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Daeus replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@dragon-snapper Oh, cool. Did you rewrite it?
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Snapper replied to the topic New Blog in the forum Non-Fiction 8 years ago
@clairec I’m not sure what type of advice you’re looking for, so I’m going to dump it here. 😛
If you can make a way for people to follow you, do so. That will help so that people come back to your blog. And make the follow button easy to find. I doesn’t like it when I can’t find the follow button on blogs. Dragon Snapper no like. 😛
But…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
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Daeus replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)
Possibly, these three revisions could help.
Feastings end– feasting ends.Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.
The dwarfs are…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.
As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.
Also, I…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Holy cow, all of these memes are so perfect and I don’t even know where to begin. You all have seriously been making my week.
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Snapper replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@dekreel Too true. And XD @michael-stanton ‘s
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Daeus replied to the topic Page Thoughts? in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years ago
@jane-maree Ah, yes. Your screen must exceed the length of the image. I went ahead and tiled the parallax images.
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Daeus started the topic Page Thoughts? in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years ago
Hi friends,
Most of you probably know about my show don’t tell course. The exciting news is that I’m going to be releasing part 2 of that course any day now.
Anyway, I had to rebuild my sales page to accommodate for the now 2 part course. I think I managed to keep it looking fairly good, but there are probably some things I could do to improve…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Your Online Notebook here in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@joisebeth Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
*hands you cloak and dagger* You are now an official KeePer.
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Snapper replied to the topic Your Online Notebook here in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
@devastate-lasting This is so cool! I love the concept– I wish I weren’t so internet paranoid though. XD
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 8 years, 1 month ago
@jess-penrose That works!
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Snapper replied to the topic Blogging… in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 1 month ago
@catwing Basically, post about what you love–don’t fake it, because otherwise people won’t like your stuff. Trust me, I know. Just post what you love, and love your blog.
If you want to see what I post, my blog link is also in my signature.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 1 month ago
@jenwriter17 So cool! Where did you find your pictures?
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Snapper replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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Snapper replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@clairec That…just… HAHA!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice The thought… now I want to go up to everyone and ask them. XD Or not… that is true…
I’m signing out now. I loved writing again with you guys–and I wrote 1104–finally reached chapter 10 so I can write with normal flow again. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic *waves manically* ;P in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@clairec Yep! Although I’m not sure who’d let a dragon with a terrible bedside manner to aid them. Let’s see what happens then.
XD
I hope so too.
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