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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
You captured it!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Nahim breathed deeply. In the corner there was the girl who had tried to kill the Queen. ‘She would side with us, right?’ He walked up to her, and smiled under his helmet (like she would be able to see that 🙄) and said to her in a kind voice,
“Hello, My name is Lord Nahim.”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Probably? Just don’t expect her to be totally comfortable XD
Any men with weapons scare her, unless she trusts them completely (obviously). But she’ll probably realize soon that no one’s going to hurt her.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Would it be okay if Nahim approached her?
Yeah, Nahim and Ellis do frighten her. Poor girl.
Though, I’m very pleased that Nahim got along so well with Ellis, that rolled along nicely. 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Though, she’d probably also want to help since she hates the queen.
From Ellis’s perspective, that’s what it was, basically. He could tell that she was scared of him at first, but he has no idea why. If he knew what she had been thinking, he might be a bit more sympathetic, or he might just be annoyed that she assumed bad things about him…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
She would probably be really scared of him still, until he proves himself to be trustworthy. With being kidnapped and all, she doesn’t feel safe.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
How would Ottoline react to Nahim now? I know she was terrified of him before, has anything changed?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I mean, technically Ottoline didn’t scorn/belittle him, she was just having a panic attack because she’s been hurt before. She wasn’t mad, she was just afraid of him. (I know it’s probably just how Ellis thinks, I just think it’s funny that he feels that way.) Also, Ottoline kind of does care, she already tried to fight the queen….so….
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
“Zahlin would help, I have no doubt. Why don’t you turn the the guy on your left, and ask him? He at least has a quiver of arrows.” Nahim stood up. “I will look abroad. I’ll meet you a little later, so long.” Nahim turned, wondering who he should approach.
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Ruth replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Signed,
An eager me
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Ruth replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
The Wanderer and the Wayward
The Mafia of Heather Flights
If you ever publish these two books, YOU MUST TAG ME!!!!!! I would read these.
Jacobson’s
So, If I just picked this book up at the library and read the back cover, I honestly most likely wouldn’t read it. It’s mysterious and I like those types of books sometimes, bu…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oof, Nahim’s words are getting harsh!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Ellis muttered to Nahim in response, “I’ve been trying to help them, but none of them care. I can’t protect them if they won’t even let me help them.”
Nahim looked at him through his visor, shocked. He never had thought about it, but Ellis was right.
“I can’t let them die. My entire family gave their lives for people like them…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I found an obituary column for my great grandfather and great grandmother! That’s two steps closer to him than I’ve gotten in probably years! Now I just have to track his life down bit by bit, I am exited!
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Ruth replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m open.
I’m a curious type of girl (hence the looking through old old posts and looking at people’s profiles) I like to here about stuff other people write and seeing if it would be a book I would read (I’m very picky about books, if they don’t grab me and pull me in, they aren’t going to be finished) plus, I love meeting…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Nahim stared after Zahlin as he put his helmet back on, he didn’t need any of thses most likely screemish (I cannot spell that word!) People of Lillen seeing his face. Ellis trudged back to the dining hall, a bad mood forming over his face. Nahim debated following Zahlin, but Zahlin’s quest was basically…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Well, I got to go get ready for school. Bye guys!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Montana is the coldest state except Alaska, right? We have had pretty warm winters the last few years (sadly) so I find it odd that there’s such a difference between Wisconsin and Montana. Montana isn’t too much farther North.
I don’t know if it’s the coldest or not, but probably? Cut Bank, a town in Montana has the record for coldest spo…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I get that. When it goes from 40 to 80 to 60 it’s kind of annoying, it did that here too. I love fall, so I wish we could get 40-50 degree temps for a while and enjoy fall before snow. Because when the snow melts, all the leaves will be gone and it will be a muddy mess.
Hopefully the snow doesn’t last long! I’m ready for it to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Well….usually Montana winters are really harsh. The winds are terrible, blowing about 30 miles per hour making about 4 foot drifts in our yard. And when you have to go 25 on the highway, it’s just kind of ridiculous.
I mean, the snows pretty and I like snow, just right now it’s a lot and really, really cold. Though I suppose I should be…[Read more]
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