Raegan Aubrey

@freedomwriter76

You still haven’t answered my question about Germans.

I almost cried at Hans story. I already love him!!! By the way, my great grandfather was named Hans Ulrich Eisele so the name hits close to home. He also was a soldier in WW2.

Thanks for the rundown! Now in return, I shall tell you about the biggest Realn Antag in all of…[Read more]

@aranel

I pronouce genre as GEN-ear and puree as PUR-ee. I do pronounce caramel correctly though! Which is odd considering me. I also have some kind of accent that my best friend notified me of this week. She has no idea what it is though.

Have you read C. S. Lewis’s Space Trilogy?

Yes, though not the last one all the way through…he lost me o…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @grcr

Here’s my newest board!

@acancello

Lol! Maybe you should try going to events in your town with your family? Or like I said above, events with friends? Oh! Having a party for no reason at all is also fun!

I’m not trying to push you to do anything you dont want though😊 I just hope you get to meet some real good friends💗 💕 🤗

The problem is…I don’t have very many good f…[Read more]

@rae

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in some places, it just gets annoying and interrupts a read.

Okay, got it! I agree I definitely overused those in this segment.

@whalekeeper

Also about the critique on…

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@freedomwriter76

👍.

@freedomwriter76

Yes, it would help to have the reference pics… I’ve never actually drawn this type of person before. Thanks!

Oh and it could be a week before I have the drawing cuz I’m not the type to sit down and start and finish a drawing all in one day, I take my time and frequently like to return with new eyes to look at it.

@savannah_garce2009

All I have to say is it’s good and I want you to read the article below, especially number 2.

https://storyembers.org/5-stylistic-choices-you-need-to-stop-making/

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in…[Read more]

@rae @mineralizedwritings @esther-c

Here’s a new scene I’m working on. Thoughts? Concerns?

She ran across the prairie. She didn’t know where she was going, and she didn’t care. Running helped her to forget…to forget last night, and all the other nights like it.

“Scream all you want…ain’t nobody gonna here you…” she could still feel the welts…

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@rae

Yep!

@acancello

Heyyy!

Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyon…

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@jonas

all this is hurting my brain!!! 😂 🤣 It’s been a long day…

So why did the Pythonos name it the UNIT? (In this case you might want to make it ‘Unit’ in lowercase, because capitalization usually denotes an acronym.)

Otherwise, you could make it an acronym. I could help brainstorm ideas for that if you like.

Any help would be great. I’m a h…[Read more]

So we’re going with second idea, just the Queen uses the magical house all our characters are locked inside to get to Lillen?

@thearcaneaxiom

Sorry😅 I know how frustrating it can be when you see your brain child measured and prodded as if it were in the UNIT🤣 Your taking it really well though, and even with excitement, so that’s a really good mentality. Your showing wonderful meekness in that way, being open to learning and changing for the better. I would say that y…

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@loopylin

Now the question is, at what point do like Nahim that if he died, would you feel any emotion for him?

And I hope you don’t mind this question, but do have a hard time separating the words Alin and Akin? Do they look exactly the same to you?

Thanks for suggestions! I love suggestions, they always teach me something. 😃.

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@power

Believe it or not, every one of your posts make me laugh. It would be interesting to meet you in person one day, that conversation could go really good or really bad fast.

I apprieciate your comment very much. I shall be changing that. In fact, I’ve been doing a re-work of chapter one and shall post it here when I’m done.

@grcr

Yeah…

@grcr

But…we kind of need everyone’s approval, like Min and Trailblazer and Acancello…speaking of Acancello, she hasn’t been on in a while. Should we wait?? or should we just go for it, lol

@esther-c

Oh and if you want to know spoilers, I will gladly indulge. XD Plus, Amir has a love interest if anyone wants to hear about that… 🥰

Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?