low-key rebelling?

There should be a clear, important reason – that requires action.

I can see the whole ‘royalty’s just a symbol’ being…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’d say, first off the bat, that killing off a character doesn’t automatically make a book better. If you are going to kill off someone, it’s important to have a specific reason – to highlight the power of the villain, finish an arc, make a thematic point – instead of doing it just because you feel like it’ll make things better. I would…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Calvin

Calvin nodded, with a slow, comforting smile. “Totally fine. I guess I get pretty scary when I’ve been up for forty-eight hours straight.”

Then, to Wolfgang – “Sorry about Marcel, too. He won’t apologize when he’s grumpy.”

@godlyfantasy12

😉 Nah, he likes kids

@freedomwriter76

How many charries are you killing?? Bc they need donuts and hugs more than anything else honestly…

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Marcel

What a cry baby.

Marcel snorted, and punched Cal’s arm. “Let’s go find a wreck room or something.”

The tired circles around Cal’s eyes seemed to expand, like a raccoon’s. He ignored Marcel, and pushed forward. “Hey, don’t blame Fynn. It was my idea to jump him. If you want to pick a fight with…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Sorry about not replying sooner. This week was hectic. Anyway. Gimme till tomorrow morning at the latest.

@godlyfantasy12

THANK YOU!! XD His story is actually not in development rn, since he’s more of a personal brainchild than anything else… meaning I don’t share his actual story with people… but ya know, maybe I’ll actually write something for him, let him see the light of day XD

And IKR, that album is SO GOOD! My favorite song is Caesar, I…[Read more]

Hehe I love rambling

Oh and on top of that, it’s best to have all your obstacles follow a cohesive outline, so I’d recommend using the Three-Act-Story-Structure as a timeline to put your events on, if you haven’t already. Abbie Emmons has a great template if you decide to use it 😋

Also, the whole idea of a peaceful godly kingdom reminds me of the album Dear Wormwood by the Oh Hellos, which I’m listening to rn. I’d definitely recommend you listen to it while brainstorming. 😉

@godlyfantasy12

Guurrl I struggle with the saaame thing. It’s almost like internal conflict is easier to invent than external conflict. XD

First off, I try to consider the character’s inward goal, and try to personify it with an outward goal. It takes a bit to think of one, but as long as you keep your character’s world and culture in mind, it’s…[Read more]

“Craft your next amazing story idea,” that you can’t wait to write? Bro, that’s my problem. This happens to me every week. XD But in all seriousness, this looks great, and I am joining.

oH wow really??

Hi!! To all the writers out there who are graduating this year, congrats!

I need to stop doing this, I am going to lose some friends

@godlyfantasy12

This isn’t something you have to apologize for, kay? <3 I am not the high and mighty word of wisdom. This is just something I wanted to talk about, and foster consideration. And your charries’ role models sound great!

@everyoneingeneral

I read all your posts, and thank you for spamming me, I enjoyed it, and am glad that people…[Read more]