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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Yes, I did—I think I responded? Unless I didn’t send it?
It’s cool. I had no idea what it meant until I read the rest of it though. XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
That’s so exciting!!!! Congratulations!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Yay!! I was getting a little worried 😅
Have you graduated yet, by the way? (Congrats if you did!)
This section was good. I think you did a good job of showing the horror of the University executions without making it too descriptive *shudders*
Leon ran the other way, and Julian turned and scrambled down the street nearest to…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
No new sections?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
What I’m asking is, as readers, did you get anything out of this in this book at this time in this place, or did you just read it more to get over it to the next part of the story?
I agree with Keilah and Linus—I think you should leave it in, but maybe have Julian encourage the believers more by reminding them of their future hope.
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hybridlore posted an update 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@theshadow Hey! How are you doing? I haven’t talked to you in a while.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Anyone else doing Crazy Editing Week? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@whaley
Which team? Hot Dogs, perchance? 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.
What does your signature mean, by the way?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@keilah-h ^^
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle@keilah-h @theducktator
New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I like how Konner and the others are afraid of the Empire. That seems realistic—I would be surprised if in a time like this, all the Christians were courageous enough to defy the government always. Julian’s speech is good. Very rousing. A few parts didn’t make sense.
“If we make decisions based on survival, and only on the abi…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’d love to be tagged!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Good section. I’m glad Leon and Julian saved Hue. It’ll be interesting to see what happens in the Capital.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Ohhhhh! Now I remember him! My bad—I thought Leon had recognized him.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
I didn’t get tagged for the last section, so I read them both today. I like it a lot. Linus (?) was right, it was time to go back into the cities. Sad for all those at the University. I like how you showed a threat to the church besides the Soldiers—a threat from the inside. And I’m guessing Andreas is also a former fighter that…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Got it. Tell her happy birthday!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator
New chapters!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Yeahh xD If I had stopped to think about it, I probably would have expected something to happen with it.
Oh yeah. Thanks for the reminder. XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
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@hybridlore Thanks for reaching out. I’m doing pretty good, although these last two weeks of school are driving me crazy lol. How are you?
I’m glad! Yeah, you’re so close!
When do you get off? In two weeks? Interesting, because I think the kids around here get off this week.
I’m doing pretty good too! We just moved a few states over and so we’re still settling in but I’ve been doing pretty good overall. 😊
@hybridlore Man, those kids are lucky lol. My school technically gets off the 6th, when exams finish.
Oh wow, how was the move? That sounds like a lot, I’ll be praying for you and your family.
Oh, gotcha. It was pretty good—we’re still settling in like I said, but it’s been a few weeks and our new neighborhood is pretty nice. It’s a lot busier than we’re used to though.
Thank you!
@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.