WarrenLuther04

There is some shuffling, then more silence.

“Brek, what—?”

The door bursts open.

@daeus Okay.  Thank you!  Its still helpful!

@seekjustice, so far yeah. I only got to the wedding though. then the computer crashed.

well, I have to go now.

@jenwriter17, I might be

@alia Sorry, I can’t be on tonight. Will you be on tomorrow?

@jane-maree @sam-kowal @ariel-ashira Thank you all so much! I’m beginning to figure this out now 🙂

@seekjustice, I’m working on my book while at the same time trying to write a character interview for my blog.

oh, and I started listening to Tale of Two Cities today

anyone on yet?

@seekjustice, @rochellaine, @jenwriter17, @ariel-ashira

just saying, still here

@catwing oh, good to know 😉

Rin would probably rather be deaf. Not sure why though.

would your character rather be duct taped to a plane mid flight or jump into Niagara Falls? Yeah this total random craziness 😜

@seekjustice, @rochellaine,

I don’t know if anyone is on, but I’m here

@jenwriter17 I think Daeus and Kate got it. Basically, make things more complex. A longer story, more in depth themes, more characters, conflicts, obstacles to overcome, and more live scenes. That being said, you can’t just tack that stuff on to a story that is short at its core. Otherwise the story will drag. Layer things on, and see how in depth…[Read more]

@itsastarrynight Thank you!  @daeus Do you have a little time to give me some advise on this?

@jenwriter17  I guess I just describe every scene in detailed, sensory language, and I have been working on adding more subplots.  I do struggle with creating complicated plots!

@alia @bekreations  *beam*  Thanks for bringin’ this back, guys!  I don’t know what to add, but…  🙂  *thumbs up*

@ariella-newheart  Why thank you.  🙂  And I love your version of Aspen!!!

@daughteroftheking
Kay would rather relive it.
She refuses to tell me what it was though…

Alexandria Evergreen (Alex) would rather talk about it.
Sneaking to the Northern part of Evergreen forest.

@sarah-Anson
Kay would sit in the cell with her worst enemy, Alice, and hope she doesn’t go insane. She doesn’t want someone she likes to hate her…[Read more]

@sarah-Anson I agree with @skredder @gh24682468999 @ariel-Ashira . Interview your character, write him in a different scene, flesh out your character.
But in edition something you could do for fun (though it will probably help) is to make a collage for him. I had to figure out somethings when I made my collages. Also got me excited about my book. 😋

@notawriter I finished Aspen!!! I just felt that her picture needed to be colored, so I did! It was super fun. It’s the first colored picture I’ve done on here. 😀 I hope you like it.

@ingridrd Your picture of Aspen is lovely! 🙂

@sarah-anson Oh my GOODNESS!!! :O Is that watercolor? Those are exemplary. I love the picture of Toothless. :3