WalkByFaith

@smiley @sarafini @trailblazer

I’m not sure if this is an RP or not…but if it is….I want to be Jules or Valerie. Unless one of you guys has any ideas for new characters I can RP. I know we all hate Valerie (well, hate’s a little extreme, but you know what I mean), so I want her to be a sympathetic villain arc, lol. I can show why she does…[Read more]

@trailblazer

One of my favorites:

“I’m not a singer. I’m a child of God who happens to sing.” I actually found this one on a KP article, and I replaced the sing with write! So it goes, “I’m not a writer. I’m a child of God who happens to write”.

Also, the one in my signature.

“Every page has a flaw only the author sees.”

@trailblazer

*me casually butting into the conversation*

Hiiii!

Lucy’s a good one! I’m kind of a goody-two-shoes as well (I still don’t get why people say that’s a bad thing, haha!)

But I would probably be Aubrey Shepherd. She easily caves in to peer pressure (for me its not as extreme as her, its just it’s easy for me to gossip and act…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I have fixed the “connecting” issues on Reedsy, just not on KP.

I’m deleting the chapter where Sef and Lilitu are in the woods. Or at least for now, lol. I’m filling in the gaps a lot right now and fixing some stuff up.

@aranel

Yay, we have another Sara(h)!

But you spell your name wrong, lol. The correct way to spell it is actually Sara. haha!

(If you couldn’t tell, I am joking. Obviously, there’s no right or wrong way to spell it. I probably just ruined my own joke, but I can’t risk offending people on KP. I want to be friends with everyone, lol)

I’m going…[Read more]

@grcr

Yeah….

I’m glad I changed it.

@spinner4him

Here’s the link to my WIP.

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

If you have any critiques, please reply to this thread and tag me! Thanks for being interested in this! 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think I’ve fixed most of the problems we’ve discussed? Anything I need to work on in the “new” chapters?

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay guys, so since Hugo and Ottoline are kind of a thing, I realized that they have a pretty big age gap. Hugo’s 16, and Ottoline’s only 13! I’m not a fan of age gaps like this during teen romance, so I’m moving Ottoline’s age up to 14/15 so it’s not as weird.

Ottoline

“Well, I…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Okay! Great! I’ll tag you in the thread.

@acancello

HE KISSED HER!!! OH MY GOSH!!!!!! 😍 😂 🤣

THAT IS SOOOOO SWEET!!!!!

@rae

Yes, he’s in a ball whenever he joins. When he joins, the ball will have already begun, so he’ll probably have to get changed and get a mask from the basement (unless he always wears a suit and tie, flats and a mask on regular occasions)

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

Heres a short one that might get the party started!

Hugo

Hugo waited on the couch for Ottoline to get ready, he could only imagine how she looked with makeup on. He had a nice chat with Amir, Lane and David who were already dressed up in suits like…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I will see if I can write one today or tomorrow! Also, I am sure that Hugo will dance with Ottoline, but group dances would be fun! Maybe some boys should bring dates since we hardly have any girls? Or do you think that would be to crazy? (Sorry if someone already asked that!) 😀

@trailblazer

That’s funny! haha

@grcr

Okay!

@grcr

I’m pretty sure that the house only said that they had to participate in the party itself (I just looked back and read it), not that everybody had to dance. So this might work.

Everybody has to wear a mask and dress up, I’m assuming.

Except now we have to decide which boys are going to sit in the corner and which ones are going to dance.

@spinner4him

I got that notification, but then the page didn’t come up! Yeah, Kathleen should be able to help. KP goes through a lot of different glitches, so I wouldn’t worry about it too much.

Have you tried it again since then?

@thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin

Here’s where my problem lies: I need to show small details (a well outside the city, the slums, different districts, etc.) but drawing each individual building and block and street is IMPOSSIBLE since it’s a huge city! So what do you guys think I should do?

Should I omit these details altogether or is there a way…[Read more]

@grcr @trailblazer

I think we should have a small group of “annoying” guys that eat food and do “stupid” and funny stuff in the corner, lol. Then we still have some guys sharing the girls, but it’s not like a 10 to 2 ratio, and there’s still dancing.

What do you think?

@rae

So basically this is a hidden cabin in the woods,  and these characters all show up and nobody knows who owns it. The door locks by itself  so they’re forced to stay with each other. Hugo and Ottoline (two characters) share their past and fall in love (lol) and then the house forces them to do a series of activities. One of which is a m…[Read more]