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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 1 day ago
like the oldest is usually more protected and stuff but also has more strict rules
Honestly yeah…hahaha
and that is like the most amazing illustration I’ve heard in forever, like how did I never notice that verse???
that’s so beautiful!!
Aw yessss Jesus is so cool!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I knowww!
I kind of already knew He was technically our brother, but part of me wasn’t sure if He wanted us to consider Him as an older brother…idk, I wasn’t sure if it was respectful or not.
And then one day I found that verse in Hebrews and I was like
WHAAAAAA?!?!?
And everything made sense lol!
Like Jesus loves us so…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 2 days ago
if you don’t mind me asking, what’s it like being the oldest? Like I see everywhere that being the oldest sister is like a ton of work and by the end you have mental health issues and then struggle for the rest of your life but I mean you published a book so clearly you’re proving them wrong
in fact most of the people I know who have…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper Lol! 😂
@koshka @whaley @godlyfantasy12 I should be on there also as hybridlore, but we shall see on Monday. 🤷♀️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Oh yayyy a purple heart!!!
(purple’s my favorite color lol!)
Awww I’m always here for you <3
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Hey, girl! It’s Crazy Writing Week, and you’re just in time! I believe it starts on the sixth. 😊
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Awwww Chase <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Awww!
Oooohhh I love long books lol…whenever I read a super long book I feel so powerful lollll XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I understand taking a break, I had to do the same thing with my novel!
You take as long as you need, girly <3
I’d love the link if you’re okay with sharing it!!!!!!
Just know that even though sometimes it feels really overwhelming and like some days you can’t bring yourself to write a single word, you’re still a very talented and capable…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Oh, ok, lol! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Well. I just scrolled through like, ten pages of this to count my snowballs. I think there was eight. I will be writing them up and posting them later.
Sorry I haven’t responded to your KP fanfic sections. It’s about to get interesting, tag me when you finish the next one!
@theducktator Your signature isn’t from Of Fire and Ash, is it?…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!
I know. I was so mad.
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the B…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
THEOLOGY/MESSAGE
~ Any theological concerns for the story?
I don’t think so.
~ What would you say my world view was?
Christian? XD. (Again, I don’t really know what kind of answer you want here.)
~ What would you say was the message of the story?
God will give us strength when we are weak and help us have the courage to stand up for Him.
~Were…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
STORYLINE
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
I feel like these two kind of go together. The pacing, I felt, was not very consistent. Sometimes we would be skipping over weeks or months, sometimes we would get slow, slice-of-life scenes, and sometimes we…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m flexible, so whenever everyone else is ready to read the next book is fine with me. And is it about Leon and Julian?
K, here’s the characters section.
CHARACTERS~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Joseph, because he’s the main. 🤪 But no, really, we got to see all his inner…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I WAS LITERALLY ON THE ILLUSTRATION QUESTION 😣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I was so, so close to finishing your questions, and then a bee came over by me, and I picked up my laptop and ran away (lol.)
But then I accidentally hit the screen somehow and I CLOSED THE LINK!!!
Augggghhhh. I cannot believe that just happened. Now I have to write them all out AGAIN. So this might take a while.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
AHHH ELLETTE YOU SAVED THEM!!!
AND IT’S DONE!! CONGRATULATIONS!! (I know this is a later draft, but still xD)
Biggest thing I noticed, is that, in the end where Joseph and Amelia are talking, some of the things that they say, “I’m so glad that… etc.” seemed a little bit like info-dumping. It’s good for us to have all that in…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Sorry, didn’t get tagged! 😒
That does sound like fun! We always stay up till midnight too—last night we had a bunch of neighbor kids over, so we watched some YouTube videos and then played some games until midnight. I don’t think I’ve made any resolutions… but we’ll see, there’s still time.
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