WalkByFaith

@ellette-giselle

Ellette!!!!

I feel like you’re going to kill at least one of them off. 🤨😣 Do I need to call out the Character Witness Protection??

You did another viewpoint shift without telling us. It probably needs a *** or something in there every time you switch from Leon to Julian.

The rest of the positions we divided up between the r…

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@theshadow

Okay, great!!

@grcr

Awesome!

@mineralizedwritings

Yay! If you could shoot me an email at hybridlore079@gmail.com then I will have yours.

@theducktator

Okay! Sorry you’re sick 😟

@ellette-giselle

It was a good section, but I don’t have much to add, sorry. 🙃

@theducktator @loopylin @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle

So, the afternoon of the 24th looks like the best option. 🙃 Throwing out a time here—

3 PM EST

2 PM CST

1 PM MST

12 PM PST

(I don’t know if I got all those acronyms right, but we’ll roll with it.)

@theducktator

If there’s enough interest, we could try to plan one for late May/early June.

@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

@whalekeeper @stephie @loopylin @grcr @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-i-forgot

Is anyone up for a call sometime soon? We could try for the 2…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yay!!

@keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

It’s Tuesday! I have two new chapters for you guys. (Then I probably should go down to one a week.)

@ellette-giselle

You’re really just going to leave me hanging like that?? 😳

@jonas

It sounds like a super fun idea! I don’t know if I’ll participate this time, though, since I’m kind of in the middle of my WIP and already have some people critiquing it. Thanks for the invite! Oh, and like Ellette said, if you happen to need some outsiders to force help people get writing, I could probably do that! 😁

@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]

@theducktator Yay!!

@whalekeeper

Totally understand where you’re coming from. I’ll be praying!

@the_lost-journal

Congratulations!!!

@keilah-h

Ewwww! Babies too? 🤮

@ellette-giselle

Nope. XD

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I did—I think I responded? Unless I didn’t send it?

It’s cool. I had no idea what it meant until I read the rest of it though. XD

@ellette-giselle

That’s so exciting!!!! Congratulations!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yay!! I was getting a little worried 😅

Have you graduated yet, by the way? (Congrats if you did!)

This section was good. I think you did a good job of showing the horror of the University executions without making it too descriptive *shudders*

Leon ran the other way, and Julian turned and scrambled down the street nearest to…

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@ellette-giselle

No new sections?

@ellette-giselle

What I’m asking is, as readers, did you get anything out of this in this book at this time in this place, or did you just read it more to get over it to the next part of the story?

I agree with Keilah and Linus—I think you should leave it in, but maybe have Julian encourage the believers more by reminding them of their future hope.